22. Daubs vs. 43. ThatNigga
 

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Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

Check .

LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
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problem child suits cool, cant denie it, your lovin' queers
cos theres a problem when your TEETH are bigger than your EARS
fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!
top of ya game, certificates and glory..stop actin dopey
since when did chess games even start providing trophys?!
Fuck what you heard, you aint pro, your fakin your dreams
Cause simeon says..
take the fuckin shirt off, your a disgrace to the team!





Quick 10 pic plays. Should be enough.

DAUBS.....I hope your talented, cuz you cant get by on ya looks
nobodys gonna take you seriously as a rapper...you look like fake ass garth brooks
come on danny, get a new hobby, this just isnt working out to well
your as gangsta as elton john cumin straight outta jail
fuck outta here, go back to councilin fa chronic masturebation
witcha e-thug ass, still can't get tipsy wit fake identification
you what 18, yet you still gettin murked by a minor....how pathetic
ill call you BUFU, cuz we all know ya whole style is generic
fuck the votes just eliminate this nigga now...its a waste of time
call me Shang Tsung, cuz i just finished him HIS SOUL IS MINE!


dopenes..................................

Daubz.. what you were saying was weakened by your wording. You had potential but I really wasn't feeling much of what you were saying.

LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
News Just In: DISNEY FOUND A BLACK VERSION OFF BUGGS BUNNY
problem child suits cool, cant denie it, your lovin' queers
cos theres a problem when your TEETH are bigger than your EARS

The top 2 were too simple. You needed to hit harder. As for the second bar that was weak as his teeth are barely visible. You picked the right way of attack but used it badly.

fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!
Like this .. I really didn't find it good but you were going the right way about the diss.

top of ya game, certificates and glory..stop actin dopey
since when did chess games even start providing trophys?!
Kind of OK

Fuck what you heard, you aint pro, your fakin your dreams
Cause simeon says..
take the fuckin shirt off, your a disgrace to the team!
OK

As for Young.. man I thought you were gonna have some witty stuff as your opener made me chuckle:

DAUBS.....I hope your talented, cuz you cant get by on ya looks
nobodys gonna take you seriously as a rapper...you look like fake ass garth brooks

but then you started to bore me with stuff such as:
fuck the votes just eliminate this nigga now...its a waste of time
call me Shang Tsung, cuz i just finished him HIS SOUL IS MINE!

V/ Daubz.

fuck outta here, go back to councilin fa chronic masturebation
witcha e-thug ass, still can't get tipsy wit fake identification
you what 18, yet you still gettin murked by a minor....how pathetic
ill call you BUFU, cuz we all know ya whole style is generic

Just weak personals.

& I thought this was way too simple:

thanx fa votin, :thumbup: and thanx fa bein honest, ima work on dat

both had sum weak shit, both had sum good shit. id say this wuz close. but dam, thatgarth brooks line, wen i 1stsaw tha pic i wuz like "bwahahah, y tha fucks daubs wearin a cowboy hat???" lol, i thought it wuz him. then i read that n lmao, so i gotta go wif young law. sum of daubs lines i just didnt git, like

fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!

lol, u could chew on 50 pounds of cow fat n not gain any weight, lol

n law

come on danny, get a new hobby, this just isnt working out to well
your as gangsta as elton john cumin straight outta jail

try not 2 use cum/come jokes, ppl will hate on that cuz its bin done so much b4

V/Young Law

close 1 tho, werd

duelly noted.........................................

Daubs....
LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
News Just In: DISNEY FOUND A BLACK VERSION OFF BUGGS BUNNY
Gay.....

problem child suits cool, cant denie it, your lovin' queers
cos theres a problem when your TEETH are bigger than your EARS
ehh...

fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!
ok....

top of ya game, certificates and glory..stop actin dopey
since when did chess games even start providing trophys?!
i have no clue why...but i kinda laughed...

Fuck what you heard, you aint pro, your fakin your dreams
Cause simeon says..
take the fuckin shirt off, your a disgrace to the team!
decent...


Law....
DAUBS.....I hope your talented, cuz you cant get by on ya looks
nobodys gonna take you seriously as a rapper...you look like fake ass garth brooks
concept ok...wording....shitty...

come on danny, get a new hobby, this just isnt working out to well
your as gangsta as elton john cumin straight outta jail
Cum joke? in KORV 3? wow...

fuck outta here, go back to councilin fa chronic masturebation
witcha e-thug ass, still can't get tipsy wit fake identification
ehh..ok personal...

you what 18, yet you still gettin murked by a minor....how pathetic
ill call you BUFU, cuz we all know ya whole style is generic
ok...

fuck the votes just eliminate this nigga now...its a waste of time
call me Shang Tsung, cuz i just finished him HIS SOUL IS MINE!
wtf...yes i get it...but umm this really isnt a great closer at all..



honestly....

this battle was shitty...i dunno if either one of u actually tried...but...ok...

Daubs wins...cause more personals...better worded...i think law had a couple better concepts....if he would have only worded them better they could have been dope....but just didnt turn out that way...

v/ daubs


and no...there was no hate in this...i dont care about that anymore

safe.

Of course i came weak though...
Its the 1st round..your supposed too!

