Intermental feat. Ne-Yo - So Sick Remix
 

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"SO SICK REMIX"

holla back ill rtf

upppin...........

lol not feeling ur little yea uh oh or whatever lol
lyrics were prety cool
flow was off in a few spots
voice sounds good on slow songs like this cool

Ite, really feelin the beat real good choice yo.Your verse was nice, flow on point, presence is good and delivery was nice. Like the singin from Ne-Yo that's real impressive. the singin is real catchy especially the ''Why can't i turn off the radio''. Overall nice track yo, you remixed it well, outcome was dope.

I'd give it a 9.1/10

keep up fam, your elevatin real well.

Thanks yall...............

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The singing vocals were hot and on point. Lyrically you were on point. The best thing I can tell you is work on delivery a few more songs and you will a force to be reckoned with. Keep doing your thing. The Nee-yo singing was very impressive.

thanks fo the feed...........

yea..we broke this down on AIM..nice "make u feel good shit"....nice track im feelin it !!

thanks fam yep we broke it down on aim

levels much better in this one...however you mixed them, repeat that process and build upon it

singing at the bridge reminded me of Michael Jackson

hook is coo lyrically...


verses were good


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thanks fo that feed......

ok beat is sick...

the singin is sicck man

on you come in... you got rid of ya whisperin sicck.. u sound so much better... flow is sick, lyrics are kool... emotion and delivery aree on point ncie verse...

hook is ill nice flow sick voice
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aint gona crit his verse coz he aint on the site but it;s sick

bridge is kool..

he record this is in a studio

ok third verse..

same as the first emotion n delivery are kool flow has changed nice... lyrics are kool nice vferse man

overall nice track worth a d.load. good shit man keep droppin em

thanks fo feed fam........

uppin.............

typing as I listen....ok flow is koo..but ya pronounication is lacking...ya cadence is reason I see u really gasping for air an cutting off the ending of words to get a breathe..beat is nasty..good choice....an this singer dude is ill..ya delivery was nice an laid back...u ahd the general idea of how to use ya voice on this jus need to do it in a more polished manner....once again ya breathe control hurt u....it prevented u from really animated ya voice....or changed ya flow up significantly....but u def elevating playa..def a good listen..keep it up man

thanks alot....i rlly apreciate all da feed

Stop ruining dope songs with these wack remixes. Please.

Man why are you even beefin with me?...you jus drop free posts in my threads?...I aint even done anythin to you...if you got a prolem pm me

Listening: Beat is sick
Sicking pure dope
Inter your flow is nice but in pasts u loss ya breath.Delivery is nice and your emotion is aiight dawg. Lyrics is good dawg. But the singing shines on this track dawg

nice track. 7.5/10

apreciate the feed..hes a mainstream singer so course itll outshine

aight...........

Flows dope

Your Deliverys niceo n this one,feelin it

Lyrics are koo suit the track well

THAT SINGER IS DOPE AS FUCK I SWEAR

Presence Is Nice

beats Koo..im not feelin it that much

but yeah good track homie


8/10
Keep up

thanks.............