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Dickard. 12-14-05 07:45 PM

Fathom This & Devin vs. A'cred & Compose
 


Battles up: Tuesday
Check In: Wednesday
Drop time: Friday

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Topic: Tears of a Soldiers Wife
THERE IS NO LINE LIMIT THIS ROUND.

YOU ARE REQUIRED 1 LINK PER MEMBER ON EACH TEAM TO SHOW YOU VOTED.
FOR EACH LINK YOU LACK, THATS 1 VOTE DQ'D

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Compose 12-14-05 08:17 PM

check................

Po' Wit. 12-14-05 08:46 PM

check but hey mystic MYSTIC MYSTIC

gotta talk to you asap

Indeph 12-15-05 12:43 PM

check.. ...

Spektikul 12-15-05 02:58 PM

GL Bitches. :thumbup:

Method 12-15-05 03:39 PM

Hello. Check.

Mystic, change the name of the thread. I'm taking over for Devin for the rest of the tourney.

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 03:47 PM

^

damn right!

Personify 12-15-05 04:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Suspicious
Hello. Check.

Mystic, change the name of the thread. I'm taking over for Devin for the rest of the tourney.


Is he allowed to do that? I don't really care, just seems kinda unfair to all of us.

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 04:14 PM

i talked to Mystic...

and because faggot ass devin is pulling out...... i needed some1 to help me

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 04:14 PM

or else I would have had to forfeit.... and thats even worse

Indeph 12-15-05 04:18 PM

You forfeiting's okay with me :thumbup:

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 04:45 PM

lol....

doesnt go down like that

Ysdat 12-15-05 06:06 PM

Unsure if thats right, changing partners.

*boots spek out and recruits some random topical greatness from RB* -_-

Method 12-15-05 06:10 PM

I'm not no random topical head man.

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 06:12 PM

nah its legal move poetic.... seeing as though devin wont participate...


I cant just drop put.... im in this to win aswell... plus thats just wack.. some1 has to make acred and crusade actually drop a piece

Indeph 12-15-05 06:14 PM

Lmao.. hey its not our fault. And its crusade and compose. I changed my name.

Compose 12-15-05 06:32 PM

they stopped callin you indeph :(

Po' Wit. 12-15-05 06:35 PM

lol oh..


uh well, Crusade and compose have to drop sometime LOL

















g/l you two... we possibly dropping tonight... we dont know yet

Method 12-15-05 08:28 PM

Tears of a Soldier's Wife

She gave him to her country with a blessing on his head
She found his name this morning in the long list of the dead..


Dinner was set, candles lit and wine glasses filled to the brim..
Expecting him at 5, and at 5:15 a taxi cab pulled in..
Ringing the doorbell, tears in his eyes, stomach weak, he can barely stand..
Grasping tight to a Certificate and a Folded flag in his trembling hand..
Her nerves building up, smile comes about her face and her heart racing fast..
Unaware that the best memories she'll have w/ him, are the ones of the past..
Peering out the hole, her stomach drops as she says "oh no"..
"This cant happen to me, we belong together, he cant go"..
Handing her the envolope, already moist with his tears..
Watching as she reads the scripts to her ultimate fears..
Breaking down, she falls, scuffing her brand new skirt..
Words of support, he wants to help, all that comes out is "I know it hurts"..
Weeping in misery, her beauty fleets as her make-up runs..
Flipping through her photo album, all her desires have come undone..
Reading and rereading the love letters he sent from time to time..
One of her only recollections, she frames it, cherishing its sublime..
Grasping the flag, emotions taking over, now all she has is anger and shame..
Knelt down next to the fire, shredding the letter and tossing it into the flames..
Smothering the candles, putting it out like her future with him..
It all is happening to suddenly, heart break feelings set in..
Gathering sympathy letters in the mail, but she never sends a reply..
She wont hear it, only way to cope is pretending that he never died..
All alone she is left, a new love she is sent out to seek..
But sorrow has ruined her hopes, she chokes up when ever she speaks..
Dreading a day where she only has rememberance to cling to..
No one to cuddle with, and when the cd spins, no one to sing to..



These hearts were woven of human joys, poise, and cares,
The years had inclined them with weaknesses, though dawn was theirs
Washed marvellously with sorrow, rapid clasp, swift to mirth,
And sunset, shattered by death and the colours of the earth
These had seen movement, told to be true and heard music, known
Felt the quick stir of wonder, the beginning; heaven sat alone
Slumber and waking; loved; left with despair gone proudly friended,
Beautiful flowers and grass and love, all this has ended
There are waters blown by dynamic winds, God known as a crafter,
Grasses lit by the rich skies, aesthetic winds caused laughter
Frost, with a gesture, guides the smooth waves that dance,
Unbroken glory, glistening stars gave a gathered radiance
And wandering loveliness, non-appearance, he leaves a white,
A width, a shining peace, under the night..
Scattered souls across the globe, are rotting existence,
though the stench of the deceased, hygene has became resistant
Listen to the derelicts, the broken politic speeches,
read between the lines, you'll see where decievement has became to meet this
We bow and fold our hands, though tainted republicans see this,
only one out of 3 soldiers die with no funeral, a sign of bleakness!
Families become dysfunctional, dismantled, and entangled,
held by a string burning and screams deafening, over a volcano
Sacrificed by fire, a bullet pierces not only his chest,
punctures the heart of his family, just that cant effect the rest
We're ruined, household silent, sitting at a table quiet,
while the President is hiding under his desk, secreting himself from a riot
He's a concealed leader, voters around the world, tear down his throne,
We could reign hell on these mortals, until law is overthrown
And as we sleep in serenity, with thoughts of fulfilled dreams,
Bush smiles with misery......the crescent moon gleams.

Courageous souls willing to stand tall and defend,
while the stare and watch their beloved nation come to an end…


1st Verse - .Fathom This.
2nd Verse - Suspicious

Compose 12-16-05 09:47 PM

well...indeph doesnt want to do this cuz hes become a lazy cunt :cussing: hes doing his own thing or whatever he said fuck it, so whatever.

Po' Wit. 12-16-05 10:15 PM

wtf??
i have respect for you n' all but thats fucking bull shit. He is pussy..

and you can tell him that. I'll tell him that when he comes around........


fuck that yo..

Indeph 12-16-05 10:17 PM

You don't have half a clue of what's happenin with me right now so stfu and stop talking about shit you know nothing about.

Po' Wit. 12-16-05 10:19 PM

hmm.. well, thanks for atleast checking in..

Compose 12-16-05 10:19 PM

jerry, jerry.........

Method 12-17-05 10:56 AM

excuses, excuses.

so how did he find the time to tell us to 'stfu' and to say 'shut up cuz you dont know what im going through'

you know what, i've been on this site for 2 weeks, and i already see a bunch of big headed faggots like our opponents. s'funny cuz this is the only time someone actually dropped something, and you whores cant even match it.

Compose 12-17-05 11:25 AM

lol I was ready to do this, I kept tellin indeph a shitload of times and he didnt wanna do it, aint my fault.

Po' Wit. 12-17-05 01:11 PM

word...... its just gay because we were ready for a good match and shit... because we didnt know what ya'll were capable of. And, well, I guess it remains to be found out.

off to the championship we go then...........

Dickard. 12-17-05 09:16 PM

compose n a'cred are dope, ive seen there shit.


Fathom This & Suspicious beat Crusade. & Compose.


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