Young Money vs D-mat
 

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alrite step it up young money...you spit 1st...no feeding and shit...but im not gonna spit and then have you not drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-19-06 at 12:00 PM

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D-mat has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-16-06 12:10 PM.

Young Money has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-16-06 12:22 PM.

ok money. we spittin it now.......................

yeah drop ya verse i cant feed off you because i cant see you verse until i drop i bout to drop in a min

youre to young to understand how to be lyrical..
the way im merkin your simpleton ass is satirical..
Im like a fightor pilot and your just a lil cadet..
you wotn beat me i bet, you balls aitn dropped yet..
your voice aint changed, and that you aint a crip..
you were wearing red in your pic, you aint wut u say shit..
see crips is blue and you sayin RIP for shock value..
merkin you is easy, see, im me and shall you..
ever think you are good, ill knock you down a few notches..
you poor with no matta ya name, i got a few plat watches..
if you make one dollar, gimme a hollar, i know u cant hustle..
you aitn got pussy, i got somethin special: a chant sucka..
and it goes: YM is bitch, YM is pussy, YM cant make money..
Ym will never ever be rich, YM is a girl, hate to say it honey..
See im clever, i defeat in every endevaor,Ym u make me yawn
this battle you'l tresure, you got lesson, sorry, now im gone

alrite homie i dropped now lets see what ya got

the FACT IS YA WHACK KID, you'l get SMACKED WITH THE RAPS PRICK, finish you off and get SLASHED WITH THE AXE BITCH!!!

see DEATH COMES TO THE WEAK, i'm BLESSED COMING WITH HEAT, cause the only time your "moving" in the "rap business" is when you RUN DOWN THE STREET!!!

i leave cats LYRICALLY AMAZED, and SPIRITUALLY IN DAZE, and annoying cats get hit REALLY WITH THE GUAGE!!!

ya RAPS ARE WHACK...LISTEN, with GATS IM THAT VICIOUS, to walk off and SMACK AND SLAP MIDGETS!!!(LoLz)

Damn! i'll NEVER LOOSE FAGGOT, i'm BETTER FUED PACK IT, with clips that'll BETTER YOU....HAVE IT!!!

i'm MOVING UP IN THE BRACKETS,-i'll DAMAGE YALL WEAK CREWS, then SCAVENGE OFF DEEP FUEDS, then become a RAMPANT AND EAT YOU!!!

Im back the RAP-MAN, askin about the PACKS-MAN, and bullets will fly through ya body n show ya insides like a fucking CAT-SCAN/

im UNDERBELLING-THE-THROWN, because this FELON-IS-KNOWN, cause yo "calls"(callouts) will get "dropped" like "metro" CELLULAR-PHONES/

get hit wit the bow..then ill take out the ARROW-PARTS stab atcha bones..till ya fuckin MARROW-PARTS! u cant touch this..the guns "deal death" like TAROT-CARDS!/

i always DRENCH THE HATERS, get BENT FOR FAVORS, cause u always post late like EXTENDED PAPERS//!!

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Voted For: Young Money

Wow...Young gets the vote by far....he ripped this kid. I read money's first and when I got done I read D's and it was nothing compared. My favorite lines where

Im back the RAP-MAN, askin about the PACKS-MAN, and bullets will fly through ya body n show ya insides like a fucking CAT-SCAN/

and...

im UNDERBELLING-THE-THROWN, because this FELON-IS-KNOWN, cause yo "calls"(callouts) will get "dropped" like "metro" CELLULAR-PHONES/

Flow - Young
Complex - Young because he had a lot of multis and they matched with each other that made it flow.
Personals - Young by far...good punches in a lot of the lines.
Opening - Young, his game harder, and D-Mats was just plain weak.
Closing - Young...it was better than D's...Way better.

Young - Keep it up
D-Mat - work on your lines and practice because you need to work on a lot of stuff.

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ok heres something i dont get...not saying that i deserve to win by far, But he did not have one personal and mine was filled with them. Its not supposed to be lyrical all the way. I know i need to work on my shit...but i dissed the fuck out of him. With stuff that is actually true. ANd i had multis and shit. But w/e.

cause that shit you spit wasnt hot them personal were weak

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Voted For: Young Money

hmmm this battle was a lil lopsided... but not too much... YM clearly had the better verse... but most of his punches tough more creative were not directed... They couldn't been thrown at anyone... and some of them weren't really punches at all... (like his opening line) ... But D-Mat's verse was just terrible... he had some ideas/concepts he coulda really used against YM... but he writes like he just started spittin' yesterday... very unimpressive stuff out him

Opener: Niether (no punches)
Closer: YM
Punches: YM
Personals: D-Mat
Structure: D-Mat
Creativity: YM
Complexity: YM

Vote: YM

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Voted For: Young Money

I Have to say, young money, fix that horrible way you structure your verse. dmat, you did ok, not really up there. young money did come with some good pucnhesa nd metaphors so he gets my vote

Voted For: D-mat

Weak battle overall dont really know who won but i think D-Mat took it

The reason i'ma give it to D is cuz he didnt use all that gun talk... Young cut that shit out you know damn well your not goin to meet D and and your not gonna shoot him.. thats basically all you talked about in your rap.. evey meta you atempted sucked every punch missed

D had personals he called Young on his not bein a crip thing yet still there was nothing to your verse some off it didnt make sense but you still had enough to beat young

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This was feedback posted for Young Money
 

got dam dis kid got fire im hafta bring my A game real talk

Voted For: Young Money

young money gets my vote due to consistent punches, flow was hot, the structure was wack...but just cause it aint my style, the punches could have had more rellevance. try to get personal. but overrall, your shit was decent. good battle.

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Voted For: D-mat

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This was feedback posted for Young Money
 

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Voted For: Young Money

Man, Money...dont stretch yo' lines as much and don't seperate bars...

Other then that, your verse was pretty nice..

see DEATH COMES TO THE WEAK, i'm BLESSED COMING WITH HEAT, cause the only time your "moving" in the "rap business" is when you RUN DOWN THE STREET!!!

LOL, That was nicee tho...

D-Mat, just step your game up, homie.

Young M Took this easy.