JC REAL vs twenty9
 

Battle Rules:

5 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No u being gay 4 a couple of minutes punk

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-19-06 at 04:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

twenty9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-06 07:38 PM.

yea here’s my fuckin introduction
ya say ya hard, but u just bustin
u claim u a gangsta when u really fake,
shit ya rhymes as fly as justin timberlake
the way u look at erin, u must love beastality,
i can tell that u gotta fuckin faggot mentality
u a gangsta im sure of it man,
u as hard as fuckin pewee herman
ya think ya serious but u a joke,
u aint hard, just stop frontin loc
watch what ya say or I’ll end up snappin
who the fuck said white trash could begin rappin?

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-06 09:00 PM.

yea, im fully aware that this verse sucked, so if u do vote 4 jordan, there is no need 2 state y, i can c already (b4 he even posts his verse) that im gonna lose

Everyone saying im gangsta it sounds so nice
all they ever calling u is the next vanilla ice
ross u say that u lost even before it started
u never say that, what u gone retarded
cus just like u im from bridewatta
beating u bitch it aint never gonna get no harda
ross u saying ur doing this for fun, boy this is serious
u thinking u gonna beat me, what now u gone delirous
ross the rap game is changing and ur still at the beginnin
i hope u like loosing boy cus u neva gona be a winnin



i little better then some stuff needs improvement

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

jc real won............................................... ..........................

lol tyler u bitch, yea i would say he won but JC has 2 realize, that having 1 hit is still more than 0 (the vanilla ice reference)

me bitch? bitch please, i aint no bitch you fuckin afro havin mutha fucka

bitch please, its not an afro and i got better hair on my balls than u got on ur head bitch

it is an afro, even paul sed it was............................................... ........... :shoot:

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

JC REAL
Everyone saying im gangsta it sounds so nice
all they ever calling u is the next vanilla ice
Whack..
ross u say that u lost even before it started
u never say that, what u gone retarded
Whack..
cus just like u im from bridewatta
beating u bitch it aint never gonna get no harda
Whack..
ross u saying ur doing this for fun, boy this is serious
u thinking u gonna beat me, what now u gone delirous
Whack..
ross the rap game is changing and ur still at the beginnin
i hope u like loosing boy cus u neva gona be a winnin
Whack..

twenty9
yea here’s my fuckin introduction
ya say ya hard, but u just bustin
Whack..
u claim u a gangsta when u really fake,
shit ya rhymes as fly as justin timberlake
Whack..
the way u look at erin, u must love beastality,
i can tell that u gotta fuckin faggot mentality
Whack..
u a gangsta im sure of it man,
u as hard as fuckin pewee herman
Whack..
ya think ya serious but u a joke,
u aint hard, just stop frontin loc
Whack..
watch what ya say or I’ll end up snappin
who the fuck said white trash could begin rappin?
Whack..

Vote: You Both Suck, and Lose.

hey red bull if u aint got a vote here then never damm respond u punk bitch
A SEZ ur ok to respond without vote kool col-b 2

while i am a little irritated that red bull really just wasted space with his post, but im not about 2 diss sum1 that has more experience than me and could prolly whip my ass and urs JC REAL in a battle...so yea...

Ross i dont care who the fuck it is i aint puttin up that shit u can but i aint

Voted For: JC REAL

i thin jc won.....but both verses were seriously wack.....like they both wrote them together. the simple fack why jc won was because his shit wasn't as gay and came harder in punches......and better vocab...lol

thxz tech, upping 4 votes people vote come on vote!!!!!

uppin 4 votes peeps come on vote

peeps vote come on we kno we suck but we want to c whos better

not to hard peeps just vote

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

checkin tha pizollz, werd

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

Dude...both these verses sucked ass. omg My eyes are going to explode into my cranium while my genitals rip apart and lodeg themselves into my esophagus.

fuck man i said vote not give shity comments!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: JC REAL

a yo betta punches and betta structure easier to read overall elevate iight vote//jc

thanks man, uppin 4 vote people vote

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

lmao checkin the polls on this one

wat u say i dont knoe but vote people vote

Voted For: JC REAL

1st off both verse's were garbage... but JC actually focused on dissing his opponant more than 29 did... most of 29's verse was pure filler wasted on 29 bragging about what he could do or was going to do... rather than just punching his opponant repeatedly for the win...

Opener: JC
Closer: JC
Punches: JC
Personals: JC
Creativity: None
Structure: Tie
Enjoyment: None

Vote: JC Real

two more votes people tats all i need

jordan, are u actually taking this battle seriously? i mean do u think its an accomplishment that u beat ME in a battle?

ross i know it means nothin this battle i just want two votes to get it over
so uppin 4 votes peoples

Voted For: JC REAL


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first of all return the fav on my battle
i this guy won hands down

ight voted for me like usaul anyways one more vote and i win people vote one more time

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

I can't even decide who won. You both suck. Elevate, seriously.

Voted For: JC REAL

I should really just drop a hate vote against JC Real, because that's what he does to me all the damn time when he votes on my battles...but fuck you and your little faggy Bridgewatta gamez.

Vote - JC Real

JC Real took Flow, his was structured a tad better, he had some generic two syllable multis that helped him out with flow. I think twenty9 recycled some of his lines, the whole Justin Timberlake and beastiality thing I've seen him drop against somebody else...shouldn't do that, you'll never get good that way. JC Real took punches, they were little kid punches, and completely unoriginal, but he took it none-the-less, they landed better than twenty9's. There were NO personals in this battle, none, zero, zip, nada...yall should think about doin' them, cuz they aid punches...there was NO wordplay in this battle either.

Both of you little kidz from Bridgewatta need to keep writin and workin' to elevate...Oh, and if you wore that rag shit in the neighborhood I grew up in, you would die.