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*Antic* 01-15-06 02:28 AM

Tech Methodz vs *Antic*
 
Battle Rules:

6 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickridin'
Blind drops

one.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-18-06 at 02:28 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-15-06 02:28 AM

*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-06 02:28 AM.

System 01-15-06 05:06 PM

Tech Methodz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-06 05:06 PM.

*Antic* 01-15-06 09:13 PM

I’ll ‘shred ya style’ like confetti n’ rip yo face off to ‘wreck ya smile’…
I ‘read ya file’ now my “method” is to shank dis ‘pedophile’//

Like an exorcism I’ll ‘spin his head’ then get leverage to ‘twist his neck…I’ll ‘grip this “Tech” then twist n’ squeeze until this ‘kid shits lead’//

My punches piss off dis D&D nerd cuz when I roll on him every hit is ‘critical’…Ya battle skills like callin’ “Tech” Support cuz your knowledge is ‘minimal’//

Take a ‘slow look closer’ man his style be like George ‘W. speeches…
Like a ‘pro-Bush poster’ I’m straight rippin’ this bitch ‘up into pieces’//

His skills like a ‘sluggish old man’ they as brittle and weak as ‘fake hips’…‘Fuck this slow man’ he can’t ‘up his vocab’ readin’ books on ‘space ships’//

Fuck ‘Tech’s Methodz’ I’ll make’um crash like teens in driving ‘test lessons’…Like cheaters ‘wreck bettin’ I’ll beat this ‘odd’ as easy as kids ‘get weapons’//

-Substance- 01-16-06 09:02 PM

You Butter Up Quick So It's No Wonder You Point Don't Get Across
I'll Place You Behind Bars.....Like You Just Encoutered With The Loss [laws]

This Kid's Wack, Preyed And Snapped, By Someone Who's Ill Tho
Antic Couldn't Raise Bars Even If He Came Equipped With Verizon Signals

You Couldn't Be Honda The Right Course If You Driven Accord-ingly
I'll Read You Shit And It Leaves My Mouth Open.......
.......But From Yawing While It's Boring Me!

I'll Make The Hustle And Flow Like I'm Skilled Universal
People Leave The Room When You Spit.......
.........Like Overplayed Commercials!

See I Lay Out More Bricks Than Construction Workers On Duty
So Let Show You Skill Like You're Just Another Ignorant Newbie!

Ain't Got Time To Drop Some More....Too busy

*Antic* 01-16-06 09:36 PM

hey tech why you post under tech skillz when tha battle's wit Tech methodz

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-Substance- 01-17-06 12:38 AM

lol, i told strobe to change my name to tech skillz, so it ain't an alias.....although i was tech until i got banned for some stupid shit.............anyways, drop fool.

*Antic* 01-17-06 03:26 PM

hey man I posted above ya before ya dropped, just lettin' ya know...

also, you should copy n' paste your drop in the first post of the thread so the battle will change colors so these bastards kin vote.

nice drop.

1

-Substance- 01-17-06 04:41 PM

oh, i can't see your drop homie....well whatever, can we get some votes

-Substance- 01-19-06 10:05 AM

uppin for some votes in this............................

..Grillz.. 01-19-06 01:15 PM

Voted For: Tech Methodz

Tech
Best Line -

You Couldn't Be Honda The Right Course If You Driven Accord-ingly
I'll Read You Shit And It Leaves My Mouth Open.......
.......But From Yawing While It's Boring Me!

Worst Line -
See I Lay Out More Bricks Than Construction Workers On Duty
So Let Show You Skill Like You're Just Another Ignorant Newbie

Overall -FLow was iight, kinda wack tho, keep doin ya thang, serious, u a good rappa yo....1

Antics
Best Line -
I’ll ‘shred ya style’ like confetti n’ rip yo face off to ‘wreck ya smile’…
I ‘read ya file’ now my “method” is to shank dis ‘pedophile’//

Worst Line -

Fuck ‘Tech’s Methodz’ I’ll make’um crash like teens in driving ‘test lessons’…
Like cheaters ‘wreck bettin’ I’ll beat this ‘odd’ as easy as kids ‘get weapons’//


Overall - It was tiight dude, serious, i liked it, flowed ok, vocab was goo, but still was pretty wack dude, keep doin it man, serious


Vote - Tech Methodz
and only becuz his flowed better, close battle but tech takes it

GKillaz05 01-19-06 01:24 PM

Voted For: Tech Methodz

*Antic*:
I’ll ‘shred ya style’ like confetti n’ rip yo face off to ‘wreck ya smile’…
I ‘read ya file’ now my “method” is to shank dis ‘pedophile’//
3/10 - Stupid Bar.

Like an exorcism I’ll ‘spin his head’ then get leverage to ‘twist his neck…I’ll ‘grip this “Tech” then twist n’ squeeze until this ‘kid shits lead’//
3/10 - Also gay.

My punches piss off dis D&D nerd cuz when I roll on him every hit is ‘critical’…Ya battle skills like callin’ “Tech” Support cuz your knowledge is ‘minimal’//
5/10 - Good Punch.

Take a ‘slow look closer’ man his style be like George ‘W. speeches…
Like a ‘pro-Bush poster’ I’m straight rippin’ this bitch ‘up into pieces’//
3/10 - Pro-Bush Poster?.. hmm.

His skills like a ‘sluggish old man’ they as brittle and weak as ‘fake hips’…‘Fuck this slow man’ he can’t ‘up his vocab’ readin’ books on ‘space ships’//
4/10 - ok closer.
18/50

You had some ok bats, mostly played ones though. You had an ok flow.



