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trakk*star 01-16-06 07:06 PM

Com On Girl(joint For Tha Ladies)
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=470778
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218959
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219682

Chris Stylez 01-16-06 07:37 PM

lol now if only you had girl my nig.......j/m kid whats up. Was really feelin this song it was nice one. Verses was alright. Kinda funny cuz i just did a song to this beat like 2 days ago. Anyways flow was good, chorus is rememerable. Keep doing ya thang on Audio cuz thats where its at for you.

Tha Q. 01-16-06 07:46 PM

vocal quality is average at best....

delivery matches the tone of the beat = good

flow is adequte


lyrics appropriate for this type of track...would be nicer if you could come up with more creative symbolism


pretty decent track


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trakk*star 01-16-06 07:46 PM

lol i gotta bitch.................. u bitchless homie:shoot:
thanx fer tha feed

Kawn Flixx 01-16-06 07:53 PM

Pretty decent track..you had a pretty dope beat..your lyrics were pretty average..you could have put a couple good punchlines in it to make it stand out more but it still was a pretty cool track..Quailty was pretty good ..Your delivery was on point and it really caught my attention..overall pretty nice track..keep it up.

trakk*star 01-16-06 08:06 PM

werd thanx fer tha feed bumpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

TeamOne 01-16-06 09:35 PM

are u ready for the rodeo

....... like this beat, commercial tho.... ur voice sounds alil muted, should mix alil better.....

ur flow is pretty nice, quality needs alil help...... nice track for ur girl.... its alil short tho.... kinda commercial track but thats aight

overall decent track

trakk*star 01-16-06 09:37 PM

thanx fam..................yeah commercial werks for me i find it hard to find these type beatz and i dont make em so

Cocaine 01-16-06 10:07 PM

it's a coo track..but.. im not a fan of the flow

trakk*star 01-16-06 10:08 PM

werd wut u mean????????my flows on.................
but thanx i think

NeFisTo 01-16-06 10:34 PM

Not a huge fan of slow songs but pretty good overall.Quality was good IMO(i could understand u almost perfectly,slight muffle),Lyrics were decent,liked the beat for the song.

Mentor 01-16-06 10:54 PM

dude ur makin my left earphone vibrate :huh:......

anyway im gon type while im listening

i LOVE that beat makes me wanna grab a chick and mack it out on the couch
ur verse takes a lil too long ta come in ta the actual song
the flows onpoint all the way and the lyrics are entertainin but could possibly be amped up a lil more in lyrics.
emotions ight cant hate on that..ur qualitys a lil better than usual

defitnly givin u some props on this u made me feel like a 10 year old girl again :) lol j/k but yo defitnly not bad....8.5/10....keep shining :thumbup:

Wicked One 01-16-06 11:07 PM

Lyrics are nice, but could improve on better ones..
Slow Songs, i like at times if iam in the mood..
Quality was pretty good..
Flow was pretty decent n all..

So pretty much i thought it was a decent track..
Keep up the good work man..

Shazz 01-16-06 11:46 PM

Word Like wicked said it sick . Could go a little faster.
Decent in all way around, flow was tight lyrics are dope and id say good enough for RV radio.

trakk*star 01-17-06 12:18 AM

bump for tha last time tonite illy feed so far...........keep it up
:cool:

J.D 01-17-06 05:58 AM

yooo, feelin this track yo. nice beat, flow stays on perfectly, and you rode the beat well, qualitys almost perfect (i cud understand everythin u were sayin), and its just overall a really decent track. keep doin ya thing yo :thumbup:

Tha Q. 01-17-06 08:21 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by one mic
yooo, feelin this track yo. nice beat, flow stays on perfectly, and you rode the beat well, qualitys almost perfect (i cud understand everythin u were sayin), and its just overall a really decent track. keep doin ya thing yo :thumbup:





I agree with everything you said...but his quality wasn't perfect, by any means



Non Fix...u cud up ur quality dawg



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trakk*star 01-17-06 02:37 PM

werd thanx q bump.............................................. ...............will take that advise

B To The D 01-17-06 02:49 PM

Ok im gonna leave more detailed feed when i get back on

Flow-getting better,its on and its koo

Delivery-perfect for this track

Emtion-Yeah koo

Beat-TOO SLOOOW LMAO

Presence-You seem way more confident i cant believe how you've imrpoved so fast

Hmmm......Im feelin it,you fit it well,its your type of track

Lyrics-Average keep workin on them,well this type of song you cant expect more lol

Aighh

8/10

Keep up:)

trakk*star 01-17-06 06:32 PM

bumppppppppppppppppppppppppp thanx fer tha feed yall

Willa 01-17-06 07:15 PM

ok intro repetative not feeling it talk to me be sexy dont hype urself up lol
flwo is pretty stop go
lyrics kind of played but i liked most o\f it
id liek to hear u flow a little faster
voice i dotn hate it its pretty goodbut ur no triple n apexx or ike evile grin
overall i think ur slow flow held the track back if this was sped up :hump:
hti me up for a collab sometime
overall7/10

Ysdat 01-17-06 07:22 PM

this is a ok track, quality could be better, pressence is dope. lyrics are ok.

trakk*star 01-17-06 07:24 PM

werd thanx fer tha feed........................................get at me for any returned favourz...................................

Ysdat 01-17-06 07:27 PM

yeh check my freestyle and give me production tips and shit.

trakk*star 01-17-06 07:29 PM

done^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

trakk*star 01-17-06 10:26 PM

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trakk*star 01-18-06 06:26 PM

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trakk*star 01-20-06 07:23 PM

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