lyricly gifted vs OneStepBeyond
 

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lyricly gifted has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-05 01:09 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-05 01:10 PM.

one step beyond want to battle n i dont know y/
im bout to play like cyclops n put da red lazer on his eye/
im new but i thought he new not to test me/
cause i will send niggas to burn him up n leave him blacker then nestle/
u one step beyond y u battlin me/
u betta be glad i battled u cause i dont give ass wipins for free/
see im da type of nigga dat will kidnap ur daughter/
then put the eagle to the back of her head like a quarter/


EAZY!!!!!

can u post ur thread now one step beyond i hope u have something good

God made you lyricly gifted? Well that really doesn't help,
Cause kid you can't really get by without the ability to spell,*
You're generic as fuck, dare you to touch this style and wit,
I'd eat your rhymes, but I wouldn't enjoy a pile of shit,
You're wack, The fact is that you're a hoe and its clear we know,
Ya couldn't make anyone say "OOOH!" readin from a bowl of cheerios.

*Thats not how you spell lyrically.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

see im da type of nigga dat will kidnap ur daughter/
then put the eagle to the back of her head like a quarter/

vs

God made you lyricly gifted? Well that really doesn't help,
Cause kid you can't really get by without the ability to spell,*
You're generic as fuck, dare you to touch this style and wit,
I'd eat your rhymes, but I wouldn't enjoy a pile of shit,

OSB be gangster ,man

RTF.

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Leave me a link..... Then I shall return the favor young padawan.

i know how to spell lyrically i spelled it like dis on purpose lyricly

uppin for votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^..........................

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

500 FUKIN POSTS TO VOTE?YA'LL NIGGAZ CRAAAAAAAAAAZY.BUT SINCE I ALREADY TYPED SHIT UP.I'LL POST IT AS FEEDBACK.

one step beyond want to battle n i dont know y/
im bout to play like cyclops n put da red lazer on his eye/
^^NAH,WACK
im new but i thought he new not to test me/
cause i will send niggas to burn him up n leave him blacker then nestle/
^^zzzzzzzzz..YA BORING ME NIGGA
u one step beyond y u battlin me/
u betta be glad i battled u cause i dont give ass wipins for free/
^^IGHT,A LIL CHESSY,NAHMNEAN?BUT IGHT
see im da type of nigga dat will kidnap ur daughter/
then put the eagle to the back of her head like a quarter/
^^SO FUKIN WAT?..WACK SHIT SON

God made you lyricly gifted? Well that really doesn't help,
Cause kid you can't really get by without the ability to spell,*
^^DOESN'T RHYME DUN
You're generic as fuck, dare you to touch this style and wit,
I'd eat your rhymes, but I wouldn't enjoy a pile of shit,
^^IGHT
You're wack, The fact is that you're a hoe and its clear we know,
Ya couldn't make anyone say "OOOH!" readin from a bowl of cheerios.
^^GOOD.

ONE STEP WON THISSHIT MAD EASY.

HIT MY BATTLE UP AGAINST NICK FLETCHER.
FEEDBACK IS FEEDBACK RIGHT?

uppin............uppin.............uppin.......... ...uppin

uppin for votes....................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

You're generic as fuck, dare you to touch this style and wit,
I'd eat your rhymes, but I wouldn't enjoy a pile of shit

owned...hahaha

v/OSB

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

My vote goes to OSB. I mean look at lyricly's verse. It's mixed up like a fuckin jigsaw puzzle. I mean OSB gets this easily just cuz his makes logical sense. But to be fair I'll give the usual ranking shit:

Multis - OSB
Structure - OSB
Bein Jesus - Me

The End.

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Lmfao at this battle.

OSB:

Wtf you battling this kid for man? This really wasn't fair. You owned him completely. Every bar had me laughing. Cheerios line was dope, pile of shit line was hilarious, and the personal in the first bar owned him. Nothing much else to say here.

Other Dude:

Elevate man. You had no punches or personals...You got owned, plain and simple. Keep at it and whatnot and maybe you'll...Well, nevermind. Nice try tho man.

Man, Beaver creek sure does make my dick hard.....

Fucking Padawan

uppin for votes please help close dis battle it has been on for a while

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

v/OSB, no question here at all, this was murder...

This was feedback posted for lyricly gifted
 

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...Lyrically GIfted?...More like fuckin lyricaly challenged...yo elevate a hell of a lot man cuz basically, you fuckin suck

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond has really sexy biceps, and quads. <-- That is basically what made him take this..

I was thinking the same thing a second ago........

really, 2 seconds from now you stole my idea !

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Gifted ~ didn't think you come well at all to be honest
you didnt really have any punches or personal's.. Flow
was alright nothing great, proper lacking complexity &
a decent rhyme scheme. not much word play and your
verse could have been directed at anyone.

Not bad but elevate, look into the person your battling
next time the littlest thing about them can be used as
a personal. OneStep used the fact that you spell lyrically
wrong that sort of thing.

OneStep what can I say, you one the battle with ease
not sure why your battling a newb ? but it's all good do
what u gotta do.

Flow was alright, had a few nice punches and personals..

God made you lyricly gifted? Well that really doesn't help,
Cause kid you can't really get by without the ability to spell,*
^^ Ripped in the the opener ^^

Vote ~ OneStep

Stay up both

1~

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

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