Terumoto vs Drakel
 

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12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate

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Minimum posts to vote: 782

Check in by: 01-07-06 at 08:56 PM

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Terumoto has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-06 09:10 PM.

Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 12:40 PM.

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat

Voted For: Terumoto

Drakel

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
^ hmm not really feelin it to be honest

i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
^ ok bar nice wordplay...

and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
^ hmm ok nothin special

i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
^ blah again not feelin it only in my "meh ok" list

i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
^ 1st line self-g 2nd line...meh the Nos/omb connection is faded now IMO

just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
^ again 1st line self-g 2nd line starts self-g but Aus connection cool

dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
^ ok bar...the in-vest bit was coo i ain't seen before so original on ya part

its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
^ closer ok...nothing special though

Overall
Average verse...some bars were good where as others lacked in places...a lil too much self-g you need to work on that...text flow and layout is good you obviously got that sorted...but it's ya wording and imagery in places that let ya down IMO

Terumoto

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
^ penis thing...i unno prolly been used before...but funny(ish)

Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
^ lol @ 2nd line...1st line though self-g

Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
^ LOL @ 2nd line keepin the rhymes up too feelin this bar prolly the best bar of the battle

Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
^ LOL at 2nd line...rhymes cool too

but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
^ self-g but connection is hard hittin nice diss on his topical skills

Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
^ ok bar regular diss nice rhyme flows cool

Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
^ lol @ this bar...audio verse (impersonating him) woulda made it better

shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
^ ok closer nothing special though

Overall
Terumoto same scenario some bars were dope some were nothin more than ok...however rhyme wise and dissin wise you got mans here on this occasion the veteran hooker bar killed it...

V/Terumoto Not an easy win...and i know you can drop harder than this but Drakel wasn't as consistant in my eyes...keep droppin though both an aight battle

ughh, whatever .

This was feedback posted for Terumoto
 

Drakel's in my squad so I can't vote.. but I can eat french toast.

lets get some fucking freeench toast

that fucker came outta no wher

yeah, i was TOTALLY thinking that

stfu you stfu'ing piece of stfu, ??????????????????

hows it going OMB.....had any good chicken lately?

Shit yeah man. I had noodles the other day, chopped up some cajun chicken and let it soak the soup in. It was so juicy and moist, and very good quality chicken.

And theres this place down the road from me, they got this quarter chicken and chips in a box that you get. Shit is ILL. Beautiful breast piece of chicken with dope stuffing. And the salt on the chips is tasty as fuck. The trick is you leave it in the box for about 4 minutes and swirl it around so the chips soak in the juice from the chicken, chicken skin, and chicken stuffing.

Fuck im getting hungry now.

haha, man, that was the most delicious post i've ever read

This was feedback posted for Terumoto
 

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This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

Rofl, i didnt even know this was up. Checking polls.

yeah man, neither did i

Voted For: Terumoto

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
nope
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
okay
and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
okay
i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
decent
i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
okay
just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
decent
dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
okay
its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
nope

Eh.. your verse was aight. Didn’t see any hard punches there.. only had a couple of decent punches, def. not your best. Structure was straight.. and the flow was coo. But them punches could’ve came a little harder though.

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
this kinda threw me off a lil.. but it was decent
Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
cool
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
okay
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
decent
Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
okay
Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
nope
shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
..ew

Eh.. your verse was aight too. Threw in there a couple of jokes that make you go "ew" n' shit. Punches were there.. couple were decent and had a one punch that was hard. structure was straight and the flow was coo. Your bar with the.. all, before, saw, score.. kinda threw me off till I got it.

Overall – One M.B. took this shit though. Even though both verses were coo and I know both of you didn’t try, One M.B. seemed to edge this one out a little bit. Just came with punches that were a little harder and connected though. Maybe a couple of personas in each verse, but M.B. took this one.. no hate though.

...Lmao, oh and you had the multies in there n' shit.

