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Apparition vs o.O
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-16-06 at 09:03 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
o.O has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 09:03 PM.
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Apparition has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 09:03 PM.
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Wack verse? I Chew-Those, a body bag? Who-Knows!/
I run Through-Hoes, like a "0" in ya name i got You-Froze//* I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/ I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition// Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/ Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//** I need a Shot-at-Fame, dont be mad that i Bought-you-Shame/ Plan it out you need a Plot-to-Aim, its like im battlin myself cuz you aint Got-a-Name//*** Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/ Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death//**** -------------------------------------------------- * ~ o.O add a "0" o0O <- snowman lol ("froze" scared also, get it?) ** ~ Dead Sea is WaY BeLoW sea level *** ~ o.O isn't a name lol **** ~ Hearts beat to death, they beat till you die |
Say whatever you want kid, but Imma tell you now I ain't listening
And battling you is like battling air, cuz nothing seems to be hittin me This battle is plain black and white....even more so then Ricky and Lucy Makin "dough rise"? NAH...only this "baker's" AVATAR can afford Gucci Feeling like a diamond in the rough? Well they say diamonds are forever Drink 'dabeers' vomit and the clean floor is the only shine you'll have ever* Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass" I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast" Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! |
uppin cmon vote here
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wheres the votes at? dont sleep on this battle .
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This was feedback posted for o.O
lmfao @ recyclin'
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who recycling?
i know your not talking about me ! |
I flipped a concept I used in cypher, but cypher doesn't count....
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This was feedback posted for o.O
.......................checkin the polls man....................
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Voted For: Apparition
Apparition-You took this one nigga you dropped it better, I found no loss of flow from you, so you got the vote. o.O-Had a few good punches, the lucy n gucci thing, the rest was just same old shit I've seen before. |
Voted For: o.O
app- one whole bar was nothing. overall your punchez didnt really do shit. your forced to much shit in there to try and make punchez, really need to work on that. oo- had some nice punchez in here, but cum lines suck, no matter what you do. just stay more consistant and you will be fine. work on better personalz though. v- oo |
thats kool i guess
1-1 upping for me votes .......... |
.................................................. ...............bump!
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Voted For: o.O
BOTH HAD A COUPLE DECENT PUNCHES ..OR ATTEMPTS AT LEAST BUT I BELIEVE THE o.O won but i question wuts up wit the name?...n e ways punches:equal personals:none really 2 me by either multis:neither structure:both flow:o.O....apparition u like me wit stretched lines not 2 bad but shorten them a bit homie. vote: o.O both really didnt make go yo dat was nice or wow or w/e but i believe o.O...came a lil stronger...RTF on any of my battles open got like 3-4 peace |
whoa dat wasn't suppose 2 make a smiley...lol gotta rememba spaces between shit liek that
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Voted For: o.O
o.O - Your flow was ok, you had a good structure and you had some ok punchlines. Best Line - Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! Worst Line - Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass" I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast" Apparition - You had a pretty sick rap. It had some good multi's in there. No real punches tho. Best Line - I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/ I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition// Worst Line - Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/ Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//** OVERALL - This was a pretty weak battle. I have to give my vote to o.O though for tryin' to come up with punches, and flowin' well. Appa you need to work on wordplay and punchlines when you rap, and try throwin' some personals in there as well. Vote - o.O RTF in SIG or VOTE will be REMOVED! |
vote up you all uppin cmon
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Voted For: Apparition
Vote - Apparition Seemed pretty one-sided to me. Apparition took flow and multis, because he was able to make both work together, and made his verse way stronger. He took Personals easily, with his first and fourth bars doin' some damage. Wordplay was a little weak from both, none had anything earth-shattering. Punches were about even from both catz. Vote: Apparition |
Voted For: Apparition
a yo betta structure and harder punches overall vote //Appartion |
Voted For: Apparition
Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/ Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death/ ok closer app. u getting better keep on workin on it Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! ok closer u getting better too o.O and the winner is app. |
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This was feedback posted for o.O
Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin!
why have i heard that before oh cuz you recycled it from a cypher thats why rules say no recycling from what i remember |
Voted For: o.O
hmmm this was one of the closer battles I've voted on here... both of you actually came to play and flashed a lil skill doing it... which seems to be kinda rare around here... Opener: o.O Closer: o.O Punches: Apparition Personals: Apparition (the Avatar line hurt o.O's verse because we can't see avatar's while we're actually voting) Creativity: Apparition Creativity: Apparition Structure: o.O Enjoyment: o.O Vote: o.O |
Voted For: o.O
Apparition Wack verse? I Chew-Those, a body bag? Who-Knows!/ I run Through-Hoes, like a "0" in ya name i got You-Froze//* No punch, just self glorification. I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/ I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition// Self glorification. Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/ Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//** Meh, first line was a filler, punch was ok, not creative though. I need a Shot-at-Fame, dont be mad that i Bought-you-Shame/ Plan it out you need a Plot-to-Aim, its like im battlin myself cuz you aint Got-a-Name//*** Concept was very weak, punch was bad. Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/ Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death//**** Self glorification. Overall, you really only had one decent punch, rest was self glorification and mindless babble. Work on making every line count, and also using better concepts. o.O Say whatever you want kid, but Imma tell you now I ain't listening And battling you is like battling air, cuz nothing seems to be hittin me Played concept, wording was bad. This battle is plain black and white....even more so then Ricky and Lucy Makin "dough rise"? NAH...only this "baker's" AVATAR can afford Gucci Concept is played, punch is blah. Feeling like a diamond in the rough? Well they say diamonds are forever Drink 'dabeers' vomit and the clean floor is the only shine you'll have ever* Wording was really bad, concept was ok. Punch was bad. Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass" I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast" Mom punches = no Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! Punch was blah, concept was blah. Overall, you are quite basic I feel. You are decent, but you really need some help and elevation. Work on more original concepts and wordplay, and leave an explanation for certain punches like sig and avatars, cuz we can't see his av or sig. -------------------- My vote goes to o.O for a better verse and more punches. Both of you need to elevate and start using better personals and concepts. v- o.O |
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