MarvolousJay vs 9th Degree
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-12-06 at 02:24 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

ready when you are

If you have to wait for someone, you're not ready.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-06 01:12 PM.

MaRVOLOUSJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-06 01:19 PM.

da sickest? nah u a liar slut....couldn't be a thug u got no kind of guts.
9th's gay his 'alias' 2 cuzz only MEN..........& RiDE ON FiRE TRUCK.*
rite now u probly in shock scared holdin ya face,pussy! i know dat ya fake.
you a nobody dat everyone 'sleeps' on..ya rv boys wont even show 2 ya WaKE.
............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.
would talk about ya moms but DRaKEL a get mad so i'll pass on da teethless hore.
believe it dog and u only 'a head of ya time' cuzz u were born PREMaTURE.

*=his alias is mc firetruck

dont get shit dont vote..gonna hate? dont vote

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

9th degree takes my place marv im too tired to set up, im out
nice battle fellas

Voted For: 9th Degree

da sickest? nah u a liar slut....couldn't be a thug u got no kind of guts.
9th's gay his 'alias' 2 cuzz only MEN..........& RiDE ON FiRE TRUCK.*
^ guts make you thug? ehh, okay i guess 4/10
rite now u probly in shock scared holdin ya face,pussy! i know dat ya fake.
you a nobody dat everyone 'sleeps' on..ya rv boys wont even show 2 ya WaKE.
^ extremely bad wording, 2/10
............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
^ not bad, but concept is hella played 3/10
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
^ uhmm, no, mainly because its a stupid thing to say 1/10
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.
^ i usually see 9th very outgoing, 1/10
would talk about ya moms but DRaKEL a get mad so i'll pass on da teethless hore.
believe it dog and u only 'a head of ya time' cuzz u were born PREMaTURE.
^ played 2/10 (plus one for mentioning drakel)

13/60...not bad marv, looks like you're a little rusty, you had some not bad stuff, but i think every line suffered from bad wording, alot of concepts were played though, had some okay multies though, keep up

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
^ meh, 4/10
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
^ laughed at this 5/10
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
^ meh, i've seen alot of fishermen stuff, its easy 4/10
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
^ nice, i liked this 7/10
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
^ this one as well, two good bars 6/10
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy
^ meh, okay 4/10

30/60....meh, not bad, i can see you're definately rusty, or else this was just a key, but still, a couple nice lines in a row there that made me laugh, but overall, you were more consistent with punches, didn't really have any played concepts, and had some humour in there that worked well

v/9th Degree

rtf on this battle please
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121

Ok, let's get this closed already.

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

Mc Firetruck wins.

Voted For: 9th Degree

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy

vs

nothing..

Vote: 9th Degree

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: 9th Degree

Wow.....when I saw this battle I really thought it was gonna be a lot better. 9th had some pretty nice punches in his verse.....I especially liked the Belly line, but I could hardly make out what the hell MarvyJay was trying to say half the time. It's like he wasn't even speaking english. He also had some horribly stretched lines.....

Pretty obvious one here...

Vote - 9th Degree

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

pollio-s

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

MaRVOLOUSJay:
da sickest? nah u a liar slut....couldn't be a thug u got no kind of guts.
9th's gay his 'alias' 2 cuzz only MEN..........& RiDE ON FiRE TRUCK.*
4/10 - Weak Personal.
rite now u probly in shock scared holdin ya face,pussy! i know dat ya fake.
you a nobody dat everyone 'sleeps' on..ya rv boys wont even show 2 ya WaKE.
5/10 - ok wordplay.
............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
7/10 - Good Punch/Personal.
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
6/10 - OK punch.
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.
5/10 - good multi's.
would talk about ya moms but DRaKEL a get mad so i'll pass on da teethless hore.
believe it dog and u only 'a head of ya time' cuzz u were born PREMaTURE.
7/10 - good punchline.
34/60

You had a good flow, your punches where hitten hard and you used good wordplay and punches.


9th Degree:
You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
5/10 - OK Opener.
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
6/10 - Good Punch.
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
5/10 - Ok Punch.
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
6/10 - Good Punch.
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
5/10 - OK.
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy
5/10 - ok.
32/60

You had a good flow, you used some good punches, you had ok personals.

OVERALL: This was a close battle, but Marv gets my vote, he had the better punches, and he used good wordplay and personals. 9th I have seen you come up with much better shit that that, you should have came harder.

Vote - Marv

RTF in SIG!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for MaRVOLOUSJay
 

I aint even gonna waste my time voting cause MarvJay got this eazily

Lmfao.

Let's close this one already.

2 more votes needed, time to close this.

So you're saying that nameplays are good if they've been used on 3 different sites?

Voted For: 9th Degree

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand

vs.

nothing

v/9th Degree

Marv had a few good concepts but he lacked the wording, and came not as good as he could come f'real.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

Upin this shit for yall.................................

So I was up 4-1 last night, now I'm only up 2-0 now. Weird. Oh well, 3 more votes neede.

*Twiddles thumbs*

omfg, strobe is so fucking lame, rofl. wow.........

This was feedback posted for MaRVOLOUSJay
 

couldnt understand shit marv said but i imagine it goes something like this "ima gangsta,you a wanksta,hitcha wit guns,i know you're dumb, see da-feet,you aint street." MJ sounds something like that right?....but to lazy to translate all of marvs lines.

Ok...still need 3 more votes. Should only need 1 vote, but Marv got emotionally troubled by the fact that he only got one vote. But now he doesn't have any, haha.

Upping again. This could've been closed a lot sooner if Marv didn't cry to strobe.

shut da up fuck dogg

Voted For: 9th Degree

And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy

VS

............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.

V./ 9th,

Drop a vote on me vs KS please.

Voted For: 9th Degree

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends

I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
vs.
uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
..
vote degree for more direct wordplay and punches. i liked that degree line the best out of all of the lines but i didn't feel the rest of your verse cuz they werent good disses. also marvs bars were a little stretch and capping your PuNCHES doesn't make them better.
good battle overall of course.
please return with a vote on my battle vs slicknife
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
an ok opener.....
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
nice punch
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
ehhh...it's ok
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
nice....pretty good punchline
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
lol....funny shit
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy
ehhh....not so good of closer....

This verse was ok, seen way better from you 9th....could have had some better wording on some things but it did have a few laughs in there



da sickest? nah u a liar slut....couldn't be a thug u got no kind of guts.
9th's gay his 'alias' 2 cuzz only MEN..........& RiDE ON FiRE TRUCK.*
nice personal...good pucnh as well
rite now u probly in shock scared holdin ya face,pussy! i know dat ya fake.
you a nobody dat everyone 'sleeps' on..ya rv boys wont even show 2 ya WaKE.
not really feelin this bar......maybe wording was wrong
............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
lmao......that last line was the shit...funny ass shit
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
not feeling this bar
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.
lmao....nice hit....good wordplay
would talk about ya moms but DRaKEL a get mad so i'll pass on da teethless hore.
believe it dog and u only 'a head of ya time' cuzz u were born PREMaTURE.
nice punch jay and good closer


well this battle was pretty good...but overall jay had some funny bars and some good personals as well. 9th you lacked stuff in a few places....some punches could have been worded better but still a good verse......good battle

rtf in my battle against tavarez

Voted For: 9th Degree

yea niggas......................................./