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kriminal vs Oz.
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-28-06 at 04:52 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Kriminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-06 04:53 PM.
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I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced
Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce" You Fake Ass Nigga..Talkin Like You Pack Techs.. 3-4? Are You Seriously Comin At Me Wit That Whack Rec SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas This Kids Bars Is Played Like Old Movies...Because This Kids Just The "Wizard Of Oz" This Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him......... .............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy Talkin Like A Dealer..When The Only Time You Fuckin Wit Oz's Is When You Drinkin Pepsi |
Oz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 10:24 AM.
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I Heard You A Criminal Bitch? Ill Hang You High Like The Stars When I Drop My Lines Youll See How Life Is Behind Steel Bars I Told You Get Signed Or Die?....This Nigga Committed Suicide Screamin Mike Jones in Houston Till He Ask Himself, Who am I? Kriminal Scared to Battle..You See He Bout White As His Teeth Then He Felt How These Punchez Hit Bout As Hard As A Beat Damn Back Up Krim ...You All On My Dick Like Trojan Condoms I'll Have You Burnin Like Mase But You Aint Neva Been To Harlem They Say The Creator Loves His Creations But I Despise Yo Ass You Only Goin With The Flow Of The Rest You Fake Ass Cytoplast PS If you dont get it then dont vote please bcuz its a punch/wordplay in everyline so find it |
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Voted For: Kriminal
I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce (Good.) SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas This Kids Bars Is Played Like Old Movies...Because This Kids Just The "Wizard Of Oz" (A lil stretched,But Aiight.) This Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him......... .............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs (Irony?...LoL.) Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy Talkin Like A Dealer..When The Only Time You Fuckin Wit Oz's Is When You Drinkin Pepsi (Lol.) ........................................... Kriminal Scared to Battle..You See He Bout White As His Teeth Then He Felt How These Punchez Hit Bout As Hard As A Beat (Okay.) ^That was it,The Rest was Played...No Hate,But You Had a Good Form..Nice structure,but You Kinda played him off for a noob...So Yah'Know. Hit My battle up with an Vote me Vs H.D...Thanx. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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RTF On My Battle?.....I Guess Yall Think Youz dont Have Tahz Vote....Hit Mine Up.
Dont Be A Sour Grape.....j/p. |
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Voted For: Kriminal
hmmmm this battle was kinda one sided... Oz had superior structure, and it flowed nicely in my head... but that won't win you a battle, unless it's very close, and that's what gives your verse the extra push... With that being said Krim had the far better punches... weather personals or arbitrary... Opener: Kriminal Closer: Kriminal Punches: Kriminal Personals: Kriminal Structure: Oz. Multis: Kriminal Enjoyment: Kriminal Vote: Kriminal |
Voted For: Kriminal
i gotta hand this to K man....he came a lil more harder Oz...... creativity and wordplay plus a lil more punches got you wit an uppercut oz and just knocked you out homes.! its was like 2 bars vs. 5bars v/ Kriminal. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kriminal
i voted 4 krim becus his punches were more harder oz u had good structure but punches got u so vote krim Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kriminal
lmao.....krim took this...he just came funnier whie oz, how's a beat hard Oz? krim just came with better punches and personals as well.....nice battle...return the favor..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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lol i won this fuckin battle twice...but i guess you need "adicuate feedback"so uppin for "adicuate feedback"!
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Voted For: Kriminal
Vote - Kriminal Hells yes...this was a good battle, both catz came hard, here's how I saw it.... Flow- good flow from both, excellent structured shit, both catz used multis effectively within their flows. Tie, I liked both cats' flows. Punches- So close, so close. Neither cat wasted bars with bullshit. I thought both had bars that were sick, but I thought Kriminal had slightly stronger punches, because his personals gave his punches the extra heat. Oz had some good punches, but to me, I thought Kriminal's were hotter. Personals- Kriminal...yeah man, those were some kickass personals...you had a lot of personals in your drop, but you didn't force them. Fuckin' sick. Oz, your first bar had a killer personal in it, but the whole "behind bars-my lines" thing is played, some one even used that on me like six months ago. Kriminal took personals. Multis- Tie, I'm not gonna even pretend one was better than the other, cuz honestly, both catz were great with tha multis. Wordplay- minimal wordplay in this one, but Kriminal had some decent wordplay in some of his bars. Kriminal gets wordplay. Kick ass close battle, closer than the categories indicate...lots of noobs should look at this one and try to learn shit. Mad props to both catz. |
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Voted For: Oz.
overall this was a pretty one sided battle. Oz had way more punchlines, and more personals. This is how it breaks down.... Opener: Kriminal Closer: Oz Punches: Oz Personals: Oz Creativity: Oz Complexity: Oz Structure: Oz Vote goes to: Oz |
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Voted For: Oz.
v/ oz. his structure was real hot and his flow was goddamn on point, real fine flow there OZ, keep dropping bot h of you, good pieces |
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ok basically..im fuckin up like 6-2 but you like gettin my votes DQed..i havent been on in a minute but i retired on RB so letz get explained votes poppin..UPPIN..
