~stylez~ vs Mimesis.
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-24-06 at 10:49 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

~stylez~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 07:22 PM.

I'ma drop this quick and simple like sledgehammers damagin' your temple.
That fan of bandanas, Stylez, is slammin' with or without instrumentals.
... I'm never gentle.... The rough side of the velcro strip.
Stickin' to a rhythm in ways these emcees can't rock for shit.
this is RAPVERSE homes, not make ya self look weak.
if that was ya all, shyt sit in da rooks seat, chicken scratch, ya penmanships not neat.
TEST THIS.. i dare you, if u lookin to catch wreck..
......better bring a life vest and flares with em!!
ill spit till i see a combination of Thailand and southamerica's drowning victims!!
u Cut up kAts?wutchu philipinO, shyt ImA put u in da Past way Bak wen Fat Joe hung wit Big PUN, madE rap LatINO
GaMMblin wit meeh, ya neVa win.....But its a Sin to do That shyT wen ya catholic Hustlin in uh CaSino
hahah okai, anotha T.O, ya DisGracin da Game, easy K.O cuz da EgO bein da saME
Rearrange Ya fRAme, cuz U SPECIAL, is yA whOle sTyle Crazy or MenTal
im ya SoN?lisTen Here G-SoN, ya CouLDnt sPit SmoKe wita maDe Up weeD GuN
BoRin meeh, like DBZ reruns, go GeT suM BEBE?ya lines is pUSSY, SignS ya lineS saYin u NEED SuM


fuckin RUSHED homes....cuz i might forget.............

Mimesis. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-06 09:38 PM.

Stylez.. Shodown.. Whatever the fuck you want to be called..

Check it out, son..

Son, you ain't on my fucking level.. I'll easily leave ya face curled
......And have this Lezbo more then some confused teenage girls
No chance... I see your sig.. now you know I'm kicking this right
Cause we do know you.........as the worst fucking kid on the site
I'm rippin this dyke.. and your alias is nothin but a damn hoe now
I don't need the other half of your name to leave this Sho, down
Oh, wow.. you tried out for my squad.. then I left you crying, son
So I'll just tell you to STFU.. like the fuckin crew I denied you from
You ain't winning.. we know its true.. kid, I'll leave ya bloody son
I'll keep you low, Down.. even by beating you in front of everyone
Could this be any easier?.. Haha, nah.. I'ma come tearing ya, jerk
The only time you're rapping, Ty.. is when you're preparin for work
Cause you're a fucking queer.. and now its over.. that's whats up
I don't got mud on my shoes.. but I'll still leave this Tyle fucked up

There's 14 more lines then what I needed to beat you.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis.
 

Word .

Voted For: Mimesis.

lmao......Mimesis got this....

Punches-M
Personals-M
Metas-M
Structure-M
Overall-Mimesis

he just came with a better verse although it's weak compared to his other shit....i like your closer and preparing for work lines...good job. stylez....i though that was aimez alias, well whatever......you need to fix you punches and metaphors tho..


return the favor

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This was feedback posted for Mimesis.
 

checkin polls....
mim had the upper hand though..

This was feedback posted for Mimesis.
 

I cant vote so im just checking the polls, mainly because im bored.

Oh, ok.

Tech, I'll hit up your battle in a little bit and shit.

This was feedback posted for ~stylez~
 

man lets goo CHECKIN POLLZ........................

Voted For: Mimesis.

hmmmmm Styles didn't come at his opponant till the half way mark of his verse... You can't win like that specially if your opponant is gunning for you out the gate... which Mimesis did...

Opener: Minesis
Closer: Minesis
Punches: Minesis
Personals: Minesis
Complexity: Minesis
Creativity: Minesis

Vote: Minesis

Word .

Uhh.. UHH UHH.

Voted For: Mimesis.

mimesis owns and shit, and he should join the chain gang. v/mim

Uhh.. cool.

This was feedback posted for Mimesis.
 

zzzzzzzzzzzz...........YO YO I GOT MAD BORED READING THAT

^ Shut the fuck up.

uppin this homes............................................. ..........

