Rising Sun vs Drakel
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-05 at 12:38 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-05 12:40 AM.

alright, its officially christmas....here's a little present for you

got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked
cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink
your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through
keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon
i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome
just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses
im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore
shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court
leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless
the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages
this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done
cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned

kerplow...

Rising Sun has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-05 03:41 AM.

Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~
~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~
My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~….
Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~
Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~
I’ll ~damage ya~ with magical skills like I’m ~David Blaine~, and you should be ~ashamed to say~
That you named yourself after a video ~game~
And while you ~spit flows~, I’ll make your ~bitch blow~, every time her ~lips glow~
The type to ~hit hoes~, you better ~get low~ cause I’ll torture you like a troop at ~GITMO~
Admit your ~shit yo~ cause your facing ~ridicule~ when times are ~critical~
You could turn away from rap, start golfing, and you still wouldn’t be “hitting” your ~pinnacle~

upping............................................

Voted For: Rising Sun

Rising Sun - You had a great flow, you used alot of good multi's, punches where hitten hard and good personals.

Best Line - My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~….
Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~
Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~

Worst Line - NONE

Drakel - You had an ok flow, your punches where ok, and you had good personals.

Best Line - got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked
cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink

Worst Line - this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done
cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I was feelin' Suns verse more overall. He used good multi's, strong punches and ok personals. Drakel, you flowed ok, your personals where good, your punches where not all that great.

Vote - Rising Sun

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^ like fuck off with your bloody ignorance...i can't wait to kick the shit out of you

bump for some legit votes...........................

bump this .

Voted For: Drakel

Most of Drakel's verse.

vrs.

Nothing.

Honestly, the ~ is annoying as fuck. Also, your wordplay was shit and you can tell when people use all this fancy ~*bold shit that it's going to be a verse packed full of lines with played wordplay. Drakel came good, though the 'sunned' line is pretty basic and it's a nameplay he'll probably see in 90% of people's verses.

This was feedback posted for Rising Sun
 

stop with the swiggly lines mutha fuker.

stop with not voting :shoot:

vote .

Voted For: Drakel

Rising Sun:

Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~
~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~
My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~….
Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~
Why does this ~trash exist~? I can’t resist to set ~parameters~ on this ~amateur~ who’s scared to rep ~Canada~
I’ll ~damage ya~ with magical skills like I’m ~David Blaine~, and you should be ~ashamed to say~
That you named yourself after a video ~game~
And while you ~spit flows~, I’ll make your ~bitch blow~, every time her ~lips glow~
The type to ~hit hoes~, you better ~get low~ cause I’ll torture you like a troop at ~GITMO~
Admit your ~shit yo~ cause your facing ~ridicule~ when times are ~critical~
You could turn away from rap, start golfing, and you still wouldn’t be “hitting” your ~pinnacle~

^^ Usually i break down verses bar for bar but since your structure is fucked i cant really do that... SOOOOOO overall your verse was weak all you had was multies, the punches were subpar no good metas or personals. Your verse practically consisted of nothing.

Overall: 10/60 (17%)


Drakel:

got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked
cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink
^^good opener nice meta 7/10
your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through
keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon
^^ok bar coulda been worded better 5/10
i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome
just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses
^^lol humor 4/10
im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore
shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court
^^good bar 6/10
leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless
the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages
^^ok meta 5/10
this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done
cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned
^^couple good metas here, ok closer 6/10

Overall: 33/60 (55%)


Vote: Drakel


RTF with an honest vote on the battle in my sig plz!!!

already have man, good lookin'

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

eaaaaaaaaaasy win better structure flow vocab imagery weerd u owned lol bummmmmmmmmmmmmmmp

Voted For: Drakel

Drakel claims he’s ~classic~ but even Michael Crichton would consider him ~Jurassic~
~Act quick~ cause I’ll do three ~back flips~ and execute a double black belt karate ~class kick~
THAT WAS FUNNY BUT ONLY CAUSE OF THE KARATE KICK
My bars may stretch long like ~blacks dicks~ but ~fact is~….
Your skill…I’m lyrically “passed-it” like Steve ~Nash assists~
DECENT BAR

I couldn't really breakdown the rest cause it rhymed but i had trouble seperating it. it was good but the multies were distracting in this case.hurt the verse. punches weren't hard hitting but that verse was damn funny especially executing the karate kick...lmao


got your eyes on the prize? ahh, shit, must've blinked
cause rye's getting smashed here, without a single drink
DECENT PUNCH
your sun aint rising, its setting....your day is through
keep all your ass lines, and you deserve this moon
GOOD PUNCH
i hate that stupid avy, all you faggot newbs think its awesome
just look at that record...(ahhh)....20 fucking losses
RATHER WEAK
im just collossus, i know i intimmidate this whore
shit, he has more sweat on his psalms, than liars in court
GOOD WORDPLAY, PUNCH NOT SO HARD
leave him speechless, i rip him to pieces, leave'em faceless
the bitch is at a loss for more words, that missin dictionary pages
THAT SEEMS A LIL PLAYED
this day, breaks him easily, but no morning when he's done
cause it finally dawned upon him, he just got sunned
GOOD PUNCH

v/ drakel

It was too hard to find the flo of the other one and the multies were a lil overboard

Rtf on my gkilla battle

hey, this is still open -_-

Voted For: Drakel

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh at that last line. Shit was nasty as fuck. NO LIE! You could wrote just that.... And fuckin' killed in this battle.

P.S.-Rising Sun, your structure makes me want to puke.

yeah man, that opener was dope eh

Voted For: Drakel

nie battle. rising came a bit too weak. he had multies, but all those decorations make your verse seem real newbish. you also focused on multies but no punches while drakel actually dropped some funny and illy punches. good job drakel.........