Dios vs CapZ
 

Battle Rules:

6 Bars
No Crew Votes

No Recycling/Feedin/Flips

No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-24-05 at 02:51 AM

Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in.

CapZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:21 AM.

Dios has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:24 AM.

I said 6 Linez which is 3 bars not 6 barz...but oh well here is my verse.....

So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack

EXPLANATIONS:
(1) Those cap guns you can buy that just make noise
(2) Stayin on the toy topic saying he like a pull-string doll
(3) Playin off his name Capz/bullets and accuracy of a gun

ight 3 barz then key'd





Gyea!!..

1- metas/multies..
2- metas/multies.. lil nameplay..
3- D's.,And F's Below average ya know.. nameplay

VOTES

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ight 3 barz then key'd







Gyea!!..

1- metas/multies..
2- metas/multies.. lil nameplay..
3- D's.,And F's Below average ya know.. nameplay

Categories
Consistency/Structure:
Creativity:
Enjoyable:
Flow:
Metaphors:
Multies:
Personal:
Punches:
Vocabulary:
Wordplay:
Overall:

UPPIN.. And sorry bout tha 2nd post.. tha 1st one tha real one still they're tha same

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^^the 2 posts after your first original verse no one will be able to see....like when they click on our battle all they will see is our 2 verses...they wont see any of this talkin we are doing after we dropped our verses....and when they vote then they will be able to see all this

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin...

Voted For: Dios

Weak battle.

I got:


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But Dios was better.
Other dude was toooooooo streeeeetched.

So Dios won on strucuter and punches.

V/dios

how so? i had almost every category,lol and BREAK IT DOWN WITH CATEGORIES..0-0 uppin

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Voted For: Dios

v/ Dios

So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)

4/10- ok punch/personal could have been worded better to hit harder.

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ

4/10- nice nameplay and personal.

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack

5/10- your best line this was pretty ill, but could have been worded better to be ILL!!!!.

Overall - 13/30

Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1

2/10 - Meh, not really feelin it abit basic

He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2

2/10 - dio and deal don't really sound the same unless you strees it.

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Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3

4/10 - you saved your best line for last, this was pretty good but didn't really hit hard.

Overall - 8/30

So voted for dios cause his punches and personal were just more wittier than caps,
But still a ok battle.

This was feedback posted for CapZ
 

I feel sick .

uppin on christmas day yall.....merry christmas Capz

Voted For: CapZ

CapZ:
Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1
2/10 - pretty bad line.
He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2
6/10 - Good Personal.

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Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3
3/10 - ok diss.
11/30
You had a good verse, it flowed well. You had strong punches and your personals where hitten hard.


Dios:
So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)
1/10 - BAD.

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ
3/10 - Ok.

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack
4/10 - meh.
8/30

Vote - CapZ

RTF in SIG or vote REMOVED!

word^^ ya votes or ehhh.. anyways uppin 1-2

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This was feedback posted for Dios
 

wow, um.................................
not feel'n either verse

uppin uppin uppin.................................

Voted For: CapZ

Both verses sucked and i hate to vote in batttles like these, but capz took this. he had although, not punches that were good, he had some

Voted For: CapZ

THis was a close one both came wit some ight verse's.....dios u had a good opener but u feel from there idk what happened u came wit some played lines that werent good....capz u had a good verse that was consistent wit some decent punchs....V/capz.......RTF IN THE SIG OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

Voted For: Dios

nice battle right here... this is my favorite on this site thus far... couple of nice punches here... but I'm leaning toward Dios on this because he just had the better personals...

Opener: Dios
Closer: Dios
Punches: Dios
Personals: Dios
Creativity: Capz
Complexity: Capz
Structure: Capz
Multis: Capz
Enjoyment: Dios

Vote: Dios

This was feedback posted for CapZ
 

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Voted For: Dios

dios i voted 4 u cus u had better rymes, punches and structure

capz ur mentaz were not that eazy to understand but i got them ur rymes were weak thou
vote dios

rtf
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Voted For: Dios

i have to give this to dios....capz, your verse is just totally unbalanced. the way you a 5 letter line then a 60 letter line...it ain't cutting it....overall dios just took it