Tha 1 An Onlii B vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-08-06 at 04:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 05:20 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 05:23 PM.

This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*

*-Pat Sajak hosted the wheel of fortune. You should get the rest, if not then don't vote.

Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"***

*Jus name play
**It says "doc", like doctor, and it says IV and ER like tha ER, tha emergency room..yea ya get it
***Like tha board game clue where you say like so and so killed bla blah with a certain weapon

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*

lmloroflflflf, osb won

uppin on this battle that i seriously lost in...cmon get it over with, hit us up wit some votes

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

pollz............................................. .....

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Damn this was easy for ya Kirk. lol But hey it's not your fault your a lyrical Jesus. Oh well back to life. *watches porn*

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Tha 1 An Onlii B:
Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
6/10 - Good Personal.
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
6/10 - Good Punch.
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
6/10 - Good Punch.
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
7/10 - Good Wordplay.
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"
5/10 - OK.
30/50
You had a good verse, it flowed well you had good personals, and punchlines and it flowed well.

OSB:
This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
5/10 - Good Personal.
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
7/10 - Good Personal.
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
5/10 - Ok.
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
5/10 - ok.
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*
6/10
28/30

You had a ok flow, your punches were good, some good personals and ok wordplay.

Vote - Tha

thanx for tha vote man, uppin for more on this....

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

That was a bullshit vote for you man...

Kirk got this, hands down.

That dude must be handicapped.....







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lmfao saying the SOUL TO BE MINE is a good punch...thats why you're whack GK

If you look at it 28/30 is a higher percentage than 37/50. So OSb would get that vote even by your fucked up ass vote. Loser.

Lmfao

Idk how i got that vote, if you look at that one time i posted i even admitted that i knew i lost, idk how i got it...anyway, uppin for this

Sorry that I made a mistake and put 30 instead of 50. Fuck people need to learn the shut up when shit dont go there own way. Fuck if im sooo wrong, then you will have nothin' to worry about. Just D/R 5 Votes.

uppin for votes on this right here, come on lets close this battle

uppin............................................. ....VOTE DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

ok i dotn really feel like explaining it
this was jsut an unfaior match up obviously
u had better punches and wordplay both had good structure and flow

Who says I care who wins this.

uppin on this.............................................. ...

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Can't Vote Cause I Had To Restart My Damn Post Count, But I Think This Was A Real Good Battle, Both Came Nice, But IMO One Step Just Came Six Steps Ahead....Nice Job.

Uppppppiiiiinnnnngggg for votes on this, c'mon lets close this damn battle, its been goin on too long

uppin for votes on this...cmon close this right here

Uppity up up uppin for votes on this..............

upping and stuff..................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OneStepBeyond
This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
Nice nameplay..
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
Dopeness..
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
Dope..
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Bambi is cool shit..
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*
Nice wordplay..

vs.

Tha 1 An Onlii B
Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
Meh, pretty played on OSB..
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
Whack...
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
Bad flow/stupid punch..
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
Not Feelin..
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"***
Weak wordplay... yes I get it, the game Clue...it was still whack..

Vote: OneStepBeyond

Thought he came with witty wordplay, good flow and harder punches...

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Opener: 1 step (The name play personal on the double I took it)
Closer: 1 step (Onlii's closer line was hella stretched litterally and creatively... 1 Step's was just harder hitting and fit beter structurally)
Punches: 1 Step (the ER line was cool in Onlii's verse but 1 Step hit harder line for line)
Personals: 1 Step (the openning bar had the best personal in the battle)
Structure: 1 Step
Creativity: Tie
Complexity: Onlii
Wordplay: 1 Step (the Bam-B line was cool)
Enjoyment: 1 Step

Vote: One Step Beyond

Fuck. uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
^
Thats prolly your best attempt at a personal.

Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
^
Thats pretty nice wordplay


Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
^
Hahaha, Nice....definately the best bar in this battle.

Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
^
Kind of childish, but for some reason I laughed at it, nice man...real nice.

OSB's verse was much more consistant with the personals and punches....alot more creative too....not sayin B's was a bad verse, cause it wasnt....but OSB's verse killed it, for real

Vote-OSB....& If you got the time, rtf

Peace.

Link me and I shall return the favor and shit.....

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

this battle was whack..........mystique....your bars were redundant, and irrelevant through and through..you had no personals..no metaphors..no wordplay...nothing..it was awful....osb..your verse showed understanding of battling, but your lines wern't very hard hitting..they were a bit forced and just didn't have that "wow" factor, they all seemed a liittle elementary, but your mediocrity outshined mystiques awfulness.....by far