twenty9 vs Chi-townz Crime
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

no raping innocent children

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-25-06 at 11:58 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

twenty9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 03:24 PM.

chi-town out hear spittin shit like he was a broken toilet,
he comes up with the masta plan and i'll still fuckin foil it/

i'll battle any bitch any muthafuckin race,
break into ur house and shit on ya face/

i see more blood in a hospital then i see in you,
havin fuckin temper tantrums like you was two/

like a magician u just pretendin,
like paul martin ya face is offendin/

u aint a gangsta u just another fuckin copy,
like a computer u gotta 3 and a half inch floppy/

stories about you gotta be a fable,
cuz all ya do is bring bitch 2 the table/

ya rhymes is loose just like a fuckin pornstar,
i'll go punch 4 punch and win with just one bar/

Chi-townz Crime has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 05:25 PM.

drop a verse boy, u seem 2 wanna vote against me in every fuckin battle so lets c wat makes u better than me

iight nigga i got u dont tripp

i aint trippin, im just a person who has a very low patience level, so dont b offended, its more of a personal problem than a problem that other ppl have

iight fo sho LETZ GO!!!!

a yo i spite dz rhymez so hard make the floor shake...
have yo mama sayin "son i think we havin an earth quake"...
u see dis dudez a fake u bitch ass cake fukin flakestop rappin yo flows is a waste ...
ill pumble dis bitch to the ground u see nigga uz a clown...
turn dis bitch upside down and turn yo fake ass smile into a frown...
u see ill tell yo gurl to put u out and ill have my dick all in her mouth ...
u see nigga u shouldve learned wat ima bout!!!!!!!

iight nigga go an spit yo shyt iight nigga fo sho

o my fault its cus i couldnt see yo shyt iight fo sho uppin peps^^^^^6

This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

ah this battle sucked in all ways
u guys can do a lot better (except 29) u just suck lol
anyways if u suck tat bad chi town come battle me or r u a chicken

jordan u little recedin hairline fuck head, dont waste my time with ur bitch ass feed back

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i wouldnt talk u afro head bitch

Voted For: twenty9

this was a weak battle and chi town can you cut that gangsta talk homie....it's anoying to read your battle like that.
although this was a gay battle, 9 came harder and better, with actual punches in some lines unlike chi town's 1 punch.....

return the favor and vote

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mutha fuck u JC, at least i got hair u bald headed fuck, u no wat i can do with my afro? i can grow more of them cuz i have the amazing ability to gorw hair much like people that have reached the age of 1

u r a stupid fuck u know , like i dont care if i aint got much hair
but at least i aint faggot ass piece of shit like u

actually u r a faggot ass piece of shit, did u ever realize that like evry1 on this site hates u? and i no ur lyin, A-sez and KOOL COL-B never said u were good

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Voted For: twenty9

hmmmm this was yet another horrible display of mic skills on both ends... Crime's verse was very unimpressive and composed of everything a beginner's gangsta verse would be... *vomits* I'm sorry ya verse just made me that sick... Now 29 had a lil more effort though his verse was exetremely boring as well... at least he was far more creative with his played punches...

Opener: 29
Closer: 29
Punches: 29
Personals: 29
Creativity: 29
Complexity: 29
Structure: Neither

Vote: 29

thanx........ i guess................... uppin 4 more votes

iight uppin people iight

This was feedback posted for Chi-townz Crime
 

checkin polls, werd

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This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

weak battle, your opener was pretty good, but idk, not feelin either verses, i wont vote, ill jus leave this as feedback cuz i dont feel like explaining anything right now...word...1

uppin for more votes................ look i no the battle is weak ppl but just vote

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uppin for more votes............................................. ...again............................... come on ppl vote this is getting a little repetitive

please ppl just vote, im gettin real tired of doin this .................................................. .................................

Voted For: twenty9

Vote - twenty9

Here's tha deal...Flow was a tie, nothin' incredible from either cat...twenty9 took Punches, because he wasn't talkin' about himself for his whole drop, and he was actually tryin' to diss...Chi, you jabbered on about yourself and how hot you are, with only the occasional punch...both catz had some pretty weak punches, but twenty9 atleast tried to aim his...there were no personals or wordplay, zero, zip, none...twenty9 took multis with some weak two syllable multies...both catz need to come with better concepts, atleast attempt wordplay, and try some personals to elevate...pretty weak battle...

Vote - twenty9

thanx *Antic*................i guess................ uppitty uppitty uppitty for more votes

Voted For: twenty9

chi townz- your verse sucked. you had no punchez, all glorifying yourself, and still werent that good. you need to make real punchez or else you are gonna be clowned.

twenty- your punchez were bad, but least you had some. keep workin on ya punchez, better concepts mainly. cuz you had some played ass shit and some just plain bad shit.

v- twenty

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This was feedback posted for twenty9
 

checkin pollssss

come on ppl just one more vote, i dont wanna have to up anymore..............................

Voted For: twenty9

a yo i spite dz rhymez so hard make the floor shake...
have yo mama sayin "son i think we havin an earth quake"...
^^^weak
u see dis dudez a fake u bitch ass cake fukin flakestop rappin yo flows is a waste ...
^^^No
ill pumble dis bitch to the ground u see nigga uz a clown...
turn dis bitch upside down and turn yo fake ass smile into a frown...
^^^Weak
u see ill tell yo gurl to put u out and ill have my dick all in her mouth ...
u see nigga u shouldve learned wat ima bout!!!!!!!
^^^No

chi-town out hear spittin shit like he was a broken toilet,
he comes up with the masta plan and i'll still fuckin foil it/
^^^decent opener
i'll battle any bitch any muthafuckin race,
break into ur house and shit on ya face/
^^^no
i see more blood in a hospital then i see in you,
havin fuckin temper tantrums like you was two/
^^^ight
like a magician u just pretendin,
like paul martin ya face is offendin/
^^^no
u aint a gangsta u just another fuckin copy,
like a computer u gotta 3 and a half inch floppy/
^^played
stories about you gotta be a fable,
cuz all ya do is bring bitch 2 the table/
^^^ight
ya rhymes is loose just like a fuckin pornstar,
i'll go punch 4 punch and win with just one bar/
^^^no

V.twenty9 he came wit a better more consistent verse....that didnt have all played shit....chi werk on ur punchs an concepts
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