MaRVOLOUSJay vs Natural killa
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d.r

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-16-05 at 04:32 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

check da fukk in nigga

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 06:58 PM.

MaRVOLOUSJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 07:01 PM.

wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.
compare 2 me dis guy think's he sicka,vets u beat? i'll say 3 niggaz.
ur a weak spitta...and your losin here i thought u was a G-KiLLa?
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
i see ya bar's are still noobish u need help?..boy holla.
cuzz dogg only time we'll 'hearin ya single' u 'drop'd a coin dollar'.
a hott verse from u i havent seen,fukk ya PLL magazine.
dis 'cross dressin' nigga a get his 'drag' thru 'queens'.

dont gte nothin dont vote!.

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

Natural killa - You had a weak flow, punches where hitten hard and some good connecting multi's.

Best Line - Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis

Worst Line - I'll own you in this,bitch,with shit that'll hurt you,and-
-Get you mad,dog...so you'll remember how he merked your ass

MarvJay - You had a good flow, wordplay was good, punches where hitten hard, good personals.

Best Line - wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.

Worst Line - lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.

OVERALL - This was a close battle, Natural came with some good multi's, ok wordplay, and his punches where hitten. Marv came with a solid flow, and he had good personals, and punches. I give my vote to Marv because he had good wordplay, and better flow and punches. NK your flow was off.

Vote - MaRVOLOUSJay

RTF in SIG on NK Battle!

This was feedback posted for MaRVOLOUSJay
 

Dope battle. Nice on both parts. I cant vote tho. But this was a dope battle.

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Voted For: Natural killa

Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis
I'll tell-ya',bitch..your wack,so bad you outta atone
& You linger in the air..like some cheap-ass colonge

nk also had a personal in his last bar.. it just didn't hit that hard.

uuggg.. marvolous started out with played wordplay.
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
^^^^forced to hell.

marvolous just tries to hard.. he has week concepts and their usually played

v/ nk

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa:

I'll own you in this,bitch,with shit that'll hurt you,and-
-Get you mad,dog...so you'll remember how he merked your ass
^^dope opener 8/10
Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis
^^another dope bar 7/10
Alone,ur toasted,& no one likes you,u must regret u fell in this
Cause your fuckin' rhymes are about as bad..as your spelling is
^^good personal 6/10
I'll tell-ya',bitch..your wack,so bad you outta atone
& You linger in the air..like some cheap-ass colonge
^^no 3/10
Let it be known,it's over,how do you even manage in these times?
I mean,c'mon..you lost to King solo.........three times
^^no 3/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)


MarvJay:


wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.
^^ehh ok opener 6/10
compare 2 me dis guy think's he sicka,vets u beat? i'll say 3 niggaz.
ur a weak spitta...and your losin here i thought u was a G-KiLLa?
^^good multies weak fucking bar 3/10
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
^^ehh ok meta and punch 5/10
i see ya bar's are still noobish u need help?..boy holla.
cuzz dogg only time we'll 'hearin ya single' u 'drop'd a coin dollar'.
^^decent bar 6/10
a hott verse from u i havent seen,fukk ya PLL magazine.
dis 'cross dressin' nigga a get his 'drag' thru 'queens'.
^^ehh 4/10

Overall: 24/50 (48%)


Vote: Natural Killa


Sad battle


Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig

Thx for the vote Flow Intel...

I'll hit ya battle up later today

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

I gotta go with killa here. Not much lyricly on either front. But killa managed to maintain a some what suttle flow. Jay focused too much on wordplay that was way to technical to a point where it wasn't even a verse. My vote. Killa.

But dont worry. I can't vote yet ;)

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Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

this battle was kinda weak.... neither person came wit a dope ass verse but the winner was still clear. I think Natural Killa's verse was kinda elementary. his punches werent very hard hitting, it was just like, weak similes, no serious wordplay.
Marvolous Jay's verse wasnt particularly special himself... i liked his opener, it wasnt very witty but it had the joke packed in that made me laugh. the rest of his verse was kinda iffy, nothing really all that great in there either. I think the punch in Marv's verse won this battle for him
V/ Marv

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

I'll own you in this,bitch,with shit that'll hurt you,and-
-Get you mad,dog...so you'll remember how he merked your ass
^^^Ight personal in the opener
Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis
^^^good
Alone,ur toasted,& no one likes you,u must regret u fell in this
Cause your fuckin' rhymes are about as bad..as your spelling is
^^^weak
I'll tell-ya',bitch..your wack,so bad you outta atone
& You linger in the air..like some cheap-ass colonge
^^^played
Let it be known,it's over,how do you even manage in these times?
I mean,c'mon..you lost to King solo.........three times
^^^Ight closer

wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.
^^^Good opener
compare 2 me dis guy think's he sicka,vets u beat? i'll say 3 niggaz.
ur a weak spitta...and your losin here i thought u was a G-KiLLa?
^^^Lol this was ight
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
^^^Good
i see ya bar's are still noobish u need help?..boy holla.
cuzz dogg only time we'll 'hearin ya single' u 'drop'd a coin dollar'.
^^^Nice
a hott verse from u i havent seen,fukk ya PLL magazine.
dis 'cross dressin' nigga a get his 'drag' thru 'queens'.
^^^Hot closer

V/marv this was a good one both came wit good verses....nk u had some good lines but some played that held ur verse down..no hate..marv u had some consistent punchs that had ggood personals that werent played...u get my vote/Marv.....RTF IN The Sig

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