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Voted For: Kriminal
alright this battle was whack, straight up........but kriminal had personals....and oz. didn't...thats the bottom line..don't you dare say i didn't explain this vote..because it's clear I did...oz..you had no personals...and your punchlines were whack..half of them were completely fucking redundant |
This was feedback posted for Oz.
Wow @ how you're still garbage.
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Voted For: Oz.
I Heard You A Criminal Bitch? Ill Hang You High Like The Stars When I Drop My Lines Youll See How Life Is Behind Steel Bars ^iight I Told You Get Signed Or Die?....This Nigga Committed Suicide Screamin Mike Jones in Houston Till He Ask Himself, Who am I? ^lol nice Kriminal Scared to Battle..You See He Bout White As His Teeth Then He Felt How These Punchez Hit Bout As Hard As A Beat ^nah Damn Back Up Krim ...You All On My Dick Like Trojan Condoms I'll Have You Burnin Like Mase But You Aint Neva Been To Harlem ^ok They Say The Creator Loves His Creations But I Despise Yo Ass You Only Goin With The Flow Of The Rest You Fake Ass Cytoplast ^ok vs. I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce" ^iight You Fake Ass Nigga..Talkin Like You Pack Techs.. 3-4? Are You Seriously Comin At Me Wit That Whack Rec ^ok SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas This Kids Bars Is Played Like Old Movies...Because This Kids Just The "Wizard Of Oz" ^nice This Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him......... .............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs ^to stretched so no Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy Talkin Like A Dealer..When The Only Time You Fuckin Wit Oz's Is When You Drinkin Pepsi ^nah Close Battle But I Think Oz Came Harder So V/Oz. |
Voted For: Oz.
gotta go with oz on this..... krim... none of ya lines connected.... ya ideas were all over the lace.... real sloppy man.... for realz.... punches not hitting.... it's like you sacrificed skill just to make it rhyme... where's da originality?.... the wordplay?...and what the f*ck does Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez mean? .... looks a lil suspect to me.....tryna tell us sumn?...lmao Oz...don't get excited... you had better ATTEMPTS at punches but i was bored with ya verse also.... nothing stood out except the fact that you write better than the other dude... the mase line was horrible...so was the mike jones line.... yes i got it....but it did nothing for me.... the setup was all wrong.....the "hit bout as hard as a beat" was the worst line you dropped..... honestly, you both can use some elevation but that's just me... either you want real feedback or some cookie cutter bullshyt.... i'm just laying it out there like i see it.... no hate....just truth.... easy |
Voted For: Kriminal
you both had good punches but I felt kriminal had more personals although he was losing his flow at the end I think he picked it up wit the pepsi line. you both could've done better but this battle was alright. Oz, u had punches that were'nt really directed at kriminal, it just sounded like you were trying to get something out to fill the empty spaces. ur verse was str8 though but to me just not enough to get this one. v...kriminal |
Voted For: Kriminal
I Guess Ya Rusty..Its Been A While Since Ya Name Was Last Announced Not A Man But A Boy..Its Clear To Me This Lame Is Just Half An "Ounce" You Fake Ass Nigga..Talkin Like You Pack Techs.. 3-4? Are You Seriously Comin At Me Wit That Whack Rec SHOTZ FIRED! "Made Ya Look" Like Im Spittin Wit Nas ^^^^^^^ hahahahahahaha..... dope punches... here... hahaha is Faggot'll Lose..Cuz Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez And Like His Title "Life Is Just" A Waste For Him......... .............Cuz All This Nigga Battles Is Noobs Underestimated The Kid..So Dont Be So Testy ^^^^^^^ lol.... good ...shit krim takes ths out... ahha... good stuff.. had alot of hard hittin punches.. good structre.... ur flow wuz out.. 40.oz took tha flow shit... u feel bt good stuff aiite.. holla.. we could battle |
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