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MuRkInEm vs Natural killa
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-10-06 at 05:59 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
MuRkInEm has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-06 05:59 PM.
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Dumb. To think this cat's a natural killa~
When the most violence he's seen is the vid.eo to Thrilla~ Rakim's his avy, more convenient it couldn't have been~ Cause when this' is over ya'll gonna say I Rak(d h)im~ I'll split him, pull his spine out and spin it on the tip~ I'm not kidding, the boy will be doing backflips~ I'm badd when I spit, it could be called verboten~ Mangle his hand, leave him a finger so the other fo(u)r()gotten~ Nine lines already, damn not enough to address your flaws~ But hey, a full size novel couldn't even address them all~ |
come on now. dont make me waste this verse. lets go.
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Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-06 05:00 PM.
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Pointless to even begin,no-one likes merk..they all Hatin on your fight Wastin your verse?why bother,you've already wasted your life You must be really late,dyke..cuz all's ya shit's played,it's been done before Ur like a bird down it's last breath.. that still hasn't begun to soar It's fun,for sure..pickin' on you & being a bully,can't say i don't love it & Rap's called a mountain to some,so i can say u fell off the summit Hell,your a dumb bitch,that's stays clueless..you got no sense If dicks were balloons you'd prolly be the first to blow them Let go of the pen,it's like murder..cuz your beyond wack your verse can't "strike"..like havin' an unbreakable contract Cats may say some ya shit's dope..but that's only cuz u bit those But Lyrically insane it is............. to even think that your shit's dope BLAAAAAAAAAHhhhh.......My mind is blank right now :( His sig says lyrically insane. BTW |
Voted For: Natural killa
NK came weak as fuck, and still owned. Murk, fix your structure and concepts. RTF. |
10 lines. I count 12?
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Whatev. Uppin fo' some votes.
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you put 10-unlimited lines. meanining 10 minimum...unlimited maximum, |
oooh...and thanks for the vote daubs..............
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yeah. i had forgot what I put up there. meant to edit the post but I see that can't happen. my bad on that one kid.
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Voted For: Natural killa
punches-nk personals-nk multies-nk, altho he had only about two metaphors-nk, although weak creativity-nk structure-nk seen better from nk but this was a weak battle compared to his other shit..........rtf in my battle against tech homie |
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thx for the vote,and post a link to the battle you want me to RTF on and I'll do it. |
Voted For: Natural killa
Dumb. To think this cat's a natural killa~ When the most violence he's seen is the vid.eo to Thrilla~ ^^^weak opener Rakim's his avy, more convenient it couldn't have been~ Cause when this' is over ya'll gonna say I Rak(d h)im~ ^^^ight I'll split him, pull his spine out and spin it on the tip~ I'm not kidding, the boy will be doing backflips~ ^^^No I'm badd when I spit, it could be called verboten~ Mangle his hand, leave him a finger so the other fo(u)r()gotten~ ^^^No Nine lines already, damn not enough to address your flaws~ But hey, a full size novel couldn't even address them all ^^^ight closer Pointless to even begin,no-one likes merk..they all Hatin on your fight Wastin your verse?why bother,you've already wasted your life ^^^ight opener You must be really late,dyke..cuz all's ya shit's played,it's been done before Ur like a bird down it's last breath.. that still hasn't begun to soar ^^^Lol good It's fun,for sure..pickin' on you & being a bully,can't say i don't love it & Rap's called a mountain to some,so i can say u fell off the summit ^^^good Hell,your a dumb bitch,that's stays clueless..you got no sense If dicks were balloons you'd prolly be the first to blow them ^^^ight Let go of the pen,it's like murder..cuz your beyond wack your verse can't "strike"..like havin' an unbreakable contract ^^^good Cats may say some ya shit's dope..but that's only cuz u bit those But Lyrically insane it is............. to even think that your shit's dope ^^^Good closer V/Nk......he gets my vote he came wit a good verse that was consistent an had good punchs some were ight but alot were fresh he gets my vote....RTF in the sig |
Voted For: MuRkInEm
murkin my vote goes to u . ur guys verses were even but that first line in murkins verse won it natural killa ur lines were good keep on gettin it |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
sup...............................................
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Voted For: Natural killa
nk def got this punches-nk personals-didn't really see any metaphors-nk creativity-nk overall-nk his vere was just more fresh and came harder at you merk.....nice battle.....rtf on anyone of my battles ya'll, thanks |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
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This was feedback posted for MuRkInEm
Pointless to even begin,no-one likes merk..they all Hatin on your fight
Wastin your verse?why bother,you've already wasted your life concept ok, punch is weak, wordplay is ok You must be really late,dyke..cuz all's ya shit's played,it's been done before Ur like a bird down it's last breath.. that still hasn't begun to soar a lil played out It's fun,for sure..pickin' on you & being a bully,can't say i don't love it & Rap's called a mountain to some,so i can say u fell off the summit Nice wordplay, your best punch in your verse Hell,your a dumb bitch,that's stays clueless..you got no sense If dicks were balloons you'd prolly be the first to blow them Lol nce punch - ok wordplay - played out concept Let go of the pen,it's like murder..cuz your beyond wack your verse can't "strike"..like havin' an unbreakable contract nce wordplay ok punch Cats may say some ya shit's dope..but that's only cuz u bit those But Lyrically insane it is............. to even think that your shit's dope Nice closer - good punch vs. Dumb. To think this cat's a natural killa~ When the most violence he's seen is the vid.eo to Thrilla~ ha lol nce punch - good opener Rakim's his avy, more convenient it couldn't have been~ Cause when this' is over ya'll gonna say I Rak(d h)im~ good concept, should have worded it better - played out I'll split him, pull his spine out and spin it on the tip~ I'm not kidding, the boy will be doing backflips~ lmfao nce worplay - best punch in your verse I'm badd when I spit, it could be called verboten~ Mangle his hand, leave him a finger so the other fo(u)r()gotten~ Nice wordplay - ok punch Nine lines already, damn not enough to address your flaws~ But hey, a full size novel couldn't even address them all~ Good concept - ok punch - ok closer damn good battle both really had hard punches so when it all comes down i looked who was more creative and wittier both textees really did good on this battle and came with some good wordplay and punches but wit no hate i think MerkInEm came a little more wittier and creative so he gets my vote Vote = MerkInEm |
Voted For: MuRkInEm
yo betta structure and hardre punchez iight fo sho |
well. i got three votes, but one of the cats didnt poll it. but aight, uppin it.
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lmao at this.
You got whored... lol at all the newbies gettin in here too... NK RTF, i onmly got 1 open.. |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
....................................checkin the polls man.................
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Post a link and I'll RTF asap :thumbup: . |
Voted For: Natural killa
Vote: Natural Killa Flow was even between these catz, so that was a tie. Punches were a tie, I didn't feel like either had punches that were hard-hitting...Multis went to Natural killa, he had more of them...Wordplay went to Natural Killa, dug the "your verse can't "strike" like havin' unbreakable contract"...that was good shit...Personals went to Murkinem, though they weren't great, he had more than 1 of them in his drop...It was a pretty close battle, but I thought Natural Killa edged by in this one. Vote: Natural Killa |
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