King Solo vs ColdSTEEL
 

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Expired battle close - win

Well?

You Can Accept anytime Now.

Fah'Realz.

ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 09:17 PM.

King Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 09:17 PM.

Gimme unlimited lines… but I won’t take long to put ya in ure place
Cuz nobody wants to see ya ugly mug……………
……they just wanna smash it in ure face!!
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Kid’s a disgrace… really, this battle should be a doozy
I’ll fuck Steel up, without cutting Shaq from the movie *
I don’t care what planet ya from, this shit won’t be painless
Ya say ya from Earth huh, I’ll still put my foot up Uranus
I’m a fuck ya CPU… and ya bars, see how I killed ‘em
Cuz I modem down so hard, I crashed ure entire system
See the quote in ya sig, yea.. it’s a sad thing, right ?
But the real sadness is……
……it’s the most attention u’ve had on this site
Don’t sweat this, I’ll wreck ya defences... this’ll be a shut out
I’ll leave voters hangin’ by a thread, to see ya get knocked the fuck out
Ya girl can get it to… I’ll fuck that bitch real fast..
..and make her bedrock so hard… the flintstones’ll sue my ass!!
I’m sending you to fame… so ColdSTEEL can live the dream
..cuz I’ll put ya face on TV… nah, I’ll just smash it through the screen
Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent
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I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods


* that movie Steel starring Shaquille O’Neale

Check,
King's Respectable Head With Street Cred?,Nope,He Dreams It Up Here!
I Told Em"Pack His Shit!",But The Fag Said "Bring It Up The Rear!"
I Seen Enough Queers,But His Drops The Sweetest.
See I Got a Twin Personality....
...King Would Have To Drop From The Womb To De~Fetus!
He Not The Weakest,But Its De~Grading How Ur Left Behind.
I'll Say Outtah 1 Threw 10....
..........................................Your Ratings Be~Nign To Mine!
Im Shootin Bee-Lines This Time,Just To Stop His Drive.
Come On Solo Was Meant To Get Ripped,Look! His Drop Just A~Rive!
Really,King's A Hero On This Site,Im A Villian Tryna Snicker..

..At the Fact That...

..His Bars Are Fantastic 4 Being Curt,Which Will Make Me Victor!
I'll End This Quick with Swift Hits That'll Knock Him Off The Feet.
I Thought JTR was A Cheater..
...Until King Bit Off-ice And Choose To Take De~Ceit.

-I Hate Explaining,But Sum Need it.

De-Fetus...Defeat Us.
Benign-Not a Threat.
A Rive-Tear or to be Torn Violent.
Curt an Victor-Fantastic 4 Characters...Victor means The Champion/Winner.
De~Ceit-da Seat-Cheating
office-Off His.

^Get it.Good.Vote!

Uppin#1.

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PSssh......Vote an I'll RTF!

Uppin#2.

Ez...Pz....Rtf!....Really!

Uppin#2.

Voted For: King Solo

Gimme unlimited lines… but I won’t take long to put ya in ure place
Cuz nobody wants to see ya ugly mug……………
……they just wanna smash it in ure face!!
^iITE
Kid’s a disgrace… really, this battle should be a doozy
I’ll fuck Steel up, without cutting Shaq from the movie
^gOOD
I don’t care what planet ya from, this shit won’t be painless
Ya say ya from Earth huh, I’ll still put my foot up Uranus
^NAH NIGGA,PLAYED AS FUCK
I’m a fuck ya CPU… and ya bars, see how I killed ‘em
Cuz I modem down so hard, I crashed ure entire system
^GOOD
See the quote in ya sig, yea.. it’s a sad thing, right ?
But the real sadness is……
……it’s the most attention u’ve had on this site
^ITE
Don’t sweat this, I’ll wreck ya defences... this’ll be a shut out
I’ll leave voters hangin’ by a thread, to see ya get knocked the fuck out
^NAH,WACK
Ya girl can get it to… I’ll fuck that bitch real fast..
..and make her bedrock so hard… the flintstones’ll sue my ass!!
^IGHT
I’m sending you to fame… so ColdSTEEL can live the dream
..cuz I’ll put ya face on TV… nah, I’ll just smash it through the screen
^YA WORDIN ALL YA PUNCH THE SAME,IT ALL STARTIN WITHA THE "CUZ I'LL,CUZ I'LL,CUZ I'LL"..VARIETY NIOGGA
Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent
^NIGGA,RENT COST A LOT SO WAT IF HE STEELS FOR IT ,BAD CONCEPT HERE
I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods
^NO

