"Who I Be (It's SPuL!)" NEW SPUL JOINT!!! (your name COULD be in it!!) ~_~
 

word, finally a solo joint from the spulster.

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless


left feed on trips joint, and phase one joint.

*listening*

Wow.....first thing I noticed is that your flow and presence were much better on this one. Quality is pretty tight too. You'd do well at making club tracks or radio tracks.....for real. Hook's pretty tight. Overall, I thought this was a pretty nicely put together track. You flow really stood out in this one :thumbup:™

^haha thanks, man. really appreciate that. And i see multiple people peeping track. it's ok to just drop what you thought, nah mean? one sentence or so. don't be gay like that. uppp...... ~_~

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the beat is fucking illnest
flow is cool man, i like your flow
quality is soso but still good, the beat is jsut dope man
nice lyrics, nice hook, if u eva need a hook holla at me, thats what i love to do, and im not bad too
track is really dope, nice drop bro

Wow. Suprised again....
You people became rapper's while I was away....I swear....

Shit's dope as hell, Flow is like....yo

;)9.5/10 hit me up when u got sum beat for a collab.

^word def man. Get some boston rep track haha...

but thanks to you both for feed. upppppp

do u have msn cuz i really want the beat please

lovin the fabolous ghetto beat
ur flow here kills the beat, only problem is that the hook sounds just like the normal rapping

^haha thanks, man. And yea, I didn't know a good effect for the hook. I still could change it later prolly.

and nah, man, my MSN hasn't worked for while. I just got AIM.

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lol, word. Your quality is illy yo. Lyrics is cooooooooooo-ish. The chorus is blah, I think it should have a little more umph ya know? My biggest gripe with you is your flow. It's like good and everything, but the way you spit it is kinda sing-a-along type, nah leans? You kinda sound like a different version of 50 Cent, don't know if you like that or not, but thats IMO. Pretty straight.

^lol haha, nah i wouldn't want that. but thanks for feed yo

yea, yur definityl better on more uptempo tracks...lyrics were also decent...wow, the first solo spul joint, lol...but yea it was hott...rtf if u could...8/10

^thanks yo. I will make sure to peep that soon

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This is your very first single man? no it isn't is it? well i guess I've never heard a single from you before besides this one. Your flow is really dope, I love the way you rap. just a great delivery on mostly every beat. your lyrics are good and your hook pretty good which really shows how serious you take your music. MAS should be glad to have you, you hold MAS down quite well. overll I like this shit man, I might just download it tomorrow in the morning:thumbup:

rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218341
I'll have some new shit soon.

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^aiight appreciate feed a lot man. uppp i got you

lmao @ u recycling.......... that is all

track is pretty straight

^yea, i don't see the problem in using lines from a net site battle into a song yo. If I liked them, might as well throw them in. i don't see what's so bad. =/

uppppp........

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damn nice shit,feelin the flow alot.

this was ok flow was good best ive heard from you owns most on rv wasnt really feeling the lyrics though hookl was catchy 7/10

beat is dope, lyrics are cool. quality is[/jealous] hook is meh.
good track.

^aiight thanks to both. uppp...

ok good beat choice on the fab beat......ok good multies u opened.....flow in verse 1 is good.......however u coulda changed up more....ya rhyme scheme changed but the rhythm of ya flow didn't..given it the feeling of sounding the same.....ok hook.....this is mixed good.....its lyrical focus is wack but it has a nice flow...prolly coulda used sum addlibs or a more emphasized/exaggerated catch phrase to really make it jump out!....second verse....same as verse 1......rhyme sheme changes but the rhythm didn't.....so it gives it the impression of being the same..however it was a sound flow....verse 3 is same as other 2 verses..same feed can be applied.......ya delivery in all 3 verses was solid got a nice laidback vibe....it was calm but not monotone...good shit......pronounciation was solid here......overall sum of ya best work fo sure son......def keep dropping...improving & GROWING as a artist.....stay up fam.......1

lol @ u up'n this 100 times

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now that's persistence. :thumbup:

^thanks to trip for feed, and thanks to you two for uppin' it for me.

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lol 2 for you too ~_~

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lmao flow is good lyrics was good beat choice was coo diff track for you though witch is good though son nice drop..an wtf at you not answerin yo cell i tried to hit you up but you aint answer get at me..=1=