<Everyday> - G Deuce - Solo Track *Hot*
 

Yea, i just now got finished wit this song. Song's titled


Everyday



Verse 1 : Deuce

Chorus : Deuce

Verse 2 : Deuce

Chorus : Deuce

Beat by - Yessurr Productions

Mixing done by - Deuce

I left feedback on Tito's "How you niggas want it, and Paranoid's "Smile for me." Enjoy.

I'm feelin the vibe of this track...real mature style


flow is good...and ur delivery fits the track


if there's any down to it, I'd say throw more surprises in the delivery or rhyming...I guess you don't have to, but it's make it interesting all the way through...At worse, this was consistent...at best, it was nice...so, either way, it's a good track


also...think of ways to distinguish ur hook from ur verse

otherwise...good piece dawg


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thanks man, uppin............................

uppin for mah man







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-listening

Beat is iight flow is pretty good famz i like ya style in beats man lyriks is pretty good ya quality is pretty nice u use cool edit man i need cool edit bad ;'[ but frhyme scheme is good flow is on point no joke dope shit famz i likes

keep this hot shit up famz

~ghost~

rtf on "The Essence Dillusion"

ight, uppin dis...................

listenin i like ure laid back westcoast style..i like yessur productions...im feelin ure lazy laid back flow..reminds me of a dre/snoop mix with loon...i really like it...u ride the beat nicely...i like how the adlibs are panned on both sides...lyrics are nice....beat is hot....yea i agree u shud change the way the hook sounds....try a delay on that...maybe reverb..but watch which 1.......this was a hot track urre presence on the mic is nice..this is a good track 8/10..ayo is it koo if we collab or summin...holla at me...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216885

can u feedback on that thanks.........

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damn man like you told me quality is dope, but man nice beat and shit nice smooth shit, havent heard g deuce on a beat like this before. msot beats you use have a halloween sound to em. but um flow and damn that delivery is perfect man. story is great, I love your lyrics and shit man. you really need to get noticed man. you got talent shit. I hope to collab wit you sometime.

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thanks for the feed........uppin....

dont sleep on this shit.................uppin.

uppin.....................

the beat is dope...flow and delivery fit nicely with the beat...the lyrics were str8...quality was nice...the hook was coo...good show mayne keep it up.

tight.....uppin.........

man...you know where its at duece. i really enjoyed this track. i liked being able to hear you on some shit other than a gangster beat, on a deep level you know. cant wait to here this new one you working on. bout man, i wanna come up and hit up some shit later. ill talk to you about all this later...

ok typing as I listen....whoa u upped ya quality seriously....beat is simplistic but tight...ok so far the first verse is good but repetitve..need to switch up the flow some....delivery is koo intially but is also repetitve...I was starting to lose interest then u was saved by hook coming up...hooks mixing is koo but coulda been alil better...the melody of hook was good but coulda been stronger to be more infectous...ok second verse....again good but u coem back wit the same flow....u are really relying on those dubs to keep ua flow interesting...the delivery coulda had more subtle animation IMO....overall not a bad track, could use sum polishing but beat is strong hook is good enuff so that'd mask alot of the flaws...so you'd be able to get away wit this one but still coulda been better but all in all good shit..keep dropping...1

ight, uppin..............................

uppin for fam













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