onestepbeyond vs The Revelation
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 02-10-06 at 05:39 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-06 03:10 PM.

Yeah yeah, tell them I skate... Dawg, you're losin' your wit,
Cause told me you skate too... And just can't do it for shit,
Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,
Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,
I'm punchin' with thunder...throwin' lines, one or the other,
Although when I drop bombs you'll be runnin' for cover.



Lol at how gay the last line is.

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-06 10:18 PM.

Haha aight, here we go.

So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!
What hurt worse, the punches or the kickflip you failed on,
Cuz just like ya friends, no matter what you do you always get bailed on.
Ya lines are older then ya 'krickets', he wanted a battle for no reason,
I may not skate good, but at least I'm not considered game when it become tourist season!
Oh susana, when are you coming around them mountains to see me?
just give up man, cuz even in the depths of your mind, you couldnt 'perceive' me.
i only chose ya, cuz i knew the other people wouldnt have to fear it,
youre a crowtastrophy? nah man, thats just whenever we hear your lyrics.

blah

Woot to my wack text verse...........................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

aiight This shuld get good. Two skaters. two of homies. and two people I would kill in a second. Hehehe

One Step Beyond


Yeah yeah, tell them I skate... Dawg, you're losin' your wit,
Cause told me you skate too... And just can't do it for shit,

Personal number 1. Pretty good.

Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,

Hahaha funny shit.

Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,

Word.

I'm punchin' with thunder...throwin' lines, one or the other,
Although when I drop bombs you'll be runnin' for cover.

That was pretty gay.

The Revelation


So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!

Hehehe Funny shit.

What hurt worse, the punches or the kickflip you failed on,
Cuz just like ya friends, no matter what you do you always get bailed on.

aiight son. Get er done.

Ya lines are older then ya 'krickets', he wanted a battle for no reason,
I may not skate good, but at least I'm not considered game when it become tourist season!

I didn't get it.Oh wait I do. Meh.

Oh susana, when are you coming around them mountains to see me?
just give up man, cuz even in the depths of your mind, you couldnt 'perceive' me.

Too se;f-glorifying...but decent.

i only chose ya, cuz i knew the other people wouldnt have to fear it,
youre a crowtastrophy? nah man, thats just whenever we hear your lyrics.

Nice closer.

Overall: This was a good battle. Lots of personals condiering you know each other and shit. Kirk gets it just cuz he had funnier punches. Though I still love you Rev. lol Oh yeah I'll piss on both of you. Word.

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Lmfao at this shit. I laughed at both verses. You guys are so cool. Like Whoa.

Word at me upping this piece of horse shit........

Only 1-0, I still have a chance.....hhahahahaahahahaha

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

Lmao .

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

just checkin polls..str8 battle....................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i have to say, both came weak but osb did come funnier and with one good metaphor. rev, prob your weakest. seen better from you. osb did come more creative and with a better structured verse....so he gets this one

I doubt you've seen better cuz this is my first text battle in months.

Voted For: The Revelation

The Revelation - You had a good verse, you used some a good flow, the punches where ok and you had some good rhymes.

Best Line - Oh susana, when are you coming around them mountains to see me?
just give up man, cuz even in the depths of your mind, you couldnt 'perceive' me.

Worst Line - So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!

OneStepBeyond - You had a good flow and structure, you used some ok rhymes, and you had some ok punches.

Best Line - Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,

Worst Line - I'm punchin' with thunder...throwin' lines, one or the other,
Although when I drop bombs you'll be runnin' for cover.

OVERALL - This was a close battle but I give my vote to Rev becuz he had the better punches, he used a better flow and his rhymes where more creative. One you need to up on your wordplay and punches, and use a bigger vocab your rhymes where pretty basic.

Vote - The Rev

Lol at you voting on every single battle I have and always voting against me when I clearly won. No offense Rev.

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

checking tha pollz guys...nice job both....word..1

^^LMAO,I think we got ourselves a hater!!1...Im talkin bout GKILLAZ05 not OSB...He has voted against OSB in tons of his battles and OSB clearly demolished his opponent...lol..word...1

It's cool, I didn't expect to win anyway. Who am I to defeat the amazing K to the Irk?

Haha... ROOTIN TOOTIN PUSSY! We're 108 out of 3000 in adult comedy now.

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Wtf @ your closer....

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

OSB came weak i'd vote rev but i'm lazy.

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

feed back: i thought rev won but i cant vote not enough post to vote

Word to me winning 3-2...sorta.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

okay nice battle
opener:osb
punches:osb
personals:osb
closer:tie
structure:tie
multies:osb
vote:osb
please return the favor honostly in the battle in my sig

Wow at closer tie. I think I deserved at least that.

Lol at how he made smileys. That shit made me chuckle.

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

i don't know who to vote for, so i'll just say that OSB's last punch was the best ever

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!
What hurt worse, the punches or the kickflip you failed on,
Cuz just like ya friends, no matter what you do you always get bailed on.

VS

Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,
Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,


Close, but to me osb came a bit more consistant.

I still love you both sincerely.

RTF and sex.

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

This was actually a good battle, but OSB gets my verse because he had harder hitting disses, better wordplay, more creativitie and an entertaining verse.

Rev-Your verse was nice, but the lack of entertainment threw it off for me...You had some nice lil disses and punches in there as well as good wordplay, but your verse seemed boring to me, thats why I'm not giving you my vote. I say, keep doin what your doing, just had more hype to it.

OSB- You had a good verse. You didn't really catch my attention early, which is a negative...(your first opening bar should be tha one to get my attention), but you made up for that in tha middle of your verse throughout tha end. U get my vote because you had funny, entertaining lyrics, and like I said...creatitivie...nice wordplay and nice hard hitting punched. Ur disses were better and you came out with an overall better verse. Keep it up.

Overall-No hatin on anyone...both verses were nice, but I feel OSB just came a lil harder because his verse was more entertaining.


"But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly" <Because of lines like that...not hard to understand...dont hafto think about it for a million years and it gets right down to tha point, and make you laugh.

Even lines like this: "But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers," < thats what I mean by word play...tha way you make tha reader think, put some creative effort into it, and makes us laugh...


Nice clean battle....

V/OSB


Oh, I cant vote...sry...I'll see if my other account got 500 on it...

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

shit........dat was cold
Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,
dis line was sik

the revelation's verse sucked monkey ass..........

lmao You battle him then. Cuz you're really good...