SlicKnife vs pictureperfect2
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-30-06 at 02:54 PM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-06 01:56 PM.

SlicKnife has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-06 02:05 PM.

let me kill this boy right quick...
... ya feel me

Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers
call yourself slicknife well I’ll put all that shit to shame
when I manhandle ya avy and cut ya 6 times with ya own name
all my rhymes be original comin straight off the dome
last time u thought out the box u were lookin for a new home
yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs

yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs
^^^
sposed to say fancy* and not facy there

Pay the price for calling me out...bitch


Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge
Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
The fuck are you, wait till I impale your skin & turn it around sick....
Sounds disgusting? now you know what we felt listening to your Soundclick!
Sticking stamps would not give you class...your forever disfigured...
But is RapVerse to blame...? when this fuckin P&P never delivers...!
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!

Voted For: SlicKnife

slic i voted for u had better rymes and punches and a better flow overall

pp2 u had better structure but wat killed u is that u put dome down twice in ur battle elavate

rtf
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Voted For: SlicKnife

SlicKnife:
Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge
7/10 - Funny Opener.
Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
7/10 - Good Punchline.
The fuck are you, wait till I impale your skin & turn it around sick....
Sounds disgusting? now you know what we felt listening to your Soundclick!
6/10 - Good soundclick diss.
Sticking stamps would not give you class...your forever disfigured...
But is RapVerse to blame...? when this fuckin P&P never delivers...!
5/10 - meh.
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!
4/10 - Weak Closer.

29/50

You had a good verse, you started off with some good wordplay and strong punches, and it flowed well. - Good Verse.


pictureperfect2:
Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
4/10 - OK Opener.
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers
5/10 - Good Punch.
call yourself slicknife well I’ll put all that shit to shame
when I manhandle ya avy and cut ya 6 times with ya own name
6/10 - Good Personal.
all my rhymes be original comin straight off the dome
last time u thought out the box u were lookin for a new home
4/10 - OK.
yeah ya punches are as broke as your pockets, its sad
closes u came to eatin facy swhen ya bitch got crabs
6/10 - Good Finisher.

25/50

You had an ok verse, your punches were hitten hard you used a good flow and some good personals.


OVERALL - This was a close battle but I give my vote to Slic. He had the better wordplay and punches. He also had a good flow, and a good verse. Picture, I have seen you come harder than this before, you should have tried usin more wordplay.


Vote-Slic

Voted For: SlicKnife

lol............slickknife just murdered this kid.....


punches-S
Personals-S
Metaphors-s
Multies-None
Creativity-S

I Love Challenge Lines And Th Perfect Is Nobody...Shit Was Ill Slick.

yo rtf in any of my battles yo.......................

Voted For: SlicKnife

hmmmm mSK easily had the better punches and personals in this... he took this battle hands down...

Opner: SK
Closer: Pic
Punches: SK
Personals: SK
Creativity: SK
Complexity: SK
Enjoyment: SK

Vote: SK

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Slick quit bein shit and pick up the fuckin phone
cuz if u don’t get the meassage I’ll put a bulletin ya dome
call u out in bitch slapped, ya u better answer
cuz i could win this battle with more shit than pampers

VS

Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!

V./ PP.

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mannnnnnnn
i aint feelin the result of this at all.

......no one gives a shit what YOU think, bitch^^^

Uppin

Im gonna fuckin rape you in the RV text league .

Get the fuck outta here man

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This was feedback posted for SlicKnife
 

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Fuck sake.........vote, and make sure the votes are valid

Voted For: SlicKnife

Vote - Slicknife

Flow- Pictureperfect. Both catz had flow, but I thought SlicKnife stretched his bars in some places, i.e. too many syllables in some bars, makin' his flow uneven.

Punches- Tie. Both catz had some alright punches. The personals is where it was at.

Personals- Slicknife. Both had personals, but Slicknife's were more clever, and funnier.

Multis- Not many, but Slick Knife's were better, and served his flow more.

Wordplay- meh, none worth coming on.

Alright battle, i thought Slicknife's personals were what put his drop above picture perfects. Alright displays of skillz from both, but Slickknife took it.

RTF in my battles Antic vs. JC Real and Antic vs. Rexless.

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I will check one of your battles out tomorrow ^^^ thanks for votin...

Everyone else VOTE THE FUCK UP...dont expect me to vote back if your vote is not credible though

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Fuckin hell.......................................vote

Uppin this shit

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Dumb fuck^ you obviously did not get the punches....

VOTE PPL.................

This was feedback posted for SlicKnife
 

yeah not very good didnt make much sense had like 1 decent punch finisher is blah..

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Voted For: SlicKnife

this was a pretty even battle....pictureperfect had mad wordplay, but the punches were a little too gangster, and not personal enough...personals win battles, and even though your wordplay was slightly clever, it wasn't enough to outshine slick knifes personals....just about every line was a personal...and i like to see that shit, now slick knife, you DID have personals..how ever...i felt like some of your punchlines were forced...and they didn't connect too hard, but maybe you didn't feel like you need to connect.....anyways..my vote goes to slicknife

Thanks for votin on this old battle man

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Voted For: SlicKnife

picture perfect....

nice wordplay in the first 2 lines... but unfortunately that's all ya had going for you.... almost every other word was "shit"... got adjectives?...nouns?... synonyms?....damn.... i mean.... the pampers line was straight amateur...punches didn't connect at all.... set-ups were suspect... shoulda kept it on the same level of wordplay as the first two lines

Slick....

punches were definitely setup better... not the best punches but still set up better overall...

Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!

set up was cool^^^ but that second line is stretched all to hell... i tried to recite in time and found i couldn't do it without stretching the line.... it's not about just making it rhyme... shyt's still gotta fit to some kinda rhythm

I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!

you fucked up ya closer badly.... the setup was perfect and the idea in the last line was there... then i saw this:

IS HE FUCK!..... huh?...it don't even make sense!!! you edged him out by very little and that's only cuz ya lines were set up better... keep at it though... it's all love....

btw... i don't even do text no more... i'm audio only... just helping the text kats out by getting them votes in there

shits wacks...........................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Voted For: SlicKnife

easy win slick
your opener set him up to go down........
Fuck, your not a threat...but really how can you shut up and manage...?
...When posting in Bitch Slapped...is the only time you put up a challenge

open:slick
punches:slick had better ones
personals:
I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!
and
Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!
so again personals:u tell me.......slick
closer:pic tried but slicks hit harder

this battle was one sided
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