Wicked One vs Venture
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines...
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

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Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 09:57 PM.

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 09:57 PM.

Poor wicked, kidz an orphon cuz no one cares bout him,
Even BET throw out hiz stuff and turn their back round him.
Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.
Wicked can get the crowd jumping, if ya know wut i mean,
Everything is going fine, until the springs broke on the trampoline.
Therez no chance wicked will come original, his shit is boring,
And i dont need a sign, cuz your name already gives me the warning.
Call him scotch tape, cuz that mixtape never seemed to happen,
Man you get tossed out more than clothes in a hamper.

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any votez yet? god damn. its 10 linez, how long doez it take?

tryin to get some votez still.....................

tryin to get some votez still.....................

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^^ what he said...................................

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god damn, come on people..........................

why do i get 4 votez in one battle, and zero in this one?

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Upppin............................................ .................

god damn, ive been gone for dayz and still no votez.

come on yo!.......................................

Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One:
You should stop rappin, find another way to make your pockets jingle...
Being clumsy in a record store is the only time you'll drop a single...
6/10 - Pretty good bar.
I'm stabbin wit Killa Bee tactics smashin ya wits turnin this pillar of strength into a
gravel pit...
And I'm crowning this case dismissed when my overseeing gavel hits...
2/10 - WHACK!
Battling me with wackness is like dissing B.I.G. at this juncture dead wrong...
But when I deadlifted your mentality I found out u wasn't so headstrong...
3/10 - NO!
And if I'm the wackest Mc here then that would make u the wackest Mc's bitch...
You've only sampled a li'l bit of the chicanery in my vicious spit...
3/10 - stupid.
So I can easily rhyme through your whole rhyme crew...
And put more shells through ur window than a Taco Bell drive thru...
5/10 - ok line.
19/50

You had a good spit, your flow was pretty good, some played lines.


Venture:
Poor wicked, kidz an orphon cuz no one cares bout him,
Even BET throw out hiz stuff and turn their back round him.
3/10 - ok.
Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.
3/10 - ok.
Wicked can get the crowd jumping, if ya know wut i mean,
Everything is going fine, until the springs broke on the trampoline.
5/10 - pretty funny.
Therez no chance wicked will come original, his shit is boring,
And i dont need a sign, cuz your name already gives me the warning.
4/10 - kinda played.
Call him scotch tape, cuz that mixtape never seemed to happen,
Man you get tossed out more than clothes in a hamper.
3/10 - didnt rhyme.
18/50

You spit was ok, your flow was good, and you had a couple good punchlines.


Vote - Wicked One

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more votez would be nice..........................

votez god damn it......................................

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hit thiz up man!....................................

Voted For: Venture

uhmm, so it came down to non played punches for this battle, and although venture came kinda whack, wicked one's punches were just trying hard to rhyme at the end, mixed with played lines....venture, you do show some positives, like, you have creativity going for you, you just need to think of better disses, and wicked, you need to focus on more direct punches, and non-played stuff

so, v/venture, ya'll keep up though

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good shit. ill return that vote later.............

great, both votez got removed......................

uppin for some votez. i will give ya a vote in return.

god damn, come on people..........................

Yep 0-0 Just like i predicted on Page 3...RV's dieing...i swear...

it was 1-1. what happened?........................

god damn, come on people..........................

im 2 lazy to type anythin else from now on.

how hard is it to vote?.................................

god damn, come on people..........................

damn it come on. all my other battlez have like 2 votez a piece.

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Voted For: Wicked One

Vote- Wicked One

I thought Wicked One had cleaner punches, better Multis, neither cat had any personals that I could see...Wicked took wordplay, though it was played, with his last bar i.e. shells/tacobell...Flow was even, both catz had flow in their drops.

what you talking bout man? i had plenty of personalz.

Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.
^^one on hiz name.

Therez no chance wicked will come original, his shit is boring,
And i dont need a sign, cuz your name already gives me the warning.
^^nother on hiz name.

doesnt count the other bar i had but it doesnt look like a personal cuz he changed hiz sig.