Real Talk ft. Snypa and Prozak
 

www.soundclick.com/paranoid05

1st verse: Paranoid
Hook: Paranoid
2nd verse: Snypa
3rd verse: Prozak

I'll post links up later...and remember to leave links when you drop feed.

Enjoy.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629831
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629817

listning.......................................... .......

beat coo.............................................

flows off and on.....................................

delieveryz lackin too..................................

lyircs r cool..........................................

qualityz ight..........................................
hooks plain but ight

snypas verse

falls off at first(sound like u spittin to fast)

deleivetys ight.....................

emotions good.............................

pressence is ok

hook again blahhhhhhhhh

prozac...................................

flows off....................................

delieveryz off..........................

lyrics r ight(lol at tha names)

emotions gettin better..................
pressence is gettin better

alot could of been worked on in this it was ight i guess.....................................
but lacked tha thingz i said keep droppin and ill leave a link innna min

ill drop feed later tonight or tommorow after noon

i dont see the track on there?

yea me either?.

It should appear....hmmmm....weird...thanx for tha feed Trakk

haaa...was funny lookin at mario dance while this beat played

1st cat needs better EQ levels on the vocals...kinda muffled...up the highs


flow is decent...kinda mechanical


the hook?...not mixed well at all...needs a "chorus" effect on it


2nd cat...better EQ levels

flow is decent

**liked the echo effect in there


lyrical, this was adequate on both parts, but nothing special


decent drop fellas

P.S. wasn't feelin prozak
1

thanks for the feed bro

stop tryna be Canada's Finest when u know i am^ haha

ok i see the track now,

paranoid- flows decent, deliverys ok, mic presence needs to be worked on. emotion iiight, also could use work.
Snypa- flows ok, emotions iiiight, deliverys coo, mic presence is coo, lyrics r decent..coo verse
Prozak- flows horrible lol..dont think he was on the beat AT ALL lol..and thats all ima say cause i dont wanna trash talk the dood..
hook- eh, im not really feelin the flow or lyrics.. shud be more catchy.

decent track, keep practicin, n droppin

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103
holla back^^^^


Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"

Ill feed just paranoid.

this tracks ok, emtion could be a bit better, sound robotic kinda. Beats meh.reasonable track.

why would u only leave feed for paranoid?

^he's in love with me, that's why. but snypa stop posting k, let the people post their thoughts on it k.

Paranoid - You had a ok flow, you used some ok rhymes, you didnt come as good as I thought you would though. 6/10

Snypa - I liked your verse the best, flow was iight, you had some good lyircs I was feelin' ya rhymes. 7.5/10

Prozak - You had a ok startin' but after that it was borin' and lame, you need to up ya game. 3/10

OVERALL TRACK - 5/10 was a pretty good track, keep it up snypa and para.

beat i dont really like it but its not horrid
para voice is cool delivery is ok nothing special but has def improved flow is on for the mos part but sounds like robotic lol lyrics were good
hook not feeling it to be honest
2nd guy lyrics were good flow was pretty good presence was ok could use a litle improvement
3rd guy bad voice bad flow ok lyrics not feeling them you need improvement

overall 5.5/10

*listening*

I'm digging this beat......for real. This isn't that bad. You seem to end your words short though......like, you say your words quick, but your flow isn't fast. Especially at the last word of each bar. You could use a little more behind your delivery too. Next dude had a little better presence but the rest was about the same as paranoid. Last dude I wasn't feeling at all. He sounded like he had a bag of nickles in his mouth.....for real. Another thing, the hook should have had a little effect added to it so it sounded separate from the verses.

Aight the beat is aight...first cat flow and delivery is coo lyrics is str8...quality is decent...the hook is aight nuttin special tho...second cat decent flow and delivery quality is aight...over-all coo collabo keep it up.

heard this beat before.....d block maybe?

para....flow has gotten better....need some more hi's in your vocals so theyll stand out more....need to be mixed a lil better........

other than that...i have no complaints about it...


hook..i dunno..just not feelin it...


2nd dude....your coo....but u need to let it out a lil more....you gotta decent voice n shit...but be a lil more loud...flow is coo....emotion is koo....just need to deliver it a lil better...u got a lot of potential man...


pro....still need to up that flow some man....your getting better.....but just keep tryin to up the flow.......until u get it at a point u need to be at

aiight koo thanks mayne....thanks for all the feed guys...and the beat, not d-block.. i forget where paranoid found it...but its not d-block

no it's not d block it's some person off s'click.

amyway uppin for more feedback...

listening....

beat is hot.....

para ure voice sounds a lil robotic..the only thing I could just suggest is work on the emotion on that because itll put fluctuations in youre voice....presence is kl...flow is getting much better...but the robotic shit u gotta work on..every1 has that prolem...haveing emotion is not to sound like a derranged nigga..its jus changing ure voice shit so u can give a fresh vibe....lyrics are nice

The next guy, Snypa prety nice...flow is nice...quality is nice..add some more lows on that..lyrics are koo...keep it goin there...work on delivery

The third guy..same thing as paranoid a lil worse u have bad pronounciation i have dat a lil too..and its a bit robotic...it sounds ure foreign..are you?..if so I understand...anyways keep it up..holla..1

no i aint foreign :cussing: i keep on gettin that shit from people like im really foreign :cussing: no i aint foreign and i never will be i got way better since i did this and im starting ta sound better and less foreign that just came with the bad pronounacation i had i suppose

^don't get mad man, I was at your level once.

lol aint mad just paranoid :)

i like the beat, first cat just needs to put more into the delivery, theres not enough energy - the hook is egh, it really could have used more emotion, some dubs, somethin to make it stand out.... second cat was better, could use some polishing but he stood out on the track... third cat made # 1 and 2 look like big and pac, just had no prescence, sounded freestyled in parts, unrehearsed iunno--work on how you put your words out cuz you sound unsure of where your goin and its not cool. keep doin it... thanks for the feedback before sorry it took so long to rtf.