King's Respectable Head With Street Cred?,Nope,He Dreams It Up Here!
I Told Em"Pack His Shit!",But The Fag Said "Bring It Up The Rear!"
^NAH
I Seen Enough Queers,But His Drops The Sweetest.
See I Got a Twin Personality....
...King Would Have To Drop From The Womb To De~Fetus!
^PLAAYED
He Not The Weakest,But Its De~Grading How Ur Left Behind.
I'll Say Outtah 1 Threw 10....
..........................................Your Ratings Be~Nign To Mine!
^NAH,WHENEVER YA GOTTA USE AN OBSCURE WORD LIKE BENIGHT THEN YU GOT A BAD PUACH
Im Shootin Bee-Lines This Time,Just To Stop His Drive.
Come On Solo Was Meant To Get Ripped,Look! His Drop Just A~Rive!
^WACK
Really,King's A Hero On This Site,Im A Villian Tryna Snicker..
..At the Fact That...
..His Bars Are Fantastic 4 Being Curt,Which Will Make Me Victor!
^LOOOOONG
I'll End This Quick with Swift Hits That'll Knock Him Off The Feet.
I Thought JTR was A Cheater..
...Until King Bit Off-ice And Choose To Take De~Ceit.
^zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

vOTE-SOLO

Word and shit. Vote up people.

Uppin.


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Benight?...Its Benign..Foo.

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w/e.

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

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Voted For: King Solo

solo took this since cs had some good punches but his wordplay was forced in most parts while solo had a smooth verse with some funny punches and wordplay...overall this was a good battle.
Fav....Lines......


Ya girl can get it to… I’ll fuck that bitch real fast..
..and make her bedrock so hard… the flintstones’ll sue my ass!!
I’m sending you to fame… so ColdSTEEL can live the dream
..cuz I’ll put ya face on TV… nah, I’ll just smash it through the screen
Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent

Rtf In My Battle..............

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221166

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

hmmmm king Solo was more harsh in his disses... but the wording was kinda ocward through out his verse... which didn't make for too much of a steady flow... Coldsteel's verse flowed fairly nicely, with good vocab, and multis... However flow, and multis alone will never win you a battle... I thought that CS also had the better personals in this battle which tilted my vote his way...

Opener: CS
Closer: Neither (CS's seemed forced, and Solo's lacked an actual punch)
Punches: Solo (just teh harshness alone took it for me)
Personals: CS
Creativity: CS
Complexity: CS
Structure: CS
Vocab: CS
Multis: CS

Vote: CS

^^ WTF!?!?!

Vocabs and structure have fuck all to do with a battle, and our structures were both sorta the same. And what the fuck, complexity only comes into play if it is a topical battle. And how did he have more personals, he didn't have a single one apart from that fake shit about me biting in the closer, which I never did. And I had at least 4 personals in there. Get the fuck outta here with that faggot vote. :gfy:

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

Okay now THIS is a battle. It was hard to pick a winner but I think I got one. Journey with me.

King Solo



IP:

Gimme unlimited lines… but I won’t take long to put ya in ure place
Cuz nobody wants to see ya ugly mug……………
……they just wanna smash it in ure face!!

Decent opener. Took me a while to get it but afterwards it was cool.

Kid’s a disgrace… really, this battle should be a doozy
I’ll fuck Steel up, without cutting Shaq from the movie *

Funny. Nice.

