The World As We Know It ft. Drakel
 

Hook:
I gotta live it up today, cause tomoro could be my last.
You talkin perserverance, not a part of my past.
The world as we know it, is wasted searchin for signs.
I can feel the fading of hopes that I hold in my mind.

Verse(1):
Workin this 5 to 9 grave shift, is no longer do-able.
Its cruisal i calm down 'for i break the fuck out this cubicle.
I feel like a juvinal & they wanna call this box an office.
& Im still yet to receive the raise my boss had promised.
This is not usual, my problem aint even pharmacudical.
Its like that somber you feel, while attendin a funeral.
See the blurr in my cudicle, well symbolizes my salary.
Im close to quiting but even closer to assaullt & battery.
Well actually, the hand stands at the 8 on the clock.
Means an hour 'til im homebound, thank God for the block.
Yea thank God for the block, for the fiends & cracker jacks.
& I gotta love the hood for puttin 23's on my cadillac.
Relaxed on my porch, watchin shorties pass in high heels.
Witta blunt, I forget about work...cause the high heals.
& the time kills, I climb into bed & count all of my sins.
My eyes open at 15 to 5 & i do it all over again.

& im dreamin about the weekend.

Hook:(x2)

Verse(2) Drakel:

they way that we look at it, i just wanna forget it
sure not everyone has a cell phone, but its a larger percentage
i'd rather have 3 meals a day, n'feeling replenished
than spending the money on clothes, and later regretin it
thats just the way i think, i'm all about livin'
most of the shots i take, i aim to be missin'
cause too many have died already, nobody's thinkin'
i'd rather be up early, than not have any birds singin'
to take a walk in the morning, enjoying the scenery
not looking around because sirens are screaming
see, i want a world of peace, if that even exists
its okay to wage a war, but not use your fists?
because a gun settles everything, the whole country claps
its makes for a compelling story, but what about the other half?
with what their teaching today, i'm suprized i've survived
but that's what makes me so glad to be alive

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2605156

the link...i dont wanna be closed again.

yay!!! nice verse po, this wasn't too shab

It's two links bro.

what does two links mean?

Gotcha later today man. Headin' for work in about 5 minutes.

bump .

buppity uppin'n shit

Drak why you bumping Po'Its peice? and Drop another link or this will be closed

Close It Then...Nobody Feeds On This Site...Nobody.

People do, when they get time... I'm not gona drop feedback on a piece that's gona get closed though, that would be pointless. And you complain about feed, yet you don't leave any yourself... The very reason it's getting closed.

I'm confused.

how about get more active

this is our piece, and go look around the forum, i leave feed on shit everyday...stop being a gay mod and stfu.

thats all you can friggen say, is "leave 2 links"...

once again, stfu.

Hook:
I gotta live it up today, cause tomoro could be my last.
You talkin perserverance, not a part of my past.
The world as we know it, is wasted searchin for signs.
I can feel the fading of hopes that I hold in my mind.

looove the hook... nice drop man

no problem, po it. made the hook, she is quite talented

good flow.. some nice vocabs.. some good concepts... yeah fine structure....cool multies

yeah this is a pretty deep piece fosho. good writing

pz

thanks for the feed man...i truly appreciate it.

This was a nice piece, the two verses went well togther...though you both had a different approach to the topic

Both had good flow and all, and sticked to the topic - I liked Po It's verse better, but Drakel's was good too...Po It your verse was nicely structured, and the ending was nice too...Drakel you got your message across well

Both Stay Up

And look out for my written called The Meaning of Death

Peace