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Babygurl...A song 4 wifey
This is a song i made personally 4 my shorty. Please excuse the quality. Theres a constant hiss in the background of my vocals. but it aint horrible. peep this shit and gimme sum feedback.
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id get ur 2 links before this is closed... do that and ill reply.
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what do u mean by 2 links?
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you have to drop feed on two other mcs and provide links to show that you did.
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there u go. now sum1 gimme sum feedback..
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alright i'm listening now
you sound good your flow and pressense is hot...we gotta collab on a track man,i like your style hmm.... if you had better quailty(which you will if you let me mix your stuff in our collab) then you'd be really really fire i'm feeling it fam stay up 1 |
iight, good looks man. im up 4 a collab. i'll hit u up....
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i dont like this beat, too cheasy for me... not my thing but ill look past that, flow is cool but theres times u drop suttin slower/faster the rest i dont like the way u have big pauses in between some stuff, yeh quality is off... ur presence and delivery is good though, lyrics serve there purpose but are abit basic... hook is ok, yeman pretty cool shit, mainly im not feeling it cos its not my style but u got good abilities on a mic so cnt knock that.
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iight..guess everyone is entitled to their own opinions..
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listnin................................
beats low and has ......................and im not feelin it........ voice is good on this type track....................... flowz good................................. deleiveryz nice................................ quality could be improved...................... lyrics r nice........................... overall pretty decent for tha type............... 7/10 werd stay up |
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Yo This Jawn Iight The Beat Ill To Me You Rap Kinda Like Chris From Young Gunz Everything On Point Seem Like You Know What You Doing
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good looks. keep shit craccin homie.
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listenin..yah quality aint good...but u got a nice voice...jus got a wrong mixin technique...flow is real dope...nice multis here n there...jus work on the emotion a lil but i think the quality fucks it up....but yeah keep at it..u got a real nice flow..hook is nice too...real catchy...this is pretty hot..if it was mixed right and mastered in a studio this shit wud be on BET....2nd verse is alot much betta nigga....flow is really nice...lyrics are pretty nice..like that pleasure n pain line...we shud collab mayne..holla at me..1
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221889 cud u rtf to that^^^ plz |
he flows are not bad sounds like over all is good ..just need a new or better mic ... and some production...http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...id=3466822&q=hi
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http://www.soundclick.com/player/si...08&q=hi.....not a bad beat ...not my style but it would go with your flows...
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Listening...I love this beat man. Sheek is my man...Anyways, emotion is dope. This makes up for the quality. I can tell this is coming from the heart. Honestly, I really wasn't expecting much, but you surprised me bro. Hook is hot...Lyrical wise, this is pretty good, especially for a love song...Sounds like something I could chill and smoke too...Flow is really good man. Overall, solid track man. Only thing you need to work on is quality, which you already know. Good shit man.
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thanks fellas. i'm headin to the studio to re-record this track and i'ma do a sum new tracks and shit and hopefully. get this producer to help me on my mixtape. hopefully everything works out. cuz i already got connects in the music biz. i just need a cd to show b4 anything could happen.
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shits decent.. quality can be better...
flow and lyrics are mad on point like banks.. "more than a nice but, a girl i can wife up" liked that line alot hook is nice and smoothe yeah fasho actually feelin this track second verse.. sped it up a little bit that shit hot ya fasho kid ya doin ya thing 8/10 hit up my track here we go http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222268 |
good looks man. i appreciate it. but wheres the link to ur track?
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^^ You down to collab?
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i'd collab wit u, but i still gotta do a collab wit Past Tense. After that we prolly could work sumthin out. 1
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by the way. I'm knuckels. I needed a name change. lol
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Ight, good beat choice...........
hook kicks in... your quality needs to fixed badly. I would suggest getting a new mic and an amp to get rid of the "rushing water" in the background. You need more emotion, and the echo is too strong, and makes you sound mono toned. Verse kicks in The reverb drowns out your verse. Good topic, but you need to keep your delievery consistent, for instance, the pause doesnt work well. It also, it sounds in a few places that you was reading off of a paper more than concentrating on delivering the verse. Chorus kicks in.... same as above. 2nd Verse Better than first, your message was a lot clearer. You started off solid, but started to fall off as the verse continued. Yea, work on delievering a more complex flow, because your sentence structure is too elementary right now. Take the reverbs off your voice, and add dubs instead. I suggest getting better equipment, or get someone to help you manage and manipulate your vocals. But this is an average track. 7/10 - would be a little higher if quality was better. feed used 2/17 "*The Artist*" |
ok..i hear u. but i have no clue what u r talkin about. i know my mic is str8. its my audio card. and there r no reverb on my vocals. there ain't no echo. more complex? not to b rude or anything.... but it is a love song. Let me school ya'll on something... when u make tracks, u r sopposed to do it to "GET UR POINT ACROSS". It's not always about complex this and complex that. I say... "TO EACH, HIS OWN". no disrespect meant....and none taken...
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