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Red Bull & Spektikul - The Book Of Life
Spektikul = Dark Green
Red Bull = Navy Hook = Black The Book Of Life Life is a novel, that’s full of chapters and pages Their titles always live, even right after it ages Stages constantly changing, rearranging is scary Birth announcement pages, leading to an obituary Books vary in style; they’re discovered over time Constantly being published, without writing a line Use your imagination, don’t abuse this situation Choose the photographs, you’ll use as illustrations The creation of life, it’s filled with power and glory You’ll be author of the year, based on a true story A world full of creatures, with intresting features.. Writting cliff hanger endings, leaving you speachless. Born with free minds, they broke through their cages.. They write the stories of life we hear through the ages. From birth to death, another beginning that ends... But each tale depends on the soul gripping the pen.. Written by women and men of any name, age, or race. Born with a pen and a page, they decide their own fate. Each step creates a new frame, equipped with a page.. Where writting's engaged until the end of that stage. But will your story change lives? Or go without viewing? ...Are you brewing a classic? Or just merely renewing? Keep pursuing your dreams, and follow your views... Compose the Book of Life, publish the story of you... A world full of creatures, with intresting features.. Writting cliff hanger endings, leaving you speachless. Born with free minds, they broke through their cages.. They write the stories of life we hear through the ages. Try and live it like a romance, similar to a slow dance With a fairytale ending, where you and a girl hold hands No matter how you write the lines, make every second shine So other writers look and say, “I wish that book was mine” Get the readers attention, proceed to make a connection Friends and families books, will complete the whole collection Cliff-hangers in the story, leave them wanting more forever Write with heart and soul, that way they’ll always remember Open minds and storylines, you may not ever get another Cause life is just a book, don’t ever judge it by the cover Like mice in mazes, we find our way throgh the pages.. Touching bases with different styles, cultures, and races. Unknown languages, animals, not knowing whats dangerous.. Curiosity leads every one through each of lifes phases.. Trying to grasp on whats good, and decipher from the sinister. I mean, "Hey, Life's a bitch", but a least try and finish her.. And don't worry bout what others will think as you write.. Just hit the damn paper so hard that your pencil ignites.. And scribble down just whatever, 'long as your rockin' a smile.. Cause a good book's original, make reading yours worth the while.. A world full of creatures, with intresting features.. Writting cliff hanger endings, leaving you speachless. Born with free minds, they broke through their cages.. They write the stories of life we hear through the ages. |
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Peep it..
Enjoy it.. Feed it.. |
It would be a little nice to get some feed.
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Feed: I thought this was the illest OM of December and people should def. go nominated it in the Rv Awards.
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*Waits for at least one bit of feedback*
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*Punches Spek in the face*
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This was decent,
i thought you 2 would have collabed on some heavy diss shit, but anyway... imagery and flow was consistant, decent topic, original i suppose. not super special but was a decent topical read. PS fuck you 2 :) |
Cool.
More peeps, leave feed. Now. |
*cough cough* let's do an OM....
oh wait. |
That is one phukn getto pic. . . . . . .
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I was meaning to get a hold of you. Was going to cop your number off timb. |
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Yeah sorry, I'll get that too you. I say we just make it OM of January. :thumbup: |
9/10.. the vocab was nice.. like this topical good shit from both
~1~ |
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i say i have a pretty bad cough and you spend too mujch time withyour fg |
Ayo mayne, dat was so tite! U had dose multies sun! Da vocab was off da hook, n ur flow was flowin. I was like, oh, dey gettin dere groove on again! Gotsa stop those brothas! Da structure of da verse was all pretty and shit yo, but most important, u had some nice colors suns! Def 10/10 yo! 1 homies!
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I love you man, thanks for the feed. Up.
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Good read right here, writing on some deep insightful things. Both kinda had same style on this one, made it a fluent whole. The flow was on point throughout the entire piece, good similar sounds and a nice cadence in the words. Quite some inspiring lines here and there, excellent choice of words. I like the whole concept of "the book of life" and how it followed through in the piece. Both dropped wisdom and ish you know, keep it up.
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This Shit Was Definately Nice, I Like The Way You Guys Choosed Your Words And The Topic Is Nice As Well, Good Job.....*Sits Down To Wait For The OM Of January* 9-10, keep it Up
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^ You'll see it comming from Me and Drakel..
Reflections and shit yo. |
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yea yea...or me and OSB? |
i'll be on the lookout for that one..............
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better be, or else i'll fucking, stab your third grade teacher
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lol, ok go ahead...............
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Red and Drakel, I wanna collab with you guys for OM of Feb...get at me.
...and werd to elementality getting back on Rv. lol. |
dayum nice OM that was dope as fuck
ima vote for that shit for om of january |
ayo red and spek can I get down with you guys with a om so it can be like a om of 5? :huh:
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or how about december, since that's what month it is |
yeah homey this was nice a good read so keep up the good works imagetry very clear anyway let me drop this here
This cat act dense because you lack sense and vigor A very dense nigga, have no force and my flow source bigger I’m a sender of technique and have a slender physique figure Out my skills, I’ll take away your saddle if you don’t breakaway From this battle known to slay cattle like cow pokes on any great day I’m street legal while you weak and feeble you can’t peek Like a needle point you can’t sew britches need to seek Low ditches and bury yourself don’t carry deft rhymes |
^ Wtf was that?
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This was hot one of the best I've seen on RV in a while imagination was great flow was hot everything was on point this gets a 9/10 from me
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please rtf thanxx boii's
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This is the OM of December and we want more feed.
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I'm eating some corn that has been popped.
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OM of DECEMBER? and you two cats can't multi-rhyme niggaz please tell me you're joking or smoking something come on wake up and smell the coffee
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^ Lmao. I could multi-rhyme the shit out of anything you've ever written.
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how bout, you wake up...and kill yourself? |
yea bull, that shit was killer. 9.5/10 man u should make another one "the book of death" or some shit like that... do me a favor and check out my freestyles, need feed from real pro's and not some crack head newbies that dont know shit bout a lil bit of flow.
tight shit S to the Z |
*Thinks about The Book Of Death*
...meh. And Fucka lumberjack, go chop wood bitch. |
shits dope fam.
hey red and spek u down for a 3 way collab? :huh: |
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