tech skillz vs JC REAL
 

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Check in by: 01-21-06 at 10:34 AM

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JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-06 10:38 AM.

Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-06 11:35 AM.

You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!

as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin

*phat = cool

they its all in the name of fun boy,

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

id say you both did good..................................

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Flow: Tech
Punches: Tech
Personals: MEH
Multies: NO ONE
Metaz: Tech

v-Tech

ok, tech jus out right won this...

JC, that line about beatin ur child... NOT RITE, shouldnt have even put that in there....

Tech had the flow, punches and metaz....

JC, elevate

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

thanks for the vote........uppin for more votes........

Voted For: Tech Skillz

tech cuz, i felt no flow in JC's verse, tech had better punches and his rhymes were much better

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thanks for the vote, uppin for more votes here..........

twenty 9 vote shouldnt count he voted against me because i know him and because i beat him in a battle and im in a battle against him know

show me some links and i won't count it, other than that it's honest to me since it's true i am whopping your ass....lol

Voted For: Tech Skillz

JC REAL:
as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
5/10 - Good Multi's.
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
3/10 - Bad.
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
3/10 - gay n played.
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
2/10 - he fuckin' wit a easy win.
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
5/10 - ok punch.
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
3/10 - stupid closer.

=21/60

You had a good flow, your punches were pretty bad, you didnt use any good wordplay. Up ya Game!



Tech Skillz:
You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
6/10 - Good Punch.
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
6/10 - haha, niice punch.
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
5/10 - decent.
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
6/10 - Good Wordplay.
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
4/10 - Weak Closer.

=27/50

You had a good flow, you used some strong hitten punches, and some good wordplay.


OVERALL:Tech Skillz gets my vote, he had the better punchlines, his wordplay was better. He used good multi's and overall had a good verse, made me chuckle a couple or times.
JC your rhymes need some serious work. Your flow is ok, you use some good multi's but your punchline are basic and played and you dont have any wordplay. Work on this shit or stick to battlin' newbs - Just advice, no Hate!

Vote - Tech Skillz

thanks for the vote killaz, uppin to finish this shit

my vote 4 tech was not a hate votem really do think he was better, so JC stop searchin 4 excuses and take the loss like a man

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

checkin pollz, werd

dont b such a sensative bitch, werd

ross lies man lies u is a faggot ross , me, a-sez and kool col-b say u r so u is boi

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Vote - Tech Skillz

Tech took all categories...except personals, cuz neither dude had'um...His punches were cleaner, more thought out, and more complex. His flow was good, the multis really carried the flow through for me. His wordplay was decent, and it was just a better drop. JC, keepin' workin' on how to stay consistent wit flow, and throw some harder punches, think about how to have cleverness in the way you diss some one, and still have it be vicious.

Vote - Tech Skillz

Vote

watever man but help is help

jordan first of all i dont "hate" u, secondly i did truley believe tech was better, thirdly u can remove my vote i dont care, tech would still win and when did kool and a-sez say that?

fine even though my vote wasnt a hate vote, u can feel free 2 remove it if u feel that it was, but come on would it really matter? i mean just as fast as my vote gets removed, another vote 4 tech will take it's place

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 

Tech took it way too easily...i cant vote cuz we in tha same crew, so im jus CHECKIN THA POLLLLZZZZZ...nice drop man

thanks for the compliments my beloved family and friends.......uppin for more votes....to close this shit.

u suck in my books tech u just lucky u have friends tat r votin 4 yah

lol, w/e homie, better than you anyday...................uppin for votes......idk twenty9 or antic o start with.....just met them the day i met you lol

uppin this bitch....for some votes..................

Voted For: Tech Skillz

JC REAL

as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
- Not workin, bad opener
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
- Played concept
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
- Not dissing your opponent
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
- The fuck NO
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
- Played wordplay
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
- Not workin....

This was not a good verse at all - Firstly, you really need to work on being original with your punches and creative...do something different, use a new concept - Also you need to use PERSONALS, they will help you win battles...diss the opponent directly, your verse basically could apply to anyone which is NOT a good thing....and finally, when you do those two you will also need to word your lines better to make them hit harder

Tech Skills

You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
- Not bad
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
- No
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
- Not really workin
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
- Nice...
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
- Too basicish

Pretty sure I have read better from you, but you had some ok concepts here but your wording really let you down at times...work on being more original, and your wording and you will improve...flow was fine, rhymes were fine as well....personals, you need more though I understand he is new you could have at least played around with his name...

Ok, this was a one-sided battle - JC REAL, you need to elevate...read what I wrote....

Vote - Tech Skillz

Stay Up both....


And return the favour, my battle has STILL not been concluded
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Peace

jordan, u should have lost, those dq'd votes were ligit and u no it

Voted For: Tech Skillz

damn tech took dis one wit way betta flow and harder punchez u get my vote iight fo sho

aight, thank for the votes..........uppin for more votes.

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

You's My New Bitch, So You Coming Out With New-B Skills
We'd Like You....But You're More Played Out Than Movie Reels
ok line kind of played
I'll Lay Out The Retirement Mat And Let You Roll In Defeat
You Dress In B.u.m. Clothing.....And Think You Repping The Streets
lol this line was funny roflmao
I've Seen Your Last Battle Homie, I Must Admit, That Shit's Wack
You Couldn't Make Me Look Retarted.....Even If Left My Wrist Cracked
ok line nothing special
Can Tell You Like Ass And It's To Bad There's Nodody That Gives You
So When We Battle I'll Let You See The Moon.....
........And The Stars From The Punches I Give You!
lmao tight line
Wins From Herbs, Little Kids Who Get Wipped And There Diapers Checked!
You Couldn't Gamble With My Career......If You Decided To Place A Bet!
ok closer
overall you came average a few played lines but also some original lines
flow was ok a few strtched lines nothing major
wordplay was on id like to see more personals though

as i write this shit down i remember ur name
rvs hall of fame NO rvs wall of shame
ntoa good line
i could write down nothing and still of won
i beating u boy just like u were my son
playyyyyyyed
u think ur so wild, i'll call u the animal
u eating ur moms pussy, don't that make u a cannibal?
dumb line lol
ur rymes suck hardcore they remind me of shit
u shoulda realized from the start who u fuckin wit
a nobody?
u gotta remember the name j-c-r-e-a-l
ur lines are as phat* as the dog on taco bell
ok line i guess :/
my rymes so tight u can't fit ur midget dick in
last time u had pussy, ur cat u was a lickin
wack
overall you need to work on creativity everything uve dropped ive seen b4 flow was good aswell as structure simplistic rhymescheme and no personals or wordplay elevate