Writing Excercise
 

Key Rogue if you think this is bull shit then you can close it, but yo check it. I'm thinking I'm losing my writing Mojo, Yeah you remember me back in the day when I use to drop OM's Like fucking constantly, yeah I need to get back into that, write rhymes and having people like "Damn this was inspirational!". So I need some writing excercise, Like daily, you know?

ideas?

I got one from a friend.

"Lola, You write every-fucking day, Homeworks, or taking notes and shit, but hey anyway's since you want to write good and all, you gots to pratice, I've seen you in poetry classes, sitting there all dumb and shit, don't know what to write, shit is fucking rideclous. When you speak your poem infront of the class, it's horrible!!!!!, I'm sorry Lola, I know your my friend and all, but the truth will set you free, and it did for me :), every day, Mrs. Steege have news papers in the morning, what you need to do is go in her class and ask her for a news paper and found yourself a article that you feel interesting in, and write a story about it, and it has to be done on that day. Don't worry about grammar problems, just keep writing, then next thing you know, Boom writer blocks are gone, you got a fresh brain and your writing mojo is running smooth. Most of all, Revise, reivise...Let me say that again, R-e-v-i-s-e, when your done with your story. Thats it for now so,toodles see you on Tuesday :)."

Yeah through a email, blah, so yeah any ideas, or this will cool for a start off?

Bleh

I just stop writing for a while then

we all have writters block but lola u used to drop atleast 3 open mics a day....

I got well bad block too ! I think I'm gonna try this too.

The problem with me is that I try too hard to think in detail,
and people moan and say I force my rhyming when I don't
it's how I write.

But Lola I know what u mean everything you write is like yeah
thats good ! but your use to yeah thats dope...

Block is rubbish !!

But how do you force your rhyme when you do text? explain that to me please on audio is little different you hear the person

I know thats what I thought,... a few people liked this verse but a few
said that I forced the rhyming ????

Governed by law corruptions hard core
Civilisation’s soar AID’s left heart tore
The river of death’s shore left lock jaw
Don’t have malaria cure was deaths saw

Beyond the shack I dwell is a living hell
I express my dismay but ended up in cell
Don’t have jail the rebel forces would tell
Beyond the cobble paving dead flesh smell
No enriched soil all pure water went boil
World gave Aid to feed but need was toil

I dream of tranquilly to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity


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Seriously to me its ok just audio wise is little different like i mentioned if they mean force rhymin with your rhymin pattern...for example hell,tell,smell,cell...etc its basic

im not losing my writing mojo

link me to yo new shit..wild

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223367

spoke word poem called "My Nigga" ^^^^^^



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223910


topical called "I am God" ^^^^^


bon apetit

U in STFU? as well..

i read "my nigga" its pretty deep and its like u wrote it with a beat playing

yeah..stfu is cause i like the idea of telling people to stfu..my loyalty is here though..don't worry about that...you should check out "I am God" Too

o, wow! this chick is here as well as RB. i guess she had to come here after everyone there like.. disliked her and stuff!

Hmmmmmmm I don't remember anyone who disliked me, I rarely chat to anyone on there. All I do is...Post my Topical Writtens in TNL crew lounge.

:-/

hmm.. i was like, joking and stuff.

=/

Stfu...............

hop OFF my crew's nuts.

STFU!

fuck ya crew wit yo bitten name.......

wtf.. bitten? NEVER.. lol.

STFU!

our crew bitten? could've sworn RB had an A.I. first..

RB had Artificial Intelligent

comprehende? can you spell?

and Meta4 used to be in Regime u bit my friends name

rofl.. ok. i've had this name since '04, dick!;)

i used to barely ever get on this name. so, yea.. i didn't bite anyone's name.

btw, if his name was regime, then.. yea. thats his name. not met-a-4.

I said he was in the crew "Regime" old rb..sheeez....dumbo

Yo Key Rob Seven aka Voc, aka Metaphase and several other names at UF... also used to be meta4 - Just spelled correctly... It's actually a pretty common name... I've seen it in various spellings at alot of site... oh and btw 2004 you make you far from the 1st time I saw it used

rofl.. OLD rb crew. this isn't rb is it? this is rapverse. i was here when this place was rb, got banned and didn't come back till it was rapbattles I & II, guess them relaunch days as well. thats when i created this name, @ this site. battled, like for a week, left and then came back and shit, like, a few months ago and stuff.

so yea, that was WAYY before my time, kiddo.

see what i meanz. common name, yo.

so its only natural, i guess, for peeps to have this name. i've seen TONS of different peeps with Key in there name. don't make ur name flipped or bitten, dude.

DUH!