The Revelation vs NON-FIXION
 

Battle Rules:
1 min(few extra seconds if needed)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-05 at 07:54 PM

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NON-FIXION has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-05 07:22 PM.

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-28-05 07:23 PM.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=452719
WERD LYRICS R ON PLAYER:SHOOT:

www.soundclick.com/therevelation

Skill is Fiction

lmafo i never even ever did topicals b4 u dumb shit lmfao tha only punch wasnt even true ahahahahahahahahah

Oh ya you did, I looked up Kid Cas. Found a topical battle, you asked me for advice. So ya. And your punches = played, or just completely random. Good luck you ingrateful little shit.

my name was changed u moron so no post will even show up ass kid cas god yer a lyer and u sukk lmfao lets see tha votes when they get droped bitch

Your name was R-Kane when you left that account. You were Kid Cas, use to be Ca$per. You followed me everywhere I went, praising me.

lmfao yer hilarious kid r- kane wtf r u talkin bout when i left my comp blew up so i was kid cas then i changed it to random spaces and letters faget

To R-Kane. You can search Statistics. Kid~cas will come up. You gonna say I altered the system too?

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

Damn the first thing i gotta say px is your quality sucked!
Flow has improved alot and so has presence! not much emotion very simple sounding! Punches from what i heard some were good! delivery is the thing you need to work on now i think!

keep up dawg

TC boys!

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Voted For: NON-FIXION

NON-FIXION - You had a good flow, you went to the beat good, your rhymes where good and you had some ok punchlines.
7/10

The Rev - Your flow was ok, lil off, your rhymes where ok i guess, your punches where not really hitten at all.
5/10

Vote - NON

Voted For: NON-FIXION

non- you need to up your vocals there too low flow i like its better than rev...lyrics from wut i heard are coo nice spit

Rev- your flow seem forced and your delivery wasnt there i heardr you try to put emotion but it sounded force so yea decent drop

v/ non fixion wit a overall better verese

This was feedback posted for NON-FIXION
 

Im not goin vote, cos Rev may say its a hate vote
but wor,d Non Fixion got this shit EASY!

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

:slick:
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Voted For: NON-FIXION

punches-tie
flow-non
delivery-non
wordplay-didnt see much
quality-both were ass


both were pretty wack...rev's flow and delivery were horrible...non had a better flow and delivery...lyrically its was pretty close...over-all ima go with non-phixion...due to the fact he came better.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: The Revelation

NON-FIXION-
bad quality....yuck sounded like you used the sound recorder that comes with windows that goes up to 1 min... anyway besides that your lyrics were pretty tight and the flow was even though i had to read your lyrics to understand shit anyway it was aight.


The Revelation -
Bad quality also.. Flow was good personals was better than his , better disses all around, ive heard better audio from you then this one before but you still did good, Lyrics were straight

V/Rev

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

I think your confused if you think rev had a good flow lol that shit was choppy as fuck.

yer a dikk face that was a hate vote u were hatin fo no reason in stfu threads so eat a dikk im gettin this removed faget bump

Voted For: NON-FIXION

ok listnin...

non: beats sick... flow is ok.. emotion needs to be upped quality is meh punches were ok i spose nothig stood out to me though, delivery needs work lots of pops n shit in there

overall not that bad deffo not the worst ive heard but u need some work...

ok rev.. sick beat... intro is kool.. quality is meeh... emotion is better, flow falls off a bit punches were ok... delivery was pretty kool your new to this... um flow keeps fallin off u dont rlly switch it up some of ya punches were aight

very close battle but imma give it to non fixion

his punches were easier to understand quality was a bit betterr but revs emotion n delivery were better...

flow goes to non fixion without a doubt thats why he got this

better flow better overall track

sorry its not explained that much but this was aint iite battle pz

v/ non

Voted For: The Revelation

polls and shit like shit na shit?

oh shit..
did i mention shit?

Removed

shit, ima get that removed...hit wrong button .

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

BLOCKAH BLOCKAH!!! checks polls =]...but yo Rev you needa get that stand ckuz yo quality will be SO much better after that

lmao @ that...everytime someone gets a vote against them its automatically a "hate vote" blah thats pretty homo in my opinion...just like if i voted for Rev you would go "THATS A CREW VOTE REMOVE IT" but if i voted for you then you would be like "word thanks for the vote" whatever though lmao

^but it HAS to be a hate vote
seein that Non Fixion destroyed Rev
and Rev still got 1 vote.
pfft, that blew Non Fixion's chance of gettin in e-style

bumpin............................................ ...................................

NON-FIXION i fuckin don't even know you or REV i just voted honestly damn son

I'm wondering whether I should DQ Ecko's and GKillaz votes.

Voted For: NON-FIXION

a lil close on this both qualitys wack and on urs even the beats quality is wack...lol but im simply judgin by skill...i like non fixions punchlines better...like the 3-dollar bill line and the faggot huntin season line..lol not bad...lyrics were ight on both like i said it was a lil hard ta choose who ta vote for...revelation...ur quality was ight still coulda been alot better..u had a few good punchlines and wit u it seems a lil more personal...u coulda probably came a lil harder wit the punchlines but it all gravy...revelation i would give a 7/10 and non-fixion i'd give u a 7.5/10 like i said close...ight pc

i've come to the conclusion....that non fixion records with sound recorder....as every track posted on his SC is only one minute long and doesn't have any special effects...doesn't fade in...or out....nothin....this nigga really uses windows sound recorder...thats gangsta

lmfao
he really does
he told me already
that IS gangsta

Voted For: NON-FIXION

rev - ur flow was pretty off, ur punches didnt really hit well, coulda been better overall

non - ur quality wasnt real good and ur flow wasnt on the whole time, but it was enough to take the win