Voted For: Terumoto

alright...OMB takes the cake here............drakel...the first half of your verse was dope...and than it seemed to kinda fall off into forced punches and shit....your wordplay was cool, the personals were good....but all in all.....omb's best was as good as your best, if not better, not to mention..OMB's verse was solid all the way tyhrough....good shit though...i enjoyed both verses.

i like how my 2nd bar is so true

i hope your not implying i'm riding his dick....because i ride no ones dick....
and either your just that ignorant....or your in denial.....because his verse was flat out better...multis? yes...rhyme scheme? yes...punches? yes...personals...you definately had more, but half of them weren't saying anything you didn't already say, and none of them connected that hard...besides..his verse was just more clever than yours....deal with the shit

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
vs.
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery

T- your shit was so corny i was lookin for a cob in your verse, but u had two good bars but the anus one eventhough it was decent and original it was corny with the whole anus thing. the other vague line was str8
D- i think your first line u used before, but good agian. and your other one i guess i haven't heard the dr thing that way but it was pretty simple, the rest of your lines i thought were not good, but i liked that sherlock holmes set up was clever
-word

by the way its funn your losing to that wack ass verse haha

oh, and if my face was that ugly i'd cover it up too

thanks man, its no wonder then i havn't seen a pic of you posted yet

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before

genius at all/seen it before.....u might be able to pull that off in an audio if u have an accent,but it doesnt rhyme n in text u gonna really make sure u rhyme....
the punch is ....ok at best...pretty played concept

Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
was in saw /even the score

doesnt rhyme AT ALL...PUNCH....EHH DOESNT HIT HARD


Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
PLAYED CONCEPT,N WACK

Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
HAHA i like that one....

but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
WACK

Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
ehh....pretty weak

Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
GAYYYYYYYYYYYYY

shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
...SUCKS



everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
EHH NOT FEELIN IT

i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
HAHA I LIKE THAT ONE

and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
WEAK..n doesnt rhyme

i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
WEAK

i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
WEAK

just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
suckS ..i see where u are goin with it but u just worded it all wrong

dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit

i guess there's wordplay there but its weak n i'm not feelin it

its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
.......dont like it at all


...basically,u each had one punch i likes....u both had trouble rhymin
i'm seein played and weak punches from both
not gonna vote just feedback
i'd say its pretty even

^You're right about that audio shit... its all multiple syllable rhymes and it all rhymes well... I guess youd have to hear my accent to get it.

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
aiight opener,not really direct,wored pretty off.
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
pretty decent
and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans
but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it
good
i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction
like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection
played
i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin'
see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him
lol.pretty good
just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit
you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live
Badly worded,plus it wasnt hitting hard..meh.
dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch
yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit
Nice
its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes
so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro
1st line was nice=set up.But 2nd meh...

vs.

Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before
WTF?..why would we want to?.
Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw.
Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score
no..sorta statement-ish..naw.
Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes
You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe.
so ole skool sounding..Im not feelin this.
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
lol.good
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery
hee,hee..pretty good.
Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n'
we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman...
aiight seen the concept waay to many times
Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap
If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.."
shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope..
ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat
???

overall/-decent battle..Drakel had wittier punches..Terumoto ur punches seem so bland an not even containing any creativity..so Drakel gets my vote.

V/-Drakel.

But I dont have enough post..so..FEED BACK.

Voted For: Terumoto

Umm... I'm not too overly sure what to say to decribe this one. Straight battle, I thought Drakel would've come harder but there were good punches from both of you. Terumoto won this one straight up tho, his punches were better. Not to say a bad verse from Drakel either, he came pretty good.

Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
^tight line... feeling this one, lmao

v/Terumoto...

Voted For: Terumoto

i vote 4 term he had better lines and flow he coulda elavated on his lines though they could been better,ur structure was aight too


akel u lost with ur flow and structure u hate aight lines but ur other things got u ,keep on trying and elavate

no hate

vote term