remember the name.
 

this is another song, that i made my own verses 2.
enjoy.

song-remember the name by fort minor.


intro.

10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

verse.

remember my name, when i take my walk 2 fame.
its all for the money and the love of the game.
rhyming for life, rhymin' with brutality.
all of my dreams of become a reality.
but i dont need my name in the light.
i rhyme cus im good, and wut a delight.
when ppl know who i am, and see that im good.
skillz are so wicked and so understood.
i just want to tell my story, and express my glory.
when i beat ppl in battles they come out all gory*.
but i do it for the love. 2 show wut im made of.
me and rapping click, like a hand and a glove.
a mirical from above. flyin like a dove.
flyin so high, way up in the sky.
rappin so fast, life just flys by.
but i dont want fame, i dont need money.
i rap cus i can, why is that so funny?
i dont need 2 be a star. dont need 20 cars.
i am who i am and u are who u are.
i keep it real, i dont need 2 steal.
i got life good, it sounds unreal.
so remember my name. its all over the game.
rappin is my life, and its not for the fame.



10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

Verse.

im rightin this verse off the top of my mind.
and this is 50% better then my raps combind.
and i try 2 have it laid out b4 i spit a rhyme.
when i rap i aint got nuttin but my own time.
and i have 2 have it played b4 i write a line.
before i touch a key and before i do a grind.
i have 2 have this shit all down in my mind.
and ppl askin me why i have no time.
cus im devoted 2 my raps, and makin nu rhymes.
making new raps for the shake of mankind.
ill make sure u remember my name in the back of ur mind.
like i said, it aint for fame, and i aint gonna sign.
dont want a record deal. this is my design.
dont need a patient for this verse or line.
cus its 100% mine o mine!!!!

10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.


yall ppl dont know who i am, and i know i dont talk much.
but off the rhymes i throw im leavin u star struck.
leavin u confused and up in a daze. ima do this here, all in my way.
leavin u a stray, pitched way to the side.
fallin in u chair, got u washed up and dryed.
but i aint here for fame, its for the love of the game.
i dont got 2 pay ppl 2 shout my name.
but i still remain the newkid on the block.
shovin that glock and makin my way 2 the top.
i know wut i got, and i dont need more.
i got better rhymes now, way better then before.
but yall still got a long way 2 know me.
knowin that may skillz are way beyond reach.
and that my skillz are those of an artist.


10% luck
20% skill
15% concentrated power of will
5% pleasure
50% pain
100% to remember my name.

u wont believe tha shit that comes out of my throat.
i got ppl every where and they all equaly dope.
ppl sayin im a prick and ppl say im a cock.
girls wanna b with me, and ppl wish i get shot.
but that aint gonna happen not in this life time.
cus theres somthin protectin me and thats my rhmyes.
cus through each line i bring somethin new to the world.
somethin not just for me but them boys n girls.
those who love me, and dont wanna see me go.
just breakin it down in 3 different language modes.
english, latin, and spanish too.
and i do it 3 times the rhyme and its all for u.
the ppl who made me, cus they know wut i am.
and i know they love me cus they know i can.
i can bring ill beats to the streets in a day.
i make more in a week then u in a months pay.
but it aint about money, and it aint about fame.
its all about u remembering my name!!!


S to the Z.


this is wut i call ART!!
if u dont like it then u can bounce and make somethin better...

decent drop.. rolls mo like a poem if nething.. good still

stay1

pz

LMAO..Didnt you take that chorus off the NBA live 06 game?

wtf u talkin' bout morph? it is a song i got and i like the beat... look it up, fort minor. and if i did i would say so cus i aint no liar and i got nuttin 2 hide, so there.

want some feed ppl, dont sleep on this shit!

I like your flow, but you need to be more creative with yours, like put more funny stuff in there, it'll catch eyes

Know what i'm saying?

it was pretty good....some bars were too short in my opinion...but keep droppin em...

alright ppl this shit is DONE!!! so get to it and start bringin feed!!

drop some shit someone!!!!!
dont leave this shit hangin

lol yea didnt u get that off of nba 06?

where i live (nicaragua) i dont get that shit, but i guess its the same song. no biggie.

i want some fuckin feed ppl! dont be sleepin and droolin on this shit!!

i like it...im lookin for tha beat to dis track so i can do my own shit...diggin tha flow and if im correct, it goes perfect wit tha beat...hot shit man, stay up...and peep my shit to return tha fav...easy

yer i liked this piece,,, flowed nicely,,,as mentioned above ^^
the hook was creativ therefore catchy
need a bit mor higher volcab use

overall yer ...liked it

xcept one thing........... we mor need posts on deep stuff like worldy issues/problems/urself
insted of tht classic, imma do this imma do that.....which cn get borin frm time to tym

overall , u gt this in tight ,,,,,,,, uppin for a 8.6

didnt like this, i thought it was ok noting stood out besides the chorus which i believe was in nba live 06 other then that alot of basic stuff and no twist or real punches or anything just you basicly flowing i guess

u just hating cus i didnt like ur shit.

post some feed u fuckin ppl!!!

That's the course they used for the Superbowl commercials on NFL Network... but I fucked with it then and still fuck with it now... so on to the verses... the 1st verse was cool till the second half where the flow just derailed, and you used "I" way too much... your structure got sloppy right there too... On ya next couple verses it seemed like you kinda changed topics and started complaining about shit... it got a lil annoying I had to force myself to continue to read... Structurally the verses were sound but the content wasn't as polished as the 1st verse... the last verse you still complained a lil but it got a lot better content wise... over all this was an aight drop

the hole point of this shit is that ppl know who i am mostly and wut i do. being freestyles. i kinda got out of the mood of finishing but none the less i had 2 so i did. the 1st verse is pretty much the intro. the second verse is like me and how much my verses have inproved and shit, 3rd verse is kinda the same and how i use my rhmyes and last but not least is the 4th verse which is me for the ppl, and wut i hear them say bout me and shit.

yeah, i liked the first verse the best...last one, wasn't feeling it....but i have to say, this flows pretty well with the song...and its good for a key....hmm, i think you should not to a key next time, lets see what you got for real, nah saying?

but you are elevating, keep up my man