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dazy 02-05-06 12:11 AM

JC REAL vs rexless
 
Battle Rules:

4 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 155

Check in by: 02-08-06 at 12:11 AM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.

System 02-05-06 12:12 AM

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-06 12:12 AM.

System 02-06-06 11:26 AM

rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-06 11:26 AM.

dazy 02-06-06 10:09 PM

my rymes so fresh its like orange juice straight from the tree,
ur like a comb for bald people ur useLESS to me.
rex u so gay u givin head to guys corn*,
the only thing hard about this guy is his penis after he watches gay porn.
hey REX i hear u changing ur name to t-REX cus u wanna be a dinosaur,
im like a pimp in this battle cus im owning this hore**.
all u are is a drunk driver behind the wheel,ur REXLESS,
for ur verse u musta pressed spacebar 50 times cus ur textless.

* corn= penis

** i am owning rexless

dazy 02-06-06 10:38 PM

my second line which was supposted to be there was:

rex u so gay u givin head to guys corn*
the only thing hard about this guy is his penis after he watches gay porn

* corn= penis

dazy 02-07-06 08:42 PM

hey wat u waiting for post ur verse kiddo it aint hard

rexless 02-07-06 09:23 PM

the SHIT STARTS when i sit ona John like BIZ MARK
and i leave JC sid-marks when ever i RIP FARTS
cus im dangerous as IRANIAN engineers handlin URANIUM
u'll need more than a CHEM SUIT to defuse dis bad SITUATION
i forge knives made of TITANIUM to stab "JC" in the CRANIUM
tranquilizing my flow only time you TAIN-THIS-MAN, u'll get Stomp more times the YaKeey STADIUM
tough words dont "STIR ME UP" U aint thought provokin ENUFF
i give u PASSION, anger, and ACTION til i decide to yell "CUT"
I dont cry tears I cry bullets, heres a nine son grit ya teeth and CHEW-IT
you couldnt carry this W if all you had to do was PULL-IT
JC fatigued im saying, kool-aid run thru ya veins , HE's WEAK
when the floor gives from under-these-feet, only time i drop under this GEEK

dazy 02-08-06 04:41 PM

uppin for votes people it aint to hard to do ok

-Substance- 02-08-06 07:06 PM

Voted For: rexless

i give this to rexless, altho both came weak he had some punches in there.......jc you need to read to some tuts on how to battle of get some help cause you don't really elevate in all your battles................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

dazy 02-08-06 11:11 PM

uppin on votes on this mofo uppin

twenty9 02-09-06 05:33 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
checkin the polez.................................

Confucius 02-09-06 05:34 PM

This was feedback posted for rexless
 
pollz............................................. ...........

H.D. 02-09-06 05:51 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

"u'll need more than a CHEM SUIT to defuse dis bad SITUATION"

hmmm that line doesn't rhyme with anything... Other than that nearly Rex's entire verse was self praise... no real clear punches, and nothing really directed at JC at all... to tell the truth it was all flow and a few multies... You can not win off of flow.. (or better yet you shouldn't)... So in a surprise even to myself... I find I have to vote for JC just because he actually at least tried to punch his opponant with the accept of his 1st line...

Openr: JC (hmm the comb line was better than the fart one)
Closer: JC (the texless line was better than Rex's)
Punches: JC (he just threw more)
Personals: Tie nothing really stellar here
Structure: Neither
Enjoyment: Neither

Vote: JC Real

rexless 02-09-06 06:05 PM

i think you hate'in on me but you might not so im gonna leave it alone

.:Mike Check:. 02-09-06 06:47 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
pollz............................................. .....

dazy 02-12-06 10:07 PM

uppin on votes on this battle people vote uppin JC Real

rexless 02-13-06 09:39 AM

upp'in for more votes come on i will return the favor

dazy 02-13-06 10:57 AM

uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n on this bitch

*Antic* 02-13-06 05:53 PM

Voted For: rexless

Vote - Rexless

Rexless killed him with some of his punches, and his shit was better structured. JC Real had some punches that were actually somewhat decent:

"ur like a comb for bald people ur useLESS to me."

-that's the best punch I've seen from JC Real. Funny shit.

Anyways....

Flow- Rexless. Both catz had flow structure problems, but Rexless' flow was a little more together.

Punches- Rexless. A better display from JC Real, some better punches, but it lacked the complexity of Rexless' punches.

Personals- JC Real. His last bar had some heat on it, there just wasn't enough in his whole drop.

Multis- Rexless. Hands down, had multis in the right places, and some well-used inner multis in his flow.

Wordplay- Marginal from both catz. Tie.

I thought Rexless had harder punches, more thought out concepts, some good multis, and came harder. Not a bad display from JC Real, his first and last bar were decent, but overall Rexless had the better drop.