Yeah, upping your cheese sandwhiches too!

and for your grilled stuff burrito.................................TOO!

Voted For: Mimesis.

Ok....

Mimesis -

Son, you ain't on my fucking level.. I'll easily leave ya face curled
......And have this Lezbo more then some confused teenage girls
- Nice nameplay, decent opener
No chance... I see your sig.. now you know I'm kicking this right
Cause we do know you.........as the worst fucking kid on the site
- Ok...
I'm rippin this dyke.. and your alias is nothin but a damn hoe now
I don't need the other half of your name to leave this Sho, down
- Good nameplay again...nice
Oh, wow.. you tried out for my squad.. then I left you crying, son
So I'll just tell you to STFU.. like the fuckin crew I denied you from
- Lol, funny shit...good personal if true
You ain't winning.. we know its true.. kid, I'll leave ya bloody son
I'll keep you low, Down.. even by beating you in front of everyone
- Not workin...
Could this be any easier?.. Haha, nah.. I'ma come tearing ya, jerk
The only time you're rapping, Ty.. is when you're preparin for work
- Lol, pretty good
Cause you're a fucking queer.. and now its over.. that's whats up
I don't got mud on my shoes.. but I'll still leave this Tyle fucked up
- Haha, nice finisher

Overall, this was a strong verse...filled with personals and good wordplay/nameplay and was witty at the same time....attacked the opponent directly, and each punch was worded well - Flow and rhyming were very good too...


~stylez~ -

I'ma drop this quick and simple like sledgehammers damagin' your temple.
That fan of bandanas, Stylez, is slammin' with or without instrumentals.
- Weak opener - attack the opponent
... I'm never gentle.... The rough side of the velcro strip.
Stickin' to a rhythm in ways these emcees can't rock for shit.
- WTF...where exactly are you dissing him?
this is RAPVERSE homes, not make ya self look weak.
if that was ya all, shyt sit in da rooks seat, chicken scratch, ya penmanships not neat.
- No.....
TEST THIS.. i dare you, if u lookin to catch wreck..
......better bring a life vest and flares with em!!
ill spit till i see a combination of Thailand and southamerica's drowning victims!!
- WHAT THE FUCK
u Cut up kAts?wutchu philipinO, shyt ImA put u in da Past way Bak wen Fat Joe hung wit Big PUN, madE rap LatINO
GaMMblin wit meeh, ya neVa win.....But its a Sin to do That shyT wen ya catholic Hustlin in uh CaSino
- Hell NO
hahah okai, anotha T.O, ya DisGracin da Game, easy K.O cuz da EgO bein da saME
Rearrange Ya fRAme, cuz U SPECIAL, is yA whOle sTyle Crazy or MenTal
- Fucking boring
im ya SoN?lisTen Here G-SoN, ya CouLDnt sPit SmoKe wita maDe Up weeD GuN
BoRin meeh, like DBZ reruns, go GeT suM BEBE?ya lines is pUSSY, SignS ya lineS saYin u NEED SuM
- Bad finisher

Ok...where to start? You do realise this is a battle....you need to DISS your opponent, most of your verse revolved around yourself...that is NOT what battles are for - You need punchlines in there, be creative and use personals to diss whoever you are facing...you did none of that - Aside from that, your verse had a horrible structure, no flow, poor rhyming....your best reading what others write, in fact, just read what Mimesis wrote...but Stay Up

This was the most one-sided battle I have ever read

Vote - Mimesis

Vote on my battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...190#post2640190

Voted For: ~stylez~

i vote 4 stylez he had better rymes and flow and punches were nicer
mime u hads good structure but ok rymes so vote 4 stylez

rtf

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checkin polllllzzzzzzzzz

Yeah, somebody drop the last vote on this or something.

Word .

Voted For: Mimesis.

No chance... I see your sig.. now you know I'm kicking this right
Cause we do know you.........as the worst fucking kid on the site
Cause you're a fucking queer.. and now its over.. that's whats up
I don't got mud on my shoes.. but I'll still leave this Tyle fucked up

VS nothin.


Easy vote.