Daubs

LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
News Just In: DISNEY FOUND A BLACK VERSION OFF BUGGS BUNNY
Nah wording was shit
problem child suits cool, cant denie it, your lovin' queers
cos theres a problem when your TEETH are bigger than your EARS
As itself it was decent, but he doesn't have very big teeth to be honest
fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!
This could have been dope, racist as it is but your wording wasn't that good
top of ya game, certificates and glory..stop actin dopey
since when did chess games even start providing trophys?!
Ok I guess
Fuck what you heard, you aint pro, your fakin your dreams
Cause simeon says..
take the fuckin shirt off, your a disgrace to the team!
Probably your best line, this was good
Young Law

DAUBS.....I hope your talented, cuz you cant get by on ya looks
nobodys gonna take you seriously as a rapper...you look like fake ass garth brooks
Horrible wording, avoid statement punches and put some wit into it
come on danny, get a new hobby, this just isnt working out to well
your as gangsta as elton john cumin straight outta jail
This was absolutely horrible
fuck outta here, go back to councilin fa chronic masturebation
witcha e-thug ass, still can't get tipsy wit fake identification
Wack
you what 18, yet you still gettin murked by a minor....how pathetic
ill call you BUFU, cuz we all know ya whole style is generic
No this sucked
fuck the votes just eliminate this nigga now...its a waste of time
call me Shang Tsung, cuz i just finished him HIS SOUL IS MINE!
I laughed long and hard at how gay and corny this was

Basically Daubs beat him with absolutely ease, he needs to work on his wording loads though. Some of his concepts were pretty good, but he had the picture and could have WHORED young law. Ages ago in the sick scriptz tournament I had some fag who looked exactly like Young Law and he was being a dick calling me white ghost so I whored him on his pic.

Fuck your white disses, nigger you ain't causing any harm
Cause you come softer than the cotton your ancestors picked off my farm
I'll break your wog face and arm, lawd knows you can't handle me
When I beat you with the same bars my grandad used to enslave your family
There's no rain in Africa, not even drzzles or drips
But if I ever need an umbrella here... I'll just crouch down under your lips
So all hail the Klan, I'll bring the boys down to murder you
And word they invented white chocolate... so your babies could get dirty too

See that's how to whore someone who looks like Young Law.

V/ Daubs

hmmmmm........okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

v/young law........................

both came corny as hell, but i wasnt feelin how Daubs did all Pic wordplays...... they get kinda boring, and i never really liked wordplays on pics.... i mean, 1 or 2 is good if theyre real dope, but u filled a WHOLE verse with "meh" picplays...... not alotta wit in this battle, but Young Law atleast had alot more wordplay... Daubs was just sayin "u have big teeth" and "u look like buz bunny" etc..... TN had a pic play, too, but he didnt have awhole verse, and his first line was just hillarious cuz its true

if TN makes it to the next round, i dont think theres anyway he will win again unless he picks it up ALOT, but he came alil better in this battle

i think TN got this battle... not dr or nothin, just truth
his shit was kinda funny. i was crackin up at tha BUFU line. the pic lines in this battle werent enough to win it. you cant just make the WHOLE verse offa somebody's pics...
i honestly think that bufu line won the battle because neither verse really had anything special...

oh yeah, Vote
Young Law... YL= TN

I know my verse was bad, as i said it was keyed..but im sure i still got it.

Watch it son, anymore of that could be considered swaying.

uppin this .

LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
News Just In: DISNEY FOUND A BLACK VERSION OFF BUGGS BUNNY
fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!

vs

alot of badly worded shit.

Sorry, but daubs got this pretty easily.

so
V/Daubs

this could DEF. go either way

Yeah but only cause herbs are voting for That Nigga,

exactly .

ehhh, i actually laughed @ a few of daubs lines they were pretty comical.. but WTF @ ThatNigga acting like he' a genius? then coming with these wack ass elementary lines.. no offense man.. but u gotta come alittle wittier, and DISS ur opponent.. like.. what was ur closer?? ehh theres alot u could work on.. but just getting the basic grasp of punchlines would be nice... v. daubs

Daubs
LOL, il murder your looks, but they already look so funny
News Just In: DISNEY FOUND A BLACK VERSION OFF BUGGS BUNNY
Nah. Not working.
problem child suits cool, cant denie it, your lovin' queers
cos theres a problem when your TEETH are bigger than your EARS
Poorly worded, and a gay set up? Come on Daubs.
fuck chocolate and dairy, you need to diet you whored bitch
cause your putting on weight...by just chewing your lips!
Haha, this was decent.
top of ya game, certificates and glory..stop actin dopey
since when did chess games even start providing trophys?!
They always have. Bad punch and probably fake personal.
Fuck what you heard, you aint pro, your fakin your dreams
Cause simeon says..
take the fuckin shirt off, your a disgrace to the team!
Best line, ok play of his shirt, poor wording.

Your verse was kind of a disappointment. Usually you have very funny punchlines, but you only had one. Work on actually trying next time.

Young Law
DAUBS.....I hope your talented, cuz you cant get by on ya looks
nobodys gonna take you seriously as a rapper...you look like fake ass garth brooks
Could have hit much harder, but your wording absolutely killed it. 'How are we supposed to take you seriously rapping, Brooks?' Or somethin like that.
come on danny, get a new hobby, this just isnt working out to well
your as gangsta as elton john cumin straight outta jail
No. Just no.
fuck outta here, go back to councilin fa chronic masturebation
witcha e-thug ass, still can't get tipsy wit fake identification
Fake personal set up, real personal play was ok.
you what 18, yet you still gettin murked by a minor....how pathetic
ill call you BUFU, cuz we all know ya whole style is generic
Bad personal. Daubs is only 16 or somethin.
fuck the votes just eliminate this nigga now...its a waste of time
call me Shang Tsung, cuz i just finished him HIS SOUL IS MINE!
Self glorification and no punch.

Basically, you didn't have ish in this verse. Your last bar wasn't even a punch. Your concepts were better, but your wording made the punches horrible. Work on switching up the words.

v-Daubs

Daubs won it and shit.

This battle is now closed.