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Ike - If Religion Can Make You Kill .. ( Leave LINKS!!!, ill RTF )
i left feed on Intermentals track about his mom.......and UNF and Trakk stars song called unfuckwitable...
LEAVE YOUR LINKS....and ill be sure to return the favor BE SURE TO CHECK OUT THE LYRICS TOO yep...im not much of a political or religious rapper.....but i wrote this in about 30 min the other night.........just to see how itd turn out.....better than i expected i guess... www.soundclick.com/youngike If Religion Can Make You Kill |
Aigth
I Love this Beat Word Flows Dope,Dont Fall Off Lyrics Are Dope,Feelin Em A lot Deliverys DOpe As Usual Lol EMotions Dope Word I Love This :cool: Hook's Dooope! 2nd Verse: Flows Better I Think Yo! Your Presence ALWAYS Stands Out On Tracks Yo Lyrics Are Dooope! If This Is Aight In Your Opinion Then WTF Is DOPE Shit Lol Ima Be Suprised With U N Blakk Majiks Mixtape Hook Again....... Word Overall:9/10 Dope Shit Word To The Scratchin At End Rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220871 |
this beat is pretty good....... sounds familiar.... tell me y
lyrics are cool, nice delivery in presence...... u could switch it up everyonce in a while tho...... like ur delivery and ish hook is pretty dope, simple but real good..... good emotion and good lyrics with an aight flow = great song somethin i may put on my ipod..... i just needa get one first |
ayy an emotional track from u...not that commn wit u....but werd i love the beat, the flows on point...the lyrics are deep not the most lyrical i seen from u but it still deep, the hooks ight not really catchy but its deep, overall this was an ight track...keep this shit up and keep expressin yourself like this...people also need ta feel u emotionally too thats one of the best things bout rap is the ability ta put ur emotion in it and truly express yourself not givin a fuck bout no one else's opinion but anyways this defintly not bad..keep at it
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Immortal Technique Harlem Streets umm dope ass song.. u showed me ur verses.. and i told u i was talking to my mom.. biotch lyrics are nice.. i actually thought u coulda went a little deeper on this topic, u just kinda scratched the surface, dope flow tho, the chorus is cool....good track... 8/10 |
damn, this shit's hawt...can't even say anything else really... |
Nice beat, I heard it somewhere. But it's cool. Your flow hits off pretty good, nice and smooth and relaxed, I like it a lot. your emotion is unbelievable as well and that hook was pretty dope too. I love what you talkin bout on this track, very gospel type shit. A great story man, I'll possibly download this because it's a pretty dope single man.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220364 |
thanks everyone....favors have been returned....up
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Beats is dope...flow and delivery is nice...lyrics is dope...quality is coo...the hook is nice...over-all solid peice man keep it up.
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hot shyt Ike, Im lovin that Hook, Lovin that hook, lyrics are dope, flow is on point, delivery is on point, shyt, this song makes me think you, this is one of the types of songs that i could play over and over and over, and never get tired of hearin tha same ol shyt good shyt yo
RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showt...618#post2638618 Feed used 1/30/06 "Intro to Local Radio Station WGCI" |
thanks everyone......favors are about to be returned....up
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uppin for feed n links,,,,,
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:( u didnt return the favor wit me....but yet again i dont have a song up |
Heeeeey.
I'm listening to it right now. Nice choice in beat for the topic. Great way to just throw that shit out there, cause I agree with everything you're saying. Seriously man, shit is a dope way to approach the topic. Great emotion too. That sort of shit will get you somewhere, man. But anyway, the verses contents really make you think. You have great talent, man. Hook is pretty decent, right to the point. Like that one guy said, this you could just sit down and put on repeat. Dope man. Don't need to RTF. |
Iunno, the track sounds too much like you don't understand the Araibs point of view
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nice track, your voice just dont fits to the beat man, nice hook, i like it, lyrics are pretty deep and i like them, immortals beat werd the beat is just really simple but really dope, quality is pretty damn good, nice track for something you wrott fast lol, just your voice, sometimes theres TOO much emotions haha you know what i meen, overall dope track mate
RTF on my beat: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...918#post2639918 |
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Rtf Now.............
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Listening...
Loving the beat...lyrics are dope...flow is good, it sorda sounds off beat in a sense...but it's straight, it sounds good. Delivery is perfect. Hook is ill...we should do something like this for our collab. Shit is ill...no doubt about it. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221083 Feed used 1/1/06 "Tides" |
First off, you're gay. Like a bag of nickels.
Now, with that said, lets get down to the feed. The beat is perfect for this song man. You ride it well, and your emotion and mic presence are amazing. Lyrical wise, this shit is deeper than a fucking giraffe's throat. Word at my dope wordplay. Word. Like I said on aim, this is one of the most meaningful/lyical songs I've heard man. I'm really feeling it, and this shit is mixtape material. We should collab sometime? |
^ hell no i already told u....im not collabing with you.....
ill return the favors later |
Can I Get A R!
Can I Get A T! Can I Get A F! Return The Favor!!! Yeaah |
i left feed for dis on another site for ya ike but i'ma tell ya again this shit is great....9 outta 10...i haven't heard one track from ya that i didn't like...good shit man
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good beat choice...................
voice is illy.................. deleiveryz good................... flowz dopeness............................ lyrics r nice........good message............. hooks good.........real catchy.................... second verse is fucking dopeness.............................sikk lyrics............ overall dope track 10/10 in my opinion.......goin on my ipod sikk shit ike...........keep doin ya thing......... rtf on my track let it rain 1 |
Well, you probably have enough feedback, but I didn't want you to feel left out.....lol.
This isn't that bad of a track. Some of the rhyme scheme that you used seemed pretty basic. Presence was nice though, as well as quality. Not really much I can say bad about this track. Hit me up for a collab sometime dude.....:thumbup:™ RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281 |
bomb lyrics, its always good when u can rhyme words that dont really rhyme, hot shit here.
i downloaded it and been listenin to it for a while. keep doin ya thang. rtf on a battle of mine if u'd like http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983 |
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