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Adam 12-19-05 03:34 AM

31. Kool Col-B vs. 34. MarvolousJay
 
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

MaRVJay 12-19-05 08:45 AM

ha ha im rank 34th wow...any1 check goodluck kool

KOOL COL-B 12-20-05 01:52 PM

i'd b lying if i sed that marv will b eazy 2 beat -_- goodluck 2 u too my spicca, werd

JTR 12-20-05 10:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVOLOUSJay
ha ha im rank 34th wow...any1 check goodluck kool


You got the fucking rank you deserve herb, now stfu.

Kol-B, just get at me on msn and let me ghost your verse for you :hump:

Then marv will be easy to beat for you :thumbup:

KOOL COL-B 12-21-05 12:19 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JTR
You got the fucking rank you deserve herb, now stfu.

Kol-B, just get at me on msn and let me ghost your verse for you :hump:

Then marv will be easy to beat for you :thumbup:


LOL, oh josh, u know im afraid of ghosts :) werd

KOOL COL-B 12-21-05 01:37 AM

im dun my shit, tell me wen u dun Marv so we can drop early, werd

Appocolyptik 12-21-05 06:48 AM

Shut the fuck up and drop your verse faggot.

KOOL COL-B 12-21-05 11:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Appocolyptik
Shut the fuck up and drop your verse faggot.


check yoself fo u wreck yoself. say that shit 2 me offline, i'll slash yo jugular then fuck tha cut, fajjit, werd

RetsazD 12-21-05 11:50 AM

Please say you were not being serious when you were saying that..

KOOL COL-B 12-21-05 11:51 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by RetsazD
Please say you were not being serious when you were saying that..


lmao, naw, i prolly wouldnt fuck tha cut. but tha slashing of tha jugular = true :cool: werd

KOOL COL-B 12-23-05 11:50 PM

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!

werd

MaRVJay 12-23-05 11:54 PM

ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!

Young_law 12-24-05 12:45 AM

hahaha ROFLMAO, KOOL that shyt was funny as hell yo, every single line had me crackin up, i swear, marv hahahahaha that broke up line had me rollin 2 but thats about it tho, evrything else 2 me seemed so simple, so ima have 2 say

vot/kool col b

Past Tense 12-24-05 12:50 AM

Hmm this was a pretty good battle...i enjoyed both of ya'lls drops......but marv's punchlines were more wittier...and his line that dissed him about being the 6th member cracked me up lol hhahhahahah i love that bar..and thats the only bar outta both ya'lls battles that made me laught..cuz i know how infatuated kolb is wit NWA :) but anyways my vote would have too go to MarVJay

v/MJ

Apo Kold 12-24-05 12:56 AM

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
gd

im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
ok

u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
weak

u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
hm... ok.

its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
weak

ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
weak

ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
weak dunno why everyone is so excited about it

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
ok

remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
NO

jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
OK

V/ KOOL

MaRVJay 12-24-05 01:01 AM

1-1.....dis apo kid aint even in da tourney...good shit kol-b

Apo Kold 12-24-05 01:07 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVOLOUSJay
1-1.....dis apo kid aint even in da tourney...good shit kol-b


I am dood .

KOOL COL-B 12-24-05 01:10 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVOLOUSJay
1-1.....dis apo kid aint even in da tourney...good shit kol-b


yeah, id say we both real close. u had sum good shit too, werd

.Ike. 12-24-05 01:44 AM

col...

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
ok...

im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
ok...

u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
ehh

u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
ok...

its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
decent...

pretty consistent verse there.....

ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
cold/flu symptom/medicine/sick....all that...= played punch

ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
no...

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
ok..

remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
pretty decent wordplay here...but fire/devil/hell punches...= played

jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
decent closer...


V/ Col

why? cause his verse just had better punches and was WAY more consistent

Magic5 12-24-05 02:05 AM

Vote - MaRVOLOUSJay

He won. I'll edit this post tomorrow with an explanation.

TeamOne 12-24-05 11:48 AM

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!

vs.

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.

and thats only cuz im bein nice....... Cols was ALOT more enjoyable, with pretty good wording, MArv mighta had some ok concepts but he crams shit WAY too much... cols shit was funny, LMFAO

v/kool kid

.TeamOne. 12-24-05 01:58 PM

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!

vs.
ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.

ive never quoted a whole verse before but, it was pretty good. each line was definately quoteable...
Good battle, but Kool DEFINATELY came harder and more consistent with tha punches.

V/ kool kol b

.TeamOne. 12-24-05 01:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apo Kold
I am dood .

LMFAO!!! "dood" ???
its DUDE... wtf?

KOOL COL-B 12-24-05 02:13 PM

thanx doods, lmao, werd

Apo Kold 12-25-05 09:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by RobKilla
LMFAO!!! "dood" ???
its DUDE... wtf?


Chill out dood I'm French

Sean Gunner 12-27-05 01:23 AM

Kool Col-B
no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
l, o, l. Too many commas. Punch is blah.
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
Played.
u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
Set up is played. Punch is blah.
u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
Haha nice wordplay.
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
Punch is kinda played, but it was ok.

Overall, not a ton of creativity, funny punchlines but nothing amazing. Work on wittier stuff.

Marv:
ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
Nah. Wordplay is really forced in there.
ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
Punch was good, set up line was filler though.
my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
Played.
remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
Nope. Punch is blah, no proof to him saying it, then possible fake personal.
jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
Random JTR line, punch is played.

Overall, you really need to work on making personals. Most of your stuff are punches, with no real wordplay.

v- Kool Col B

Adam 12-27-05 05:17 AM

Kool Col-B wins.

Adam 12-27-05 05:18 AM

This battle is now closed.

Adam 12-27-05 05:18 AM

Moved to closed battles.


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