Hop On In*new ish from PT*
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=426183
Hop On In i pulled out one of my old mics and was like i'm bored lets record a track.....well anyways...if you leave feed i will leave feed back.. Links -------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222311 ==== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222209 |
I actually really like this beat... piano and all... really laid back type feel... and you came over the top of it with a pretty relaxing flow... liked that aspect of this... not bad... the hook was aight, didn't feeling the singing too much though... flow was pretty on point... lyrically wasn't really that blaze... "on top of the vaccum" <~~~ yay that had me like why would you say that? anyway over all this was cool for like a lil laid back jon to mellow things back out on a demo/mixtape
RTF Last Breath |
yeah thanks for the feed
this is the incomplete track i'm waiting for our backround singer too get on this...hes gonna sing it up really good make it sound 2000 times better |
lol aight rey i got you right now fam
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this is nice, i'm really feeling the beat, think i can get it too use it? i don't like the echo effect at some points, but it is nice....good job, nice flow...some parts your voice did seem like you were signing under your breath...rtf in my open mic, the shadow behind me son
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Ok i got you man...
but yeah ill let you use the beat |
ok hit me up on aim or msn....thanks past
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aight aight aight...
aight you got the right to talk shit... but be easy shit aint fiya good beat i guess i really aint in to know 1991 ll cool j type shit you know that lovin shit but its decent for that comin in clear delivery is dope too good flow and you writen lyrics like the rest of da cats on this site.. but still dog 7/10 stay up -1 feed used 2/16 "!!!They Fuckin Comin For Ya!!! " |
word i feel you man
bad mic i got right now it'll be better in a week or so thanks for the feed ~1 |
its iiiight. i would give it a 7/10. hook is str8. we should battle in doin a love track. that'd b fun. but it's iight. 1 P.S. - As always, fuck dem PSA niggas! 1
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what beat is dat? if it's an original beat i'd wanna fucc wit it. let me know. I'll turn dat into a hit quicc. 1
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beat:8...oo..datz dat slow ish..oooweee
flow:8.5 hook:8 enjoyment:8 man i liked it man......dis dat song for da ladiez fa sho and i was really feelin' it....u culd get sum chickz wit dis one..lol |
alright i'm upppin
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yeah..uppin..again
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uppin on this
lets get some more feed |
okay......beat is kinda amateurish...not bad but not great neither.....ya flow has def improved but its rushed in spots....first verse was koo but lyrically it was real simple an common..u approached this very generically....awwww def not feeling the hook seems wrong for the beat..an it was mixed bad.........also everythign seems too loud in general the bass is dominating on beat an the chorus break is really loud as well as vocals on hook...second verse was decent but it lost the appeal of first verse due to the emotion falling off sum....damn I really dun like that hook.......it really hurt track......this wasn't for me man....it coulda been way better...I aint gon give that bullshit response generally given here "it wasn't ya best"..Im a jus be real wit u an say I wasn't feeling it son..no hate..I jus wasn't...........1
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