I don’t care what planet ya from, this shit won’t be painless
Ya say ya from Earth huh, I’ll still put my foot up Uranus

Pretty basic

I’m a fuck ya CPU… and ya bars, see how I killed ‘em
Cuz I modem down so hard, I crashed ure entire system

Not the greatest punch.

See the quote in ya sig, yea.. it’s a sad thing, right ?
But the real sadness is……
……it’s the most attention u’ve had on this site

Haha. Got me laughin with this one.

Don’t sweat this, I’ll wreck ya defences... this’ll be a shut out
I’ll leave voters hangin’ by a thread, to see ya get knocked the fuck out

Meh.

Ya girl can get it to… I’ll fuck that bitch real fast..
..and make her bedrock so hard… the flintstones’ll sue my ass!!

Bedrock and Flintstones is kinda played as a punch but this was decent.

I’m sending you to fame… so ColdSTEEL can live the dream
..cuz I’ll put ya face on TV… nah, I’ll just smash it through the screen

lol Nice one there.

Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent

Nice. Nice.

I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods

Not a good closer.

ColdSTEEL

King's Respectable Head With Street Cred?,Nope,He Dreams It Up Here!
I Told Em"Pack His Shit!",But The Fag Said "Bring It Up The Rear!"

Hahaha. Funny shit.

Seen Enough Queers,But His Drops The Sweetest.
See I Got a Twin Personality....
...King Would Have To Drop From The Womb To De~Fetus!

Ill wordplay ther. Nice punch.

He Not The Weakest,But Its De~Grading How Ur Left Behind.
I'll Say Outtah 1 Threw 10....
..........................................Your Ratings Be~Nign To Mine!

Wow that's some deep thought lol.

Im Shootin Bee-Lines This Time,Just To Stop His Drive.
Come On Solo Was Meant To Get Ripped,Look! His Drop Just A~Rive!

Though the tense of the verb is fucked it works. lol Nice.

Really,King's A Hero On This Site,Im A Villian Tryna Snicker..
..At the Fact That...
..His Bars Are Fantastic 4 Being Curt,Which Will Make Me Victor!

Hmm. I see where you were goin. Word it better.

I'll End This Quick with Swift Hits That'll Knock Him Off The Feet.
I Thought JTR was A Cheater..
...Until King Bit Off-ice And Choose To Take De~Ceit.

Pretty good closer.

Overall: I felt this was a raw battle. Both had nice wordplay and punches, I think Cold came more technical, which tipped me to him. KS still came raw but CS was just more technically sound here. Word.

v/ ColdSTEEL

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

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Wow @ these votes. Amazing!!

Uppin.

An Dont Get Mad King...Cuz The Votes aint in Ur Favor...2-2..Lol....You Thought Ez win Didnt it?

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Swaying an shit..You Make Me laugh..Ur Childish....Upp This Bitch...An I'll Rtf a Lil Later..Gotta lot of Work ahead of me..so sorry bout tha time going by...

Votes fuckers.

How the fuck can I be swaying retard. Nobody can see the posts until after they vote you stupid motherfucker.

Voted For: King Solo

i voted for solo his rymes flowed better, punches were better and rymes were better
cold steel u rymes sometimes didnt ryme and thats wat cost u

hey its my 200th post yeah kool

no hate
rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=221364

The voting on RV is ill.

^Sensitive?...Hah.

Who Cares...An I Loss a Vote Cuz I Didnt Rhyme Well...PSssh...Funny Guy...King,No Hate Tho'...You Cool...

Uppin This Dead Ass Battle...Lol...J/p......YURP!!

Voted For: King Solo

Man up sucka… fuck it, this broke ass bitch can just get bent
I mean hell, ColdSTEEL’s…………just so he can pay his rent
.
.
I said I wouldn’t take long, so now I’m gonna take the goods
Now I’m done draggin shit on, I can bury Cold in the woods
vs.
nothing
coldsteel your wordplay was way too forced and that made the punch not work like that benign line and de-fetus. i didn't like those at all
king those two i posted are good quotables and very easy to understand and very witty punches. so word up with the win

someone please return the favor with a vote; link is in my sig