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D-mat 01-13-06 06:22 PM

D-mat vs B1ZK3T
 
Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding
No Crew Votes
No Feeding

Lets pop this thing off!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-16-06 at 06:22 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 06:38 PM

I'm only goin' 10-15 lines....Consider this my check, I'll have my verse in 10-15 minutes...

System 01-13-06 06:40 PM

D-mat has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 06:40 PM.

D-mat 01-13-06 06:49 PM

biscuit liek fred ur dick just gets limp..
you cant flow, bitch you ain't no pimp..
on Rb they clowned and here they don't know..
after this shit thet wotn dig your flow..
tried mic wrecker to do your thang..
but in the punch league u didnt get no ring..
eminem is your hero but next to him ur zero..
cant step to me cuz im gangsat leik deniro..
evrysite you go they make fun of ya flow..
and you never battle, you just suck ass yo..
you cant think of whole verses you to slow..
with this battle i can keep dissing and dissing..
you wan this to be over, you keep wishin..
you came up when i was faggot fishing..
im like wu tang the worst adn ur fred durst..
when im done with you they need a good nurse..
i fucked your bitch then stole her gucci purse..
fuck with this PSA crew and you leave ina hearse..
dotn try to pretend play, everyone knows u gay..
and im out, d-mat be repping the dynasty of the PSA!

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 06:56 PM

D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast
Swear the rap game turned inta a movie the way he act
I can then just switch my flow and then stitch a hoe
Admit it yo, this bitch is froze, an' has been exposed
Dis-Gust ya gates 'cause we all know that windows blows
We should realize this battle's been no holds, oh no
I mean I go stole, hollywood won't give the green light
You think I'm mean right, my fans are like fiends aight?
And if I just lean right, ya seen light, now ya be blind
Ya can't see strikes when ya head's already layin' beside
Actin' like Rambo in this battle ya still can't eva be sly

System 01-13-06 06:58 PM

B1ZK3T has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 06:58 PM.

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 07:04 PM

D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast
Swear the rap game turned inta a movie the way he act
I can then just switch my flow and then stitch a hoe
Admit it yo, this bitch is froze, an' has been exposed
Dis-Gust ya gates 'cause we all know that windows blows
We should realize this battle's been no holds, oh no
I mean I go stole, hollywood won't give the green light
You think I'm mean right, my fans are like fiends aight?
And if I just lean right, ya seen light, now ya be blind
Ya can't see strikes when ya head's already layin' beside
Actin' like Rambo in this battle ya still can't eva be sly

D-mat 01-13-06 07:11 PM

damn homie that was pretty good.

o.O 01-13-06 07:13 PM

Voted For: B1ZK3T

D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast

^^highlight of the battle, cept the second line was not too strong...liked B-flat thing

Bizket- Good drop...funny and decent word usage and punches

D-Mat- You could have done way better it was way weak and lack luster on your part
v/B1ZK3T

Germ 01-13-06 07:13 PM

Voted For: B1ZK3T

D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast
^ i laughed at the first line....but how do we know you roll your weed fast?
Swear the rap game turned inta a movie the way he act
I can then just switch my flow and then stitch a hoe
Admit it yo, this bitch is froze, an' has been exposed
Dis-Gust ya gates 'cause we all know that windows blows
We should realize this battle's been no holds, oh no
I mean I go stole, hollywood won't give the green light
You think I'm mean right, my fans are like fiends aight?
And if I just lean right, ya seen light, now ya be blind
Ya can't see strikes when ya head's already layin' beside
Actin' like Rambo in this battle ya still can't eva be sly

^ you need to grasp a better idea of what a punch is, butyou took it, i'm too lazy to go through the rest of your verse

biscuit liek fred ur dick just gets limp..
you cant flow, bitch you ain't no pimp..
on Rb they clowned and here they don't know..
after this shit thet wotn dig your flow..
tried mic wrecker to do your thang..
but in the punch league u didnt get no ring..
eminem is your hero but next to him ur zero..
cant step to me cuz im gangsat leik deniro..
evrysite you go they make fun of ya flow..
and you never battle, you just suck ass yo..
you cant think of whole verses you to slow..
with this battle i can keep dissing and dissing..
you wan this to be over, you keep wishin..
you came up when i was faggot fishing..
im like wu tang the worst adn ur fred durst..
when im done with you they need a good nurse..
i fucked your bitch then stole her gucci purse..
fuck with this PSA crew and you leave ina hearse..
dotn try to pretend play, everyone knows u gay..
and im out, d-mat be repping the dynasty of the PSA!

