tha 1 an onlii b vs JC REAL
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-07-06 at 05:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-06 06:37 PM.

Cmon admit it, you aint a gangsta from tha east*
wearin mittens, even your bitch looks more like a beast**
I dont remember there bein "gangstas" on sesame street***
Your 2-3 and onlii cuz twenty9 is tha onlii 1 you can beat****
I seen you accepted and knew that it was a done deal
Your gonna beating me?I know it Just Cant be for REAL*****

EXPLANATIONS

*He claims he is a gangsta from tha east
**In his member mugshot he was wearin mittens and ppll were bombin on him because he was and they were sayin that his girl looked more manly than he does
***J-Money said that hes a bert and ernie lookin muhfcuka, you know bert and ernie form sesame streeet?...yea ya got it
****He battled twenty9 twice, he battled him once and won, so he lost a couple and went back and decided to battle twenty9 agin so he could get another win
*****it says Just Cant be for REAL,NAMEPLAY, just=J cant=C and then i put REAL

It was done real fast so that is why it is prolly tha shittiest verse i have put on here but its ok...good luck man, and no hate after its all done...word...1

tha line that talks bout him bein 2-3, when i wrote this he was 2-3 so i just wanted to clear that up....word...1

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-06 08:27 PM.

a punk ass bitch, yeah its tha 1 and onlii b
u sayin ur better, u aint even close to me

http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/13/turtlebitch929.jpg

u a ugly ass boy u look like a turtle
im like a trackstar, im jumpin this hurtle*
my rymes break ur leg cus im so hardcore
my lines punching u boy till u hittin the floor**
only reason u like eminem , cus he lets u suck his dick
i go 50 cent on ur ass and hit u wit my magic stick***
me beating ur ass now thats what a fact is
yo face is so ugly ur doctor musta did a malpractice****
u sayin ur better , than give me 1 good reason
u better start runnin b, its turtle huntin season

* trackstars jump things called hurtles he is like a object in my road of life

** play on punches and punching someone

***play on fifty cent's magic stick (his pimp cane) 50 cent sucks!

**** as in the doctor did something wrong with his face

no hate and plus i won against another person too

and 29 wanted to battle me again

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

yo yo yo yoooooooooooooooooooooooooo checkin the polls lol @ the pic

dammit i should have put more thought into my verse, but i prolly would have forgotten about tha battle and it wouldve been a no show, its all good, i cant win all my battles, oh well..anyway, uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

lmao......this was a weak battle from both since i've seen way better from B....but since we in the same crew then i can't vote but he definately took this. jc. you need to read some tuts on how to make battles cause you really didn't have any punches

ok? that was a wierd post but anyways(talking about tech skillz post)

anyways uppin for votes people

uppin on this battle
people vote for me u know u wanna

Voted For: JC REAL

Cmon admit it, you aint a gangsta from tha east*
wearin mittens, even your bitch looks more like a beast**
Coulda been worded way better to hit harder
I dont remember there bein "gangstas" on sesame street***
Your 2-3 and onlii cuz twenty9 is tha onlii 1 you can beat****
Ok, but wording
I seen you accepted and knew that it was a done deal
Your gonna beating me?I know it Just Cant be for REAL*****
Nah

a punk ass bitch, yeah its tha 1 and onlii b
u sayin ur better, u aint even close to me
Nah, filler
u a ugly ass boy u look like a turtle
im like a trackstar, im jumpin this hurtle*
So so
my rymes break ur leg cus im so hardcore
my lines punching u boy till u hittin the floor**
Nah
only reason u like eminem , cus he lets u suck his dick
i go 50 cent on ur ass and hit u wit my magic stick***
Nah
me beating ur ass now thats what a fact is
yo face is so ugly ur doctor musta did a malpractice****
Weak concept
u sayin ur better , than give me 1 good reason
u better start runnin b, its turtle huntin season
lol

Tha 1 had less lines which hurt him, u shoulda worked out a line limit at first. JC had some funny stuff and Tha had a couple of ok personals but JC won this due to line amount.

v/ JC

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This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

lmao And you were worried B. omg JC you are so ass.

me a ass? no not true but antwats uppin for votes people vote jc real

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

checking the polls..........Weak battle overall.......................................

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote- Tha 1 An Onlii B

First off, having a few explainations is great, but don't have them be longer than your verses...I thought this battle was a little weak, but it was close. Both catz had some flow structure problems, so neither was better than the other...Both went heavy with Personals, and that's good, but don't just quote other people and take what they said to use on someone. The only decent personal in the battle, I thought, was in Tha 1 an Onlii B's last line...creativity. So he took Personals. Graffics and takin' what others said is cool, but not when your whole drop depends on it. JC Real took Multis, basically because he had them. No wordplay in this battle what-so-ever. Punches were taken By Tha 1 and Onlii, just barely. Neither cat had incredible punches, but I thought that some of JC's stuff was forced. Onlii's punches were basic, but more effective, in my opinion.

So there ya have it. Keep workin' on shit.

hey thats sucks ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, uppin for votes jc real wanna win this

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

ROFLMFAO @ tha turtle pic, lmfao, checkin polls, werd

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

I hope it was done real fast coz that was poor...

Flow: Onlii B (Picture fucked JC structure and shit up)
Multis: Tie (Barely any)
Metaz: JC
Wordplay: Onlii B (Barely)
Personals: JC
Punches: Onlii B

*Vote Onlii B* Just. It was quite bad but if it was REAL quick then i guess it's o.k.

-Peace-

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it was fast...trust me...im tha type of person that will end up forgetting about a battle if i dont drop soon after i check in...thanx for tha vote man....uppin for more

no im uppin for more lol jokin man uppin for votes

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback thats a bunch of bull shit my vote had tons of feedback im complaining

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

its actually called a hurdle...yeah

but wtf is up with that pic, and lol @ play on punches/punching someone

oh man, a good laugh

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b took this, but that was a funny pic by JC. and a small little note for JC dont post a pic of urself on this site wearing a "g-unit" hat on this website and then say u hate 50 cent.

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

checkin polls....

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

*smh* #1 that turtle pic is horrible JC you'd a been better off just dropping a link to his mug shot... or atleast get a real graphic head to make the pic for you, it was way too big and it actually took attention away from your verse... and dispite the personal you had in a ya verse it was still a very weak and uncreative verse.... Onlii crushed you, he had the far better more creative punches personals, structure, and wordplay... there really was no comparison here...

Opener: Onlii
Closer: Onlii (the only real attempt at wordplay in the battle)
Punches: Onlii
Personals: Onlii
Structure: Onlii
Creativity: Onlii
Complexity: Onlii
Enjoyment: Onlii

Vote: Onlii

personnally u voted outta hate but i guess thats just ur ways

uppin for votes

I always vote objectively... *smh @ hate* you just need to elevate... go practice

JC dont take any of this as hate, its all actually love, its critiscm and its meant to help you, and that vote for you was bullshit, he voted for you because you had more lines and thats bullshit...that vote for me by drakel was also bullshit, i respect that you got that vote dq'ed but tha vote for me from Ikaros was explained, its ok though im not worried about it...uppin for more votes on this, cmon lets close this battle and declare a winner...word...1

hey i kno anyways uppin for voes people uppin vote jc real

uppity up up upping for more votes on this people!

uppin for votes people not hard to do

uppin on this mofo

uppy up uppin on this mofo come on peepz vote or die

Uppin for votes on this...Cmon lets close this shit...word...1

fuck people vote on this shit uppin 4 votes

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Up Up Up Up Up Up Up Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!