Tech Skillz:
You Butter Up Quick So It's No Wonder You Point Don't Get Across
I'll Place You Behind Bars.....Like You Just Encoutered With The Loss [laws]
4/10 - ok opener, laws and loss dont work tho.
This Kid's Wack, Preyed And Snapped, By Someone Who's Ill Tho
Antic Couldn't Raise Bars Even If He Came Equipped With Verizon Signals
4/10 - ok bar.
You Couldn't Be Honda The Right Course If You Driven Accord-ingly
I'll Read You Shit And It Leaves My Mouth Open.......
.......But From Yawing While It's Boring Me!
5/10 - good punch.

I'll Make The Hustle And Flow Like I'm Skilled Universal
People Leave The Room When You Spit.......
.........Like Overplayed Commercials!
5/10 - good.
See I Lay Out More Bricks Than Construction Workers On Duty
So Let Show You Skill Like You're Just Another Ignorant Newbie!
3/10 - weak.
Fuck ‘Tech’s Methodz’ I’ll make’um crash like teens in driving ‘test lessons’…Like cheaters ‘wreck bettin’ I’ll beat this ‘odd’ as easy as kids ‘get weapons’//
3/10 - Diss yourself?..
24/50

You had an ok flow, your punches were hitten alright and good multi's.

Vote - Tech Skillz

-Substance- 01-19-06 02:50 PM

uppin for more votes peeps...........................

Snypa 01-19-06 03:12 PM

Voted For: *Antic*

Flow: Tech
Metaz: Tech
Similes: Antic...................................
Punches: Antic
Personals: Dunno.............lol
Creativity: Tie

v-Antic

Tech, u were not very consitant through this battle, kinda fell of on some punches and then came back on others, try to remain constantly hard

Antic, too many similes (like/as) almost ruined the effect of ur verse if u did not have those punches, using metaphors (without like/as) has more of an affect and can greatly improve ur punches

*Antic* 01-19-06 03:24 PM

thanks to tha voters for good feedback...much props...good battle...

-Substance- 01-19-06 05:09 PM

that's cool.................nice drop homie, uppin for some more shit

twenty9 01-19-06 11:35 PM

Voted For: *Antic*

*antic* cuz his opening was stronger in my opinion and i felt that he had more flow and his rhymes tied better

but tech had the better closer but i couldn't see any rhyming in the first 2 bars (note i know across rhymes with loss but appearently the word was supposed 2 b laws so it didnt make 2 much sence 2 me)


Removed by Tech Skillz's request

*Antic* 01-19-06 11:40 PM

that explaination is kinda vague...tech, we kin keep that or you kin scrap that, whatever ya want.

twenty9, be real specific when ya explain stuff, break it down into categories.

twenty9 01-19-06 11:49 PM

aight u can scrap it if u wish, i'll rewrite it l8er but im kinda lazy so i wont get around 2 it 2nite and dont worry, i'll write it like it was a fuckin english exam, speekin of skool, im gonna spend more time on this than the 2 projects i got due on the 23rd

-Substance- 01-20-06 12:38 AM

you choose, i won't scrap it since i don't want you to think i do it to win......but all my bars rhymed.....it's cool tho

*Antic* 01-20-06 08:06 PM

uppin' this one for some more votes....................................

-Substance- 01-21-06 11:18 PM

uppin this for mroe votes peeps............i'll rtf...

Chi-townz Crime 01-22-06 12:25 AM

Voted For: *Antic*

a yo antic took dis one wit way harder punches and betta structure

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

snipes 01-22-06 02:55 AM

This was feedback posted for Tech Methodz
 
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-Substance- 01-22-06 11:22 PM

uppin this.............................................. .

*Antic* 01-24-06 02:54 AM

uppin' this for some votes............................................. .

*Antic* 01-24-06 10:59 PM

uppin' this for votes..............................

H.D. 01-27-06 10:26 AM

Voted For: *Antic*

Nothing rhymes with lead in Antic's 4th line... Rhyming is the name of the game... over everything else you have to rhyme... this is what rapping is... it's rhyming while carrying a topic, in this case it's a battle... but you still have to rhyme... and the more complicated you do it the more impressive it is... but in teh end all be all you have to rhyme...

However punch for punch Antic was far more creative than Tech, and had the far more original punches... and since alot of what Tech said was rather played... Antic's punches also hit alot harder... and the name play personals were ok as well...

Opener: Antic
Closer: Antic
Punches: Antic
Personals: Antic
Creativity: Antic
Complexity: Antic
Sturucture: Neither
Enjoyment: Antic

Vote: Antic

-Substance- 01-27-06 10:28 AM

uppin for more votes in this.......................................

*Antic* 01-28-06 09:13 PM

uppin'.............like the graffic in ya sig tech..........

*Antic* 01-29-06 02:21 PM

uppin'this........................................ .............

-Substance- 01-29-06 11:31 PM

uppin for more votes here........................................

*Antic* 01-30-06 05:36 PM

uppin..........................................jus t vote..................c'mon...................you can do it..............

-Substance- 01-31-06 01:15 PM

c'mon just vote here..............drop a link and we'll return the favor!

-Substance- 02-01-06 12:58 PM

thanks yo....lol. uppin this bitch..........................

dazy 02-01-06 09:32 PM

Voted For: Tech Methodz

vote for tech he has better flow and punches antic u gotta step up and get better but antic u had good rymes but tech had nicer and clearly better rymes

u both had good structure thou but no hate both of ya

vote tech

-Substance- 02-01-06 09:36 PM

uppin for more votes here...............................

Abraxas 02-01-06 09:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Tech Methodz
 
chckin polls............................................. .................................

*Antic* 02-02-06 01:58 AM

holy shit someone votin'...that kid ain't got room to tell me that i need to get better, he just mad I ruled him in our battle...

stop hatin' JC Real, you suck balls...

3-2

-Substance- 02-02-06 10:23 AM

lmao.................uppin for more votes please....


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