^ you had no real punches, you tried, but you failed, elevate, sorry to be blunt, but only way you'll recognize, nah saying?

v/bizkit....oh yeah, change your name

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 07:27 PM

Quote:
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast
^ i laughed at the first line....but how do we know you roll your weed fast?


Because I use a inch and a half rolling machine, lol...and an herb grinder...lol...Now you know...lol...And why would I change my name? This nickname has sentimental value, and it has nothing to do with limp dicks...

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 07:29 PM

Thanks for votes, UPPIN' FOR VOTES lol...Get this closed so we can pick a winner...

Germ 01-13-06 07:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B1ZK3T
Because I use a inch and a half rolling machine, lol...and an herb grinder...lol...Now you know...lol...And why would I change my name? This nickname has sentimental value, and it has nothing to do with limp dicks...


okay, it just looks gay, cause you know, limp bizzzzkit and all

B1ZK3T 01-13-06 08:05 PM

It's a nickname my bro gave me, he's one of my main influences for rapping so....Yah...

B1ZK3T 01-14-06 07:17 PM

UPPIN' FA VOTES Y'ALL, C'MON...VOTE!!! UPPIN' VOTES, good luck D, no hard feelins either way, aight bro? peaz ~ONE~

Juss Nyce 01-14-06 09:35 PM

This was feedback posted for D-mat
 
pretty decent battle...................... just checcin poll

Frank White 01-14-06 11:41 PM

Voted For: B1ZK3T

B1ZK3T-You had less punches but you had better ones that topped his, it seems like you started off great but near the middle you kinda lost it, but you still gettin my vote.

D-mat-You had a few good ones here n there but the flow got fucked up cus you had some weak punches there, it was like one good punch every what two to three lines, chopped up flow.

B1ZK3T 01-15-06 12:21 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Juss Nyce
pretty decent battle...................... just checcin poll

Since ya can check, how 'bout ya vote???

Nick Knack 01-15-06 02:05 AM

This was feedback posted for D-mat
 
biz- no real punchez in your verse. youve got nothing in this verse i like. work on your wording.

dmat- u need to work on your wording to make real punchez. also, try making some witty stuff. had a few ok punches.

Im Dope Man 01-15-06 02:21 AM

This was feedback posted for B1ZK3T
 
yo i thought biz took it cause he lines were less played

Abraxas 01-15-06 02:27 AM

Voted For: B1ZK3T

You win Dmat has no punches whatsoever
Dmat: your just saying crap about him its not even a diss. "I'm gangster liek deniro"WTF? all your doing is putting dumb sentences togeter and putting a rhyme on it.
your flow was bad i don't even know why you were acepted to psa. I can take that whole crew out by myself.
Biz: your verse was not as good but it had some punches and some ok personals you win this. youhad better stucture and flow and your were kinda better
v/ Biz

B1ZK3T 01-15-06 03:56 AM

Ummmmmmmm, I don't understand it...Do y'all not get my punches or what? Maybe I needa tone down the complexity abit

D-mat 01-16-06 12:00 PM

alrite uppin all we need is one more

GKillaz05 01-16-06 09:36 PM

Voted For: B1ZK3T

B1ZK3T - You had an ok verse, your punches where ok, and you had an ok flow.

Best Line - D-Mat will get a piano dropped on his head and B-Flat
Beat that, one line I'm rollin' ya like my weed, fast

Worst Line - Ya can't see strikes when ya head's already layin' beside
Actin' like Rambo in this battle ya still can't eva be sly

D-Mat - You had basic rhymes. You didnt really use any wordplay or punches.

Best Line - on Rb they clowned and here they don't know..
after this shit thet wotn dig your flow..

Worst Line - Most of those lines - sorry dude.

OVERALL - This battle was one sided. Biz gets the win. He had the better flow, and his punchlines where better. D-Mat your shit was to basic. You need to up your lines, think more creative punchlines, and try to learn wordplay. You also need to start usin' personals. Check the tutorials!

Vote - B1ZK3T

RTF in SIG!


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