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Me Againist Everyone Ft.UNF
www.soundclick.com/madknight
1st verse : Me Hook : UNF 2nd : Me Intro and Outro : Me My Best Yet! The Title Really Almost Describes The Track!!!! :thumbup: |
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Beats ill as fuck.
Decent when you kick in..you mad improved, hook works well, your flow was decent, accents clear. Defo your best, didnt hear all of it, decent though mate, rtf when i post mine up. |
Thx For Feed
Mad Ima Give Some Feed Deliverys Koo Emtoions Good I Like Your Lyrics Love The Hook ;) Lol Presence Is Nice You Sound Confident Now Before YOu Didnt Good Track Man:) |
Yo, lol at the sample at the beginning.....
Hahaha, almost forgot you was from UK. Ight MK comes in, work on your delievery is very simple, which makes your rhyming very simple. Overall, ok verse, but could have been a lot better. Just need practice. Also, up your quality, cause there's too much echo, it needs to sound more natural. Hook is ok, but doesnt have a good transition from verse to chorus. sounds like you need to turn vocals up. Ight, next verse. Pretty simple, same as first. Just need to up your delievery and your rhyme scheme, because its very, very simple. Overall, decent track. 7/10 |
listenin ure accent is weird lol...but thas u..and its good u not tryna put on a voice...vocals too loud..u gotta write to the beat completely..cos ure writin and stop and rappin..but good for one of ure first tracks...quality is not bad....its kl..hook its kl...vocals gone low levels in contrast makes bad efeect...flow is acceptable mad..turn the levels down like 5 noches...lyrics are kl...but thas bout it..presence on the mic is ok..delivery isactually good..this was aiite keep up
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beat: decent
Madknight: good articulation of ur words... Delivery fit the tone of the track = good flow was ok..lyrics...from what I heard ok Hook...sounded noisy...tough to make out what was said...but fit the tone of the track not a bad joint...good delivery in it |
thanx for all the feed.....*things how decent it is*
best feeds ive ever got uppin |
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Done Daubs Mate:D |
lil better I suppose, quality is horrible though. lyrics are decent. some of your words weren't pronounced right I suggest you focuss on that, gettin the words right. the hook ima barley gonna say anything cuz I cant understand it. 2nd verse is alright not much different from the 1st.
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Lyrics are ok, but your flow is just ... ... ... and kinda gets boring. Your quality is much better and your delivery sounds strong. You've got the, BRING IT ON MOTHERFUCKER! sound. Good job. Overall, just work on a smoother flow. |
listenin...the beat is decent i'd love ta spit to that shit...ahhhh an uk accent...i think i gotta get out the band aids cuz my ears is bleeding from it..lol but i aint gon try ta rip on ur accent cuz i know that ur stuck wit the accent u have and i aint tryin ta judge hip hop by how u talk...im lovin the hook..the hook is defitnly dope...ur qualitys decent it aint no studio but it aint nuthin like my old piece of shit mic niether...the flows on point....not too bad just work on a speakin a lil more clearer cuz it a lil hard ta understand wit ur accent once again i aint tryin ta rip on ur accent...ur delivery is dope u defitnly confident u dont start ta shake when ur on the mic so thats defitnly a good thang...like i said just try ta speak a lil more clear and you'll be fine...holla back at one of my later drops i'll probably drop sumthin tomorrow night or sumthin..RTF then...pc
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prettyy dope in my opinion...MK one of the dopest cats out the UK...period...in my opinion at least...quality not that bad hook is pretty good...lyrics are simple but so is the delivery so it makes it sound better...flow is a lot better...i hate when people talk bout the UK accent...its not that hard to understand...all you really gotta do is listen...MK when you get a better mic people will understand you better...its just it sound kinda muffled naaah meaansss...but yeah definitely good track...so keep it up hoe :thumbup:
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word dawg thanx loads for that Zero LMAO:D |
typing as I listen....not feeling intro the "hahaha" is jus corny...quality needs work....first verse...opens wit good energy but it starts to whine down as it goes on..an the flow is repetitve...need to change hook....lyrics wasn't decent....hook is decent...it was mixed poorly...cant make out words...ok 2nd verse opens wit good energy again....but it lacks emotion...ya jus yelling instead of conveying a real emotion....need to work on effectively using influctions....flow on this verse was same as first...def showing great improvement...keep dropping man....1
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thanx for the help trip:D
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Hahaha...hmmm it gets annoying after while lmao...sowwy cutie...
Aight, you come in strong but try to keep it up throughout the entire verse ya feel. Lyrics be cool, I like the concept haha. Can up the rhyme scheme, throw more similar sounds n multis in there to make it smoother and more complex ya feel. I can understand everything now actually...but quality needs work...cannot wait till you get em new mic... Hook is a nice add-on but I couldn't always understand it because beat was coming up louder than his vocals. Second verse, basically same as first...gotta get that strong delivery throughout entire verse because in beginning you always like BLAOW but then it wears off ya know...Flow be on point, you definitely improving there... Just try something different with your rhyme scheme, throw some attention grabbers in there, keep that emotion strong throughout entire verse...but you improving like whoa...keep it up...real feed, no hate but you know that already :thumbup: Collab? Soon...without a doubt... |
Takes me a sec to get used to the accent... If you listen to how RZA ripped that beat, he was kind of rhyming outside of bars, thats why its so slow and gloomy when you try to rap normally on it and that is why you prolly felt like you were dragging on while rapping that...
Prolly a bad beat choice for the flow you chose... I think on ya next track, you should aim for a faster flow, go hard out on the multis and try to clean up your production a bit.. At times ya mic sounded like a telephone... But yeah, thats my 2 cents..... |
Like the intro. Spitting is solid and raw. usually the english accent stears me away from the track, but i liked this flow. hook is solid aswell.
nice track. |
listening...
flow is on beat...try not taking so many pauses is the only complaint i have there... delivery is definitely getting better...your spitting with a lot more emotion and your delivery is a lot more exciting... hook is ok.... 2nd verse is better as far as the pauses.... id say get a new mic man...your getting a lot better quickly.....if your quality was better...itd only make it that much better.... work on those pauses.....and other than that your doing well.... |
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