~1~

rexless 02-14-06 04:59 PM

upp'in for more fair and honest votes
this is almost finished
i will RTF drop link

dazy 02-16-06 10:34 PM

almost but might have to wait a year so at least some people vote

rexless 02-18-06 05:43 PM

upp'in for more fair and honest votes
this is almost finished
i will RTF drop link

dazy 02-20-06 07:13 PM

vote people vote plz just do it

dazy 02-21-06 04:00 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 votez

Nick Knack 02-21-06 04:02 PM

Voted For: rexless

rex: not a ton of good punchez, lot of capital letterz but the wordplay isnt amazing. work on ya wordin cuz it will help your punchez more than anything.

jc: you barely had punchez, and the onez you had were bad. your wordplay is too forced and a lot of it didnt make sense. work on real wordplay and good personalz.

v- rex

Young_law 02-22-06 09:08 AM

Voted For: rexless

the SHIT STARTS when i sit ona John like BIZ MARK
and i leave JC sid-marks when ever i RIP FARTS
Ha!, i laughed for a minute

cus im dangerous as IRANIAN engineers handlin URANIUM
u'll need more than a CHEM SUIT to defuse dis bad SITUATION
straight but hardly rhymed

i forge knives made of TITANIUM to stab "JC" in the CRANIUM
tranquilizing my flow only time you TAIN-THIS-MAN, u'll get
Stomp more times the YaKeey STADIUM
LMFAO!

tough words dont "STIR ME UP" U aint thought provokin ENUFF
i give u PASSION, anger, and ACTION til i decide to yell "CUT"
meh

I dont cry tears I cry bullets, heres a nine son grit ya teeth and CHEW-IT
you couldnt carry this W if all you had to do was PULL-IT
kinda played but ok[b]

JC fatigued im saying, kool-aid run thru ya veins , HE's WEAK
when the floor gives from under-these-feet, only time i drop under this GEEK
[b]ok closer


my rymes so fresh its like orange juice straight from the tree,
ur like a comb for bald people ur useLESS to me.
suprisingly ok opener from you

rex u so gay u givin head to guys corn*,
the only thing hard about this guy is his penis after he watches gay porn.
played

hey REX i hear u changing ur name to t-REX cus u wanna be a dinosaur,
im like a pimp in this battle cus im owning this hore**.
nooopppee

all u are is a drunk driver behind the wheel,ur REXLESS,
for ur verse u musta pressed spacebar 50 times cus ur textless.
your trying to put all the punches and personals on his name, bad move


vote-rexless

Savior 02-22-06 01:31 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
v/ JC reAl

his last bar was mad cool, all the other punches in the battle were not that good, sorry but JC got this

Mike Macs 02-22-06 01:50 PM

Voted For: JC REAL

JC got this, his shit wasn't the best but I liked how it had some shit I've never seen in a battle, some of his disses was childish like when he said rex is so gay, the t-rex line was retarded, the misspellin of whore and that line was played to the max, but other than that it was good n kept my intrest....

Rexless had it at the start for me then it just got stupid how he kept goin on n on bout what he's gonna do, repetitive lines, things like urnanium n cranium should've been paired together, instead of bein two lines apart....

rexless 02-23-06 09:42 AM

^^^ you must be blind but thanx for the vote anyways, upp'in for more votes

Wicked One 02-23-06 01:01 PM

Voted For: rexless

Rexless- Your verse was pretty good man, i mean good enough to win n all, punches were pretty good too, some were played or weak but for the most part they were good, Had a few personals n there. Structure was aight, some strechted lines. But overall 5/10...Won for better punches

JC Real- verse was aight, nothing too big or good, punches were weak i thought, maybe you had a couple good ones thats bout it. Structure was good. But overall man it was kinda close, but ur punches were just weak, and didnt connect or hit hard enough. no hate.. 3.5/10

Rexless RTF In My Sig Any Battle Just Pick one. OR I WILL Remove my vote.

rexless 02-24-06 11:38 AM

upp'in this battle for more votes so this could end i will RTF

Dickard. 02-26-06 05:09 PM

This was feedback posted for rexless
 
you win....better multis n punches...yea....but im not voting becuz im not typing shit out. peace

rexless 02-26-06 07:37 PM

danm son you could of voted anyways

upp'in for more votes

rexless 03-01-06 09:09 PM

come on now we just need 1 more vote whos gonna drop the last vote for us?

dazy 03-02-06 04:52 PM

uuupppppppppppppppppppin 4 votes

rexless 03-03-06 09:37 AM

WE NEED MJORE VOTE MORE VOTES MORE VOTES lol, plez someone anyone I"LL RTF....

*SmokeSomething* 03-03-06 09:58 AM

Voted For: rexless

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^^^^^^^^^^6first of all rtf


but i think rex got this cause the battle was a good 1 but rex was clowin jc better personals,better punches, and i think it flowed better not sayin is was a great verse it like 8-10

jc you had a nice verse but you didnt come as hard


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