D.Zaster vs Ill Technique
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 12-27-05 at 06:36 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Ill Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 06:46 PM.

D.Zaster has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 06:48 PM.

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
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Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations



for those that dont know, CS is the animation part of photoshop.
word

He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster
But When They're Gone And You Step U......
.......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter
I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark
You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!

uppin this thread for votes..........................

This was feedback posted for Ill Technique
 

you both had not very good structure
but you got this easssyyyy

Hop off

and lol @ you thinking that.

we will see

thanks for the feed willa......any votes.....................?

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

Checking this out..........................................

well can you check it out and vote.................

Voted For: D.Zaster

ahhh damn..this shit was nice.... lol i liked the cs line...that cracked me...up..overall i belive D ZASTER HAd better lines....simple and plain had better punches and better multies.....but ill if you used less of those fake punchline set up lines it'd be decent..but overall i just felt that d.zaster had come a lil bit better..and the only one that was semi-funny was the last two lines of D zasters....soo overall D gets my vote

V/D.Zaster

what! whatever, anymore votes...........................

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

d.zaster owned in this, i believe...punches were witty and creative....i'm going to be, remind me tomorrow and i'll drop a real vote

Up for votes.

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makin50chars

Voted For: D.Zaster

He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
wordplay was forced, concept was played..
You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster
But When They're Gone And You Step U......
.......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter
the attempt at playing off his name was pathetic..
I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark
You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart
this was just weak man..
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy
concept for a personal was used poorly..
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!
weak closer, the period shit was retarded..

Ok, this verse was weak as hell. You started off with a played concept and some forced wordplay to get you going. The attempted personals were all weak and didn't come off right, you had the concepts but used them poorly. The closer was fucking stupid, doesn't really resemble a punch, or at least not an affective one. Overall, you forced too much, your concepts were either played or used poorly, the personals were weak. OVERALL: 3/10


bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
basic opener, been done before..
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Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
decent concept and good delivery, funny punch..
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
these kind of punches been done too many times before, this one was cool though..
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags
average punch, nothing too special..
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations
Lol, decent personal, best punch really..

Right then, you came pretty average with a decent opener and a real nice closer with the personal shit. I think you took it easy here really because I seen some of your shit on RB and it is so many times better than this verse you dropped. Some concepts were a little played, you put a nice flip on the one concept. Overall I think your "windows" line and your closer were what won this battle for you. OVERALL: 6/10


V/ - D.Zaster

Word. Return the favour on my battle. The link is in my sig. :)

how were his weak as lines good in this?

He didnt say that.

He realised that I dropped weak here, cos your wack.

He knows i dropped weak, because hes seen my verses on rb.

ANd yes.

Up.

I returned the favour.

yupypupupupypu

WTF UP

Yup Yup...................................

Ya`ll suck at voting.

I voted and left links on enough battles.

fuck you dumbass.....................................

Voted For: Ill Technique

this verse had some really good punches and it had alot more better personals. This was a good battle I think you both did well but technique just seemed 2 have a bit better flow and he had the better punchlines This was a a good battle well done 2 both of you.

^ LMFAO.

ok.


upyoubitches..........................

Voted For: D.Zaster

He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!

vs.

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags

pretty good battle here... I was feelin more of D. Zaster's concepts though. and he had more quotables anyway.

v/ D. zaster

Voted For: D.Zaster

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it

VS

(You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster)
If that was the punch it would have been heavy.
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy

D clearly took this one.

NO HATE
RTF

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

Me and D are in E Style, so I can't vote on this shit.. but here's my feedback..

You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags

vs.

No quotables.

I think D.Zaster took this and shit..

Word.

Up once more

1 more vote needed people come on

This was feedback posted for Ill Technique
 

Polls.............................................

Voted For: Ill Technique

Tech:
He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
4/10 - Played.
You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster
But When They're Gone And You Step U......
.......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter
5/10 - ok.
I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark
You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart
5/10 - ok.
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy
7/10 - good personal.
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!
4/10 - ok.
25/50.


You had a good flow, a couple good punchlines and some good personals.



D.Zaster:
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
4/10 - ok.
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
6/10 - good.
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
3/10 - no.
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags
3/10 - no.
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations
6/10 - good punch.
22/50


Your flow was ok, your punches where decent, some ok personals.


Vote - Tech

LOl @ this.

Seriously.

Up............................

up. .................................................. ..............

up you wack fucks.........................................
:)
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This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career

vs
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations

V/ D.Z cause his Punches was good and hard hitting, with the wordplays. Ill T you had one bar of a good Punch, the other bars, I was just not feeling it because it was kinda played out, do some wordplays like D.Z did and I bet you'll get better bruh. One, O snap this is 200 Post..Sorry Don't have, I'll leave this as a feedback.

Voted For: D.Zaster

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart

thats all i needed to ready, word, shit was illy, the rest was cool too...eh, not bad tech, nothing really fancy, or stood out, a couple played lines, like the elf shit...nothing too creative or witty, but you have the idea, keep up, aight?

v/dzaster