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Blackmage vs Nick Fletcher
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = KO 4-1 = TKO *No re-opening the battle if it gets closed after 21 days.* Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-24-05 at 03:49 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 01:43 PM.
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I'll stop when i won the round
I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now? you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L 100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never (copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad but one's the lonliest number..... ....so even your one good bar is sad Here you go pimp hurry up with that mic so we can collab |
Nick Fletcher has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:54 PM.
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Your fucking wack with your forced wordplay and played punches. :thefinger
Check it, I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this.. ..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black, like a stone cold fucking racist!! . . Ha, just kiddin!! Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through, And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker But you say endorsements kick ass……… …so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!! I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it, Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!! It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick, I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!! Fuck You Bitch!! :gfy: |
Voted For: Nick Fletcher
Check it, I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this.. ..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black, like a stone cold fucking racist!! Nah, no punch, Your gnna diss him? and? . Ha, just kiddin!! Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through, And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W Its ight, could be better I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker But you say endorsements kick ass……… …so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!! Not feelin I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it, Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!! Coo It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick, I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!! Nah, Seen too many of these Vs you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L Nice 100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit Ight the rest was just toooo weak to copy and paste. V/Nick Fletcher. If black was more consistent, he woulda got it easy |
Voted For: Blackmage
Blackmage I'll stop when i won the round I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now?-good idea but your delivery could have been better you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L-damn!!!!! 100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never (copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad but one's the lonliest number..... ....so even your one good bar is sad-OK Here you go pimp hurry up with that mic so we can collab Nick Fletcher IP: Your fucking wack with your forced wordplay and played punches. Check it, I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this.. ..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black, like a stone cold fucking racist!!-nice personal and flow . . Ha, just kiddin!! Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through, And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W-nice bar I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker But you say endorsements kick ass……… …so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!-no personal but original I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it, Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!! It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick, I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!!-you fell off at the end Flow – Nick Fletcher’s structure was better – he had a smoother flow Punches – Nick Fletcher, although most of the lines weren’t punches I was feeling Nick’s BMW line and Nike sneaker line a lot Personals - Blackmage, did not had less than Nick Fletcher’s. But I believe in quality over quantity: the pun you created from NFL was very very witty. I think that was a very nice personal and therefore, it was a strong punchline as well. Assonances- Both did not have multies except Blackmage’s first bar. However, it was delivered poorly. I suggest increasing the amount of multies in your rhymes if they are not redundant as they will enhance the flow of your verse. Originality – Blackmage, with his personal (pun made out from the word NFL and his how number one is a lonely number and how he followed up on that) Overall a decent battle. Winner: Blackmage because his personals were good enough to be hard punches and originality is the hardest thing to come up with. No hate though…Sorry Nick, in all honestly, it was a tough call Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=217849 |
that looks like the bmw line JTR hit me with in the KLL...it don't matter uppin for votes and good battle Nick, by the way...what's with all the sudden hatred, or are you mimesis all of a sudden...
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No intentional hate. Mimesis and I have a similar style that's all.
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this.. ..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black, like a stone cold fucking racist!! Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through, And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it, Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!! vs you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L 100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit close one really, that () punch could have been worded better and been fuickin ill. Nick got this one. NO HATE V./ Nick |
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Me and Nick are in the same crew so I'll just check the polls and shit..
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We really don't.. but whatever. And lmao @ turning into the new Mimesis. Haha. I'm cool. |
Word, I honestly don't think we have the same style either....
...I'm just going with what people say. Plus, it ain't like its a bad thing being the new Mimesis. :) |
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Checkin the pollz Nick to see how your doin in battles.
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher
I don’t give a fuck about feelings, watch as I state this.. ..I’m gonna diss the fuck outta black, like a stone cold fucking racist!! ...IGht Ha, just kiddin!! Mage is on the road to victory, but I’ll beat him fuckin’ through, And have him rollin’ on flats, as I pop the tyres on a B M W ....Nah I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker But you say endorsements kick ass……… …so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!! ....OK I’m a shake up the hive, and ya victory I’m gone spoil it, Cuz I’ll be droppin’ bees……shit right down the toilet!! ...Ight,but toilet lines are gettin' wack now.There's so many. It’s over now, ure finished!! And bitch your fallin’ quick, I’ll give you a helping hand though, right over the fucking cliff!! ...Good I'll stop when i won the round I could lock you down with one bar like a dumb inmate...what now? ...HUH?You even sayin' anything here? you'll never touchdown or get past my line throw the fight aswell Kick your verse and field for the goal NF will still get the L ...there's been a play off the NFL in his name already 100 battles? i'm guessing you had a life RV absorbed it after this though your ass'll be relaunched...clear into orbit ...Good sure I'd spot you a bar, but rather use filler now than never (copy and paste A solo verse) there you saved me the effort ..Not feelin your rhymin in this bar. Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad but one's the lonliest number..... ....so even your one good bar is sad ....Ight Hmm...pretty close battle here.. But nick fletcher still got it..by a little. Blackmage did a good attempt at a nameplay.Unfortunately it had been done before in PLL.And the copy and paste line could have been better with wording. Vote=Nick Fletcher hit this battle up please. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216400 |
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i would vote but we in the same crew.......nice battle. pretty close but since i like nicks fist 3 bars, i would have voted for him. i did lik mages last bar tho. good battle homies............
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Voted For: Nick Fletcher
Both verses were a lil soft to me. But, I'll still vote because I felt Nick Fletcher came off a lil harder. Blackmage Your verse was ight. Wasn't feeling it that much, mainly because you were too inconsistent. You started yo verse off soft. Introduction means a lot in battle rapping, because it at least lets your listener, or in this case, reader know how your verse is gonna be. So, if you catch your listener/readers attention early, I guarentee you, you'll get much more credit towards your verse. A good introduction practically forces ur audience to listen to you. But, like I said, you intro was soft, but you seemed to pick it up in the middle near the end of your verse. You started to diss your oponent a lil harder and come up with some creative wordplay and hard hitting punches, but one bad thing I noticed was that in alot of your lines I can sense you was trying too hard. You wanna make your punch as understandable as you can, but still make em think for a split second. Alright verse though, nothing too bad...could've been better. Better intro, and better wordplay with harder, but understandable punches could have gave you my vote. As well as consistency, thats major. Good verse though. Nick Fletcher - One of the things you did that caught my attention and got my vote was you caught my attention early. Although it was quite corny, your intro got me intuned to your verse. It wasn't that hard hitting, but at the same time, it wasn't tha wackest piece of shit I ever heard. Your bars wasn't all that great either. The main thing you did was show some consistency. You stayed on the same page throughout your whole verse and never switched up your style. I like how you got straight to the point with your disses, and nice rhyming also. Those were the main things that gave you my vote. I was more into your verse than your oponents because you caught my attention and stayed consistent with it. Good verse, not that hard hitting, but winnable in my opinion. Best Lines: Blackmage "Misery loves company so being solo ain't bad but one's the lonliest number..... ....so even your one good bar is sad" Not all that great, but your best line in my opinion. More of these kinds of bars would've got you my verse, and maybe alot other peoples too. Nick Fletcher "I’ll be backin’ ya loss, seriously ya lines are fuckin’ weaker But you say endorsements kick ass……… …so I’ll beat ya with a nike sneaker!!" I think this was a good clean diss. Not that simple and not that difficult to understand. Both verses could've been better, but not the worse I seen. Good clean battle. Nick gets my vote. Use all critism to better yourself! -Eazy |
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cool battle you win again
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Yes I do, I am dope. And this battle is now at an end.
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Dang can't vote...So just checking this out.
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