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Adam 01-09-06 02:49 AM

3. It's SPuL vs. 31. Kool Col-B
 
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

16 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

J. Luth 01-09-06 07:01 AM

keyboard check 1,2, 1,2.....

KOOL COL-B 01-10-06 11:15 PM

check, werd

J. Luth 01-13-06 10:11 PM

shit, I totally forgot about this. So this shit is just some quick shit, w/e. I was too lazy to get his pic, but you all prolly seen it with bandana on and shit.

but word here:

Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo

ehh... w/e good luck Kool

KOOL COL-B 01-13-06 11:20 PM

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs

he's Indian

there wuz old wrestelers called N.W.A

Liz = girl he likes


:cool: werd

Abraxas 01-13-06 11:41 PM

Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
^LMFAO
I'd say SPuL had better punches but Kol B was more personal.

JTR 01-14-06 03:43 AM

First off, Spul, you shoulda said, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best of you, not the best out of you, it woulda been waaaaaaaaay doper to say, to get the best of you, anyways, and Col-B, you flipped my bolton bar, hoe, :)

SPuL:
Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over

vs.

Col-B
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
(these concepts are played but the towel part was original and this shit was just too damn funny, damn)
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard

v/Kool Col-B

Col-B cam waaaaaaaaaaaaaay better then I figured, kid must have really elevated or has a ghost writer or something, or was never trying before, iunno, but he came waaaaaaaaay better then I thought, damn

KOOL COL-B 01-14-06 04:00 AM

thanx mayn. yeah ive elevated alot, shits dope :cool: werd

J. Luth 01-14-06 11:50 AM

ehh aiight, so is it 1-0 kool or 1-1? I don't kno who paramik voted for. but uppin,.

Spektikul 01-14-06 01:09 PM

To be honest I thought Spul was gunna come super hard in here, which he sort of did...

However, Col-B came hard as fuck and in my opinion pulled this one off.

Very nice personals and wordplay man.

To me, it was basically...

Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo

VS

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs

Seemed like Spul was throwin more punches at Col-B's fam and gf, lol...

Therefore, in my opinion...

V/Kool Col-B............................

J. Luth 01-14-06 02:53 PM

aiight lookin' like 2-0 kool don't kno bout para's vote. but good shit kool. upp

Abraxas 01-14-06 03:00 PM

Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over

vs

now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs

SpuL wins thats my vote.
I ddin't like some of Col B Punches. and some wwer kinda played.

Cocaine 01-14-06 03:13 PM

Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
ehhh alrite
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
alrite again
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
sounds kinda corny
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
alrite good good
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
could be better
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
ehhh
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
alrite..
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo
ehhh kinda lame


this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
nice personal
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
ehh just a statement
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
alrite
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
alrite
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
funny shit...
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
nice personal
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
ehh could be better
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs
not feeling it

Overall: I think SPuL coulda came much better, i think alot of his punch's to me sound a little corny.. they were worded much better then Kool's but.. his verse was funnier, and had more personal's, so no hate to either, just feeling kool's verse a little more Vote: Kool Col-B

Willa 01-14-06 03:29 PM

Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
good line 8/10
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
lmao good personal only bad thing is the structure 9/10
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
ok line wasnt really feeling it 5/10
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
lmao funny shit 7/10
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
pretty cool line 6/10 kind of played
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
not feeling it 6/10
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
roflmao dope line 1st line was kind of blah but second line lmao at the wordplay 8.5/10
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo
ok line played though bad closer worst line in ur verse 5/10
overall 54.5

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
not a good opener wasnt really a punch 5.5/10
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
he was at wendy's lol gotta do what hes gotta do shit is played now 6/10
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
kind of feeding off of his verse this could have easily owned the whole battle if it was worded better 7.5/10
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
ok ine didnt really hit that hard 6/10
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
pretty good line again could have been worded better 7.5/10
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
good line i was feeling it 8/10
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
not feeling it 6.5/10
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs
didnt make sense perhaps u worded it wrong mad stretched 6.5/10
overall 53

okay both of ur structures werent good spuls especially
kool. could have killed the battle if he would have worded shit right so overall i vote spul even though he dropped off in the second half of the verse

