*Antic* vs JC REAL
 

Battle Rules:

4 - UNLIMITED Lines 4 rymes
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votes
and ur dead.........

Minimum posts to vote: 230

Check in by: 02-10-06 at 12:10 AM

Must drop verse in 7400 minutes after check in.

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 12:12 AM.

*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 12:25 AM.

take your time, little boy...think real hard............

y cus i know i will win this time..................

hey, fuck the beef for a second, is this unlimited bars, or just 4...says 4-unlimited...

4 unlimited bars yes

just like r old battle but this time theres gonna b a new out come

Time to put dis kid in his place....AGAIN!

yeeeeeeeeah, check dis.


'Hear me kid' your vocab's limited but 'mine's a myriad'
This lil' girl wears "the rag"in his sig to 'hide his period'//

Like 'Cain said' I'm "Able" to kill this kid and 'drain headz'
I can't "pull tha plug" cuz this kid's already 'brain dead//

I 'J'ust 'C'ouldn't resist he just another 'geek to clown'
Come Hard? Only if A-team gives him a 'reach around'//

His 'stamina's shit' fuck a rag he look like a 'man in a wig'
He 'bout as REAL as the 2-D pics of the 'cats in his sig'//

'Fuck 4 bars' 'trust your barred' like facial hair 'on ya lady'
This just another "fuck you" from the finger 'on my avy'//

clock's tickin'....what's he gon do....better look up 'Antic' in the dictionary....cuz it just happened to you.

yo, i ever tell u about this bitch *antic*
as soon as i drop my verse tha bitch starts to pantic
ur going around sayin ur better , ur just a joke
i'll be on the road to stardom,u'll be in my dust smoke *
u got stars around your name u think ur a celebrity?
u get a gun try and try ,u still can't even hit me
when i go on this site i crush u like ants
dopest mc? nope, u just got shit in ur pants

* part of past thats no meaning to me

wow, you better hope for a lot of dick rides....smh

Voted For: *Antic*

*smh* come on Antic you picking on small fries again... lmao anyway Antic used alot of set up lines in this which against good competition coulda of cost him this battle... But for the 10 lines used he threw 4 punches... I have no idea why he said 4 bars during his 5th... but aside from that he still had the best verse...

JC you really have to actually dis your opponant to get credit for punches... Do not complain about shit, do not praise yourself, and try to be original... if your punches can not exist by themselves do not use them... If most of your punches coulda been throw at any one, than they're not personal... for the love of Hip~hop take the crit and use it to improve...

Opener: Neither (they didn't throw a punch)
Closer: Antic (his last bar was better than JC's but it still wasn't good)
Punches: Antic (he threw more)
Personals: Antic (JC didn't have any at all)
Creativity: Antic
Complexity: Antic

Vote: Antic

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Voted For: *Antic*

yo, i ever tell u about this bitch *antic*
as soon as i drop my verse tha bitch starts to pantic
nah, not feeling it
ur going around sayin ur better , ur just a joke
i'll be on the road to stardom,u'll be in my dust smoke *
ok
u got stars around your name u think ur a celebrity?
u get a gun try and try ,u still can't even hit me
nah, weak FOCUS MORE kid
when i go on this site i crush u like ants
dopest mc? nope, u just got shit in ur pants
ahh another one that could of hit better and all if you just re-word it

my advice is WATCH a couple of SMACK DVD'S or just look ova other people battles and leave votes, the more votes you leave the more you notice what you have to do to get the voters to like your stuff, thats the best way of elevating






'Hear me kid' your vocab's limited but 'mine's a myriad'
This lil' girl wears "the rag"in his sig to 'hide his period'//
aight start,
Like 'Cain said' I'm "Able" to kill this kid and 'drain headz'
I can't "pull tha plug" cuz this kid's already 'brain dead//
decent * good thing you said like CAIN SAID, you saved your ass with that *
I 'J'ust 'C'ouldn't resist he just another 'geek to clown'
Come Hard? Only if A-team gives him a 'reach around'//
sorry didnt get it?
His 'stamina's shit' fuck a rag he look like a 'man in a wig'
He 'bout as REAL as the 2-D pics of the 'cats in his sig'//
aight
'Fuck 4 bars' 'trust your barred' like facial hair 'on ya lady'
This just another "fuck you" from the finger 'on my avy'//
ha good ending

you had a more focus verse, some punches, aight flow keep practising on your punches you got it just need a touch up but not a bad verse keep up the good work

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221595 vs *antic* 1-0
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haha, Jc didnt stand a chance, antic took this eazy, antic u should start battelin some better opponents, even though ur good, im not sure how credible your record is, not hate on anyone.

two more things, i dont think "pantic" is a word JC and rexless, i never thought anyone would need 2 tell you what a reach-around is haha

I only took this battle cuz JC insisted he'd win...

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Here's how it breaks down

Antic

'Hear me kid' your vocab's limited but 'mine's a myriad'
This lil' girl wears "the rag"in his sig to 'hide his period'-haha nice opener...good personal 9/10

Like 'Cain said' I'm "Able" to kill this kid and 'drain headz'
I can't "pull tha plug" cuz this kid's already 'brain dead'-good punch 8/10

I 'J'ust 'C'ouldn't resist he just another 'geek to clown'
Come Hard? Only if A-team gives him a 'reach around'-lol nice punch 9/10

His 'stamina's shit' fuck a rag he look like a 'man in a wig'
He 'bout as REAL as the 2-D pics of the 'cats in his sig'-good punch, made me laugh 8/10

'Fuck 4 bars' 'trust your barred' like facial hair 'on ya lady'
This just another "fuck you" from the finger 'on my avy'-not so great of a closer, not to bad tho 7/10

Overall:41/50

JC REAL

yo, i ever tell u about this bitch *antic*
as soon as i drop my verse tha bitch starts to pantic-weak, no punch 5/10

ur going around sayin ur better , ur just a joke
i'll be on the road to stardom,u'll be in my dust smoke-self glorification...blah 4/10

u got stars around your name u think ur a celebrity?
u get a gun try and try ,u still can't even hit me-weak... 5/10

when i go on this site i crush u like ants
dopest mc? nope, u just got shit in ur pants-shitty shitty shitty 5/10

Overall:19/40

Vote-Antic

Reason:Well...JC your drop absolutely sucked...didnt come hard at all..the only thing you had goin for you is structure...but then, Antics was still better

but thats just feedback, not enuff posts to vote

uppin this for some votes.....drop a link, and I'll RTF.......

Voted For: *Antic*

i have to give this to antic....he just came harder and with a much better verse....overall better punches and his structure was way better as well. jc, i see no improvement in your battles homie

thanks for the votes so far, uppin' to get this over with..............post a link and I'll RTF.

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