Diss To Lexikon
 

DISS TO LEXIKON

You just a sad misled fake with a bad headache like boxers
After a fight you can’t master write face a knock you out
With this block clout a lightweight can’t type straight no doubt
For you to rhyme its action at law no satisfaction all flaw
Your girl became a fatal attraction when I hit the draws raw
Girl juice flow in spurts you know it hurt to find out the truth
Your bed fine like red wine anyway it happened under your roof
Best think in order then drink some water and cool off get proof
Before stepping to this, try to have a different character and be
Magnificent in America or your jewels a get rocked G
Look you mixed tape has a fixed shape and the junk don’t sell
The funk won’t swell on the beat so yo chumps don’t excel
Hell you fell like Humpty Dumpty just an egg head failure
With paraphernalia

pathetic little kid you'll write this crap but you won't battle me its ok to be scared we both know I'm better you unspokenly admit it by not opening my PM or answering to my call out haha redeam yourself battle me unless you truly are scared...

[QUOTE=lumberjack]DISS TO LEXIKON

You just a sad misled fake with a bad headache like boxers
After a fight you can’t master write face a knock you out
...in the first line,so what if he's got a bad headache?How is it an insult to say someone has a headache?
With this block clout a lightweight can’t type straight no doubt
For you to rhyme its action at law no satisfaction all flaw
...Block clout?Makes no sense.
Your girl became a fatal attraction when I hit the draws raw
Girl juice flow in spurts you know it hurt to find out the truth
...Hmm,this was decent.IT's just you should have said something else instead of "she became a fatal attraction".
Your bed fine like red wine anyway it happened under your roof
Best think in order then drink some water and cool off get proof
..No diss.And wtf u compliment his bed in a verse for..?
Before stepping to this, try to have a different character and be
Magnificent in America or your jewels a get rocked G
...Good
Look you mixed tape has a fixed shape and the junk don’t sell
The funk won’t swell on the beat so yo chumps don’t excel
...Focused too much on rhyming,ended up sounding weird.
Hell you fell like Humpty Dumpty just an egg head failure
With paraphernalia
..Humpty Dumpty?...:bored:

Ok,your problem,as always..is focusing too much on rhyming.Making your shit sound werid...

Stuff Was Right In The Bread Basket And Very Drastic At That

come on people I'm uppin this cuzx this was pathetic haha whack ass KID battle me

One Damn Answer Right Here Ole Boy Got Schooled

Ok this was wack Close this somebody! :banghead:

Dopium WHO THE FUCK IS THIS TALKING STUPID AN HADN'T DROPPED A VERSE DAMN WHACK CLOWN PLEASE GO JACK OFF SOMEWHERE SON

hmm.. i failed to see how this rhymed?

wow! lots of cats into hip Hop that shouldn't be wouldn't know rhyme if one fell on their head

and still he wont battle me LUMBERJACK GO PEEP THE DISSTRACK I MADE ABOUT YOU CLICK ON MY SOUNDCLICK YOU DUMBFUCK

Lumberjack you garbage dogg just face it and take it like a man and leave this site.

Frank White bet your whack ass can't tell me why its whack

lmaoo dis was super wack

Anytime you wanna battle pussy nigga, set that shit up.

kid your rhyming was wack on this. your disses, weren't hitting anyone, and your whole shot at lexi.....was gone with the wind. up your shit then diss peeps

Shit Off The Hook Dude

its makes no sense, learn to make sense,then focus on rhyming.

cats talk but can't top this rhyming of superior quality hell yall go to school please

lol, hey let's battle homie, see if you can top my shit, since you talk big

dont waste your time he specializes in ducking i called him out like a month ago he's to pussy

lol , he's faggot........fag, fag, fag, fag, fag! *The Crowd Goes Wild While Yellin It Out Loud*

thais cat make and audio and still got nuked that's a new level all together

lumberjack you suck dont deny it if you actually had confidence and thought you were good you'd battle me

hel just proved that when i whopp your ass come on smell the coffee it boiling

OK i'm gonna up the stakes on this battle if you win you can have all of my RV money but if you cheat to get votes you will get banned

This was kinda wack, to be honest. U had a lot of played rhymes, some basic shit. I didnt see anythin innovative in there. U should work on ur metaphors and punches so that u can construct creative and productive wordplay, cause thats what makes diss tracks hot. Also, try to make ur structure balance ur verse, so that ur lines coincide with each other well. It will enable u to utilize punches easier. Keep workin

~ UD

none of these rhymes are played come on underdog you a whack fuck to even say that plus you haven't posted shit let me see what your talk too much ass got and don't bite off my shit come with your own shit like I did son

U dumb or just blind? Look at ur rhymes.. they were cool in the 90's.. now they're not...

Examples: "...knock you out... no doubt...", "...truth... roof... proof...", "be.. G" lmfao son u wack



Im waitin to drop until I can provide links to my feedback... read the rules of this shit mothafucka



lol.. i been rappin for a long time.. have no need to bite

I'll drop somethin soon and rip u apart, so hold onto ur panties until then, wack fool

~ UD

talk talk talk no you whack fucker these are not new words but rhyme different than anyone else can your whack ass still don't get it all the damn words are in the fucking dictionary so what you're saying is that you whack below average ass is coming out with something not in the dictionary HA! HA1 HA! HA!

lol

Just cause they're real words dont make them "new for rhymes", dumb motherfucker every single rapper alive has rhymed Be with G, doubt with out, etc. U fuckin suck, u needle dick dork. Go read a book and learn somethin. U should try actually listening to rap too.

I agree with Underdogg

your more played than frogger at the penny arcade
your mind couldn't be bright if i smeared it on a lampshade

that bar just owned your whole diss

wow these are really some under class no rapping ass holes ready to bite my rhyme hey yall whack fucks go suck your own dick until you can post something

Answer why you wont battle me? You have 118 posts and no battles of any kind seriously why are you on RV?

Whack Fuck Don't Have To Battle In Order To Be Good What Comic Book You Came Out Of?

I came straight out off Comic Zone for Sega Genesis
You cut trees for pages I slaughter you on Lex is your nemesis

Killin you again with just one punchline you could never step to me in a battle and you know it so thats why you wont accept