Hoodz Prophet 01-14-06 03:32 PM

SPuL:

overall better verse i think...better flow and it made more sense to me...maybe because i know you're style or whatever the reason may be....it hit harder and had more punches couple multi's but you're too whack to do multi's anway ;P lmfaoo i can't really explain much but i really honestly think SPuL got this

Kol-B:
i just thought it didn't make sense you know? had a lotta personals so thats dope i think this was an almost even match i just liked SPuL's more and yeah its not favoritism...its just i'm too lazy to explain and i shouldn't really havta explain my opinion but anyway you had a couple good punches in here that made me laugh but i just think SPuL had harder punches naaahhh meaansss

and if anyone thinks this is a crew vote...i'm in TC and E-Style so that cancels each other out?...so i think thats good enough?

Vote: SPuL

Cocaine 01-14-06 03:34 PM

ohh for real.. i didnt know random people not in the tourny could vote?:huh:

J. Luth 01-14-06 03:42 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apostrophe
ohh for real.. i didnt know random people not in the tourny could vote?:huh:

Aren't you same cat who kept taking shots @ me in random threads? AND IMing me on countless times on AIM hating and shit trying to get me to beef with you? I don't care if you ain't like me, cuz I really don't like you. But seriously, why does what happens in my battle concern you? other people have had their battles voted by random people. Seriously, everytime I look you just trying to take shots @ me. just stfu and mind your own business. I wouldn't even want your vote to count, but it don't matter to me. but just stfu and stop keeping what I do on your mind.

Enygma 01-14-06 03:50 PM

Wasn't a bad battle....

Best punch was by far the x-mas line, but that was all Kool had.....the rest of his lines were nice concepts, but definitely needed to be reworded to even come close to connecting. SPuL had less powerful punches, but definitely more of them. So, my vote goes to......

Vote - SPuL

Cocaine 01-14-06 03:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by It's SPuL!
Aren't you same cat who kept taking shots @ me in random threads? AND IMing me on countless times on AIM hating and shit trying to get me to beef with you? I don't care if you ain't like me, cuz I really don't like you. But seriously, why does what happens in my battle concern you? other people have had their battles voted by random people. Seriously, everytime I look you just trying to take shots @ me. just stfu and mind your own business. I wouldn't even want your vote to count, but it don't matter to me. but just stfu and stop keeping what I do on your mind.



where did i take a shot @ u? unless taking shots at u is voting against u??

J. Luth 01-14-06 04:02 PM

^i'm not talkin' about that. I'm talkin' about, in LL i forget name of threads, but like there were like 3 or 4 times where you said shit to me after I made a post in thread, and in my member mugshot thread, and on AIM. I don't care if you vote against me. me and JTR are real tight, i don't care, i'm not gonna hate dude for voting against me. we still tight. I'm just saying, just worry about your shit, and not mine

Cocaine 01-14-06 04:06 PM

i didnt know i was worrying... dont hop on the defensive so soon.. i thought only other competitors could vote..

J. Luth 01-14-06 04:08 PM

Dude, i don't give a fuck about the vote. i'm talkin' about your second post. It's ok you voted, but seriously is there any need for you to come into thread again to give your 2 cents? No, just mind your own shit. And I don't care if I lose this battle, because it's not like I lost to someone wack and someone I hated. Kool came dope, and me and him tight, so shit won't matter. whenever i lose in KORV i'm prolly done with text.

FlowIntelligent. 01-14-06 04:32 PM

SPuL:

Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
Weak
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
Ok Meta, But Thats It
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
Ok[B]
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
[B]Corny[B]
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
[B]Good Shit

C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
OK
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
Ok Meta Decent Bar
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo
Stupid Yet Witty


KOOL COL-B:

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
Good Personal
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
Another Good Personal
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
Ok
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
Gay
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
Kinda Played But Still Decent
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
Lol Good
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
Ok Meta Weak Bar
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs
Stupid


Overall: Both had ok punches but Col-B edged this battle out with a couple witty personals. If Spul woulda dropped better personals he would have took this win but col-b stepped his game up here.


V/ KOOL COL - B

Ryan Hughes 01-14-06 05:15 PM

Dude, you've been a fan of me, since the beginnin' of this shit
So how can we go head to head, if you've been down on my dick?
^^^Ight opener
Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
^^^Lol....good
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
^^^Weak
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!
^^^Lmao....i liked this
Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
^^^Good
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
^^^Weak
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
^^^Lol this was ight
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo
^^^Weak closer

this tha 1st bar, but hiz chances of winnin r fuckin ruined
and wen i come 2 Bolton....... thats wut he's doin
^^^nice opener
but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
^^^Good
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
^^^Nice
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not
^^^Weak
ay man, u caynt rap, so in this battle, now ya dead
people think ur good at rappin... a towel around ya head
^^^lol....good
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard
^^^ight
my whole style iz betta then urs, so now its on, Lena
shit... N.W.A could beat tha SHIT outta John Cena
^^^Lol...good
im so much betta, this battle wouldnt b fair even if we did it in hiz cab
closest Sebastion got to bein on liz's pussy... iz wen i gave her crabs
^^^Weak closer

This was a close battle....both came pretty hard....kool u had some nice punchs that were funny....but u fell off at the end to me...the closer wasnt nice..its played...
spul u had a consistent verse u had some weeak lines but u made up for it later...u had some fresh lines that made me laugh....but i think Kool col-b came wit a stronger verse overall he had personals mixed wit the punchs that were funny ass fuck..V/kool col-b

J. Luth 01-14-06 06:21 PM

aiight so that's like 5-4 kool.... upp....

hot 01-14-06 10:10 PM

Dude looks like he adopted, he lost. I'm pretty sure..
That his parents treated him like the paper...
... they just left him at the door!
And what the hell's up with that du-rag? where the fuck have you been?
You must have stopped to think... and forgot to start again
Your family's like gay sex, man... they full of dicks
Bitch, it took your mom 9 months....
.....just to take a shit!

vs

but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
u a rich ass muthaphukka, so stop tryna act hard
tha only time u go 2 court, iz wen ur in ya backyard


really though spul took this with more quotables

J. Luth 01-15-06 02:42 PM

aiight thanks for vote. 5-5...... good battle spicca :shoot:

J. Luth 01-15-06 03:30 PM

,...............

J. Luth 01-15-06 05:37 PM

someone please vote on this. ~_~

Typical 01-15-06 10:06 PM

Proud to call himself a spic, "Oh don't step to the dude!"
Shit, I don't need your greatest hits to get the best out of you
C'mon, "spicca", I thought you was much smarter than that
I guess your mind must be lost...
... no much farther than that!
Your girl must be drunk, man, she never banging sober
.... how do I kno?....... Cuz she always hanging over
I'm not santa clause so when I say "ho ho ho"
I'm speakin' your mom.... your sister... and your ugly girlfriend yo

vs

but hey..... he's gotta do wut he's gotta do, shit
only time u in tha hood, iz on tha cover of comercial break 2, bitch
now hiz lil bitch crew, im treatin them like christmas
startin wif spul, ima x-mas off my hitlist
so wen it comes 2 wackness... i know u got alot
u git all tha votes, ur #1, but thats only on hot or not


spul had a better verse overal

Adam 01-16-06 01:26 AM

SPuL wins 6-5 and advances.

Adam 01-16-06 01:27 AM

This thread is now closed.

Adam 01-16-06 01:27 AM

Moved to closed battles.


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