H.D. vs JC Real
 

Battle Rules:

5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-07-06 at 07:47 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 04:48 PM.

You rock color contacts ya need to realize, you’re just not a real guy*
Kid I knock you out ya “right” mind, you shoulda “left” when I signed in
Fist ya minds out, tape and rewind it; I’m insane punching ya minds in*
You talking arms, while I’m talking lose two, you sweet like yoohoo*
Just because I choose too, judge, jury, and execute you, go boo who*
I’ll kill you, revive ya soul and trap you in chuck’s sexually confused seed*
You a herb; I abuse trees, fake gangsta’s get taken off, so you lose leaves*
You’re structure would make more sense written on crumpled loose leaf*
With each sentence punches impact so hard they could make a tooth bleed
Point to ya grill when voters tell me show us the proof please? Truth leads
To the matter of speaking, comedy? This pic is the laughter you seeking*




Explanations:

* His name is JC Real… Real – Eyes = Realize which rhymes with real guy
Color contacts are fake eyes
* If you rewind the brains going out, it looking like they’re going back in
And: signed in, rewind it & minds in all rhyme… multiple syllables
* He front’s like he’s a gangsta (arms like firearms) lose two like limbs
Yoohoo is a sweet chocolate milk shake beverage… Lose two, yoohoo, choose too, execute you, boo who, and kill you all rhyme.
* Ghosts are supposed to say Boo, on the next line I said I’d kill em… make the connection…
*Go watch Seed of Chucky, his child isn’t sure if he’s a boy or a girl
* Herbs in street slang are corny mutha~fuckas… Herb is also weed though as is trees… Taken off means to rob someone, make the connection.
Btw: Confused seed, abuse trees, lose leaves, loose leaf, tooth bleed, proof please, & truth leads all rhyme multiple times.
*Matter of speaking, & laughter you seeking also rhyme multiple times.

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 05:34 PM.

i didnt have long to do this so here it is a short drop

yo im battlin this punk bitch h.d.
ur rymes dont make sence, how u expect to be a emcee
u say ur lines r great, kiddo u dont even ryme
people get shocked when they readin ur lines, like they eating a lime*
u thinkin ur a tv channel mister high definition
u fuck with me, i'll leave u in the hospital in critical condition
im gonna win this battle all easy and nicely
u winnin this battle is like u getting a woman, highly unlikey
h.d. ur the worst mutherphukker i ever heard about
one last thing, fuck you, werd im out

* limes are sour

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

JC took this simpley because he had better punches and he isnt a bitch, h.d i dont know how u are beatin me, all you do is spit garbage, everything i see that you spit is pure trash, its just all whack, dont elevate, just leave.

lmfao ha thats funny uppin for votes people

hmmmm hated on by two wack MCs... hmmm let's see if I give a fuck...

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Nope

^ppin' 4 Votes

.................................................. hmmm this still open?

^ppin'

uppin on this mofo it aint to hard just vote

Voted For: H.D.

i'm just not gonna vote on this one sorry....checkin pollz cause both came really weak and i'm tired of seeing peeps i tell to change shit but they don't.....


Removed

oh shit that was supposed to be feedback....i'll get it fixed...

ok get it fixed

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

man, wtf @ explinations longer than the verse rofl.

^ Seems to be needed here... since kids don't know a friggin' rhyme when it's staring them in the face

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 

wow just wow.. jc i thought you were good.. lmao ...thought

hmmmm some votes would be good...
yeah so... Vote

poeple vote on this battle people it isnt hard u know just write about the battle then post ur vote aint that hard

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Voted For: H.D.


yo im battlin this punk bitch h.d.
ur rymes dont make sence, how u expect to be a emcee
just flowin
u say ur lines r great, kiddo u dont even ryme
people get shocked when they readin ur lines, like they eating a lime*
you dont get shocked when you eat a lime, * should of REWORD IT said something like: you give out a change in face like eating a lime when reading your lines/ u'r skills like 2 ugly people thinking they there breeding is FINE/ feel me??*
u thinkin ur a tv channel mister high definition
u fuck with me, i'll leave u in the hospital in critical condition
aight basic
im gonna win this battle all easy and nicely
u winnin this battle is like u getting a woman, highly unlikey
nah,
h.d. ur the worst mutherphukker i ever heard about
one last thing, fuck you, werd im out

weak ending... you had 1 potential punch that got screwed up





You rock color contacts ya need to realize, you’re just not a real guy*
THIS IS NOT A BAR, WEAK START...

Kid I knock you out ya “right” mind, you shoulda “left” when I signed in
Fist ya minds out, tape and rewind it; I’m insane punching ya minds in*
bit multis...
You talking arms, while I’m talking lose two, you sweet like yoohoo*
Just because I choose too, judge, jury, and execute you, go boo who*
nah weak multis
I’ll kill you, revive ya soul and trap you in chuck’s sexually confused seed*
You a herb; I abuse trees, fake gangsta’s get taken off, so you lose leaves*
nice meta, good
You’re structure would make more sense written on crumpled loose leaf*
With each sentence punches impact so hard they could make a tooth bleed
aight,
Point to ya grill when voters tell me show us the proof please? Truth leads
To the matter of speaking, comedy? This pic is the laughter you seeking*
HA GOOD ENDING,

i thought you was more focus in this battle you had more punches and personal a bit of multis, def you improved from past battles i've peep keep elevating kid. word of advice dont give out a longer explanation then you have written bars it effect's the voters choise....

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mmmhmmmmmm... yeah what he said uppin' this... vote mofos

stupid mofos vote aint that hard we are here so someone wins not someone waites a year just for a vote

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ppin 4 votes

Voted For: H.D.

Vote- HD

Flow- HD. His was better structure, more complex...JC Real had an inconsistent and basic flow.

Punches- HD. He threw some punches, coupled with some personals that landed hard. JC Real threw like 1 or 2 punches, and they weren't very good.

Personals- HD. He had them. JC Real didn't have any personals.

Multis- HD. He had them. JC Real didn't have any.

Wordplay- eh....nothin' from either cat worth commenting on...HD I guess, he had that "right" and "left" thing in his first bar. HD.

HD took this. He had harder punches, better concepts, and personals...JC Real didn't really have any of that. Pretty one-sided.

i hate u ^^^^^^^^^^^ anyways uppin fo votes

Don't hate appreciate ... uppin' for more honest votes...

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Voted For: H.D.

alrighty now. altough this was tough 2 read at first look it was a little bit better then jc's shit. this had a nice flow and a better structure. some punches were weak thou. like the one with the minds in* (didnt really like that one) but still u got this... anyways jc. i expected alot more from u kidd. anyways elevate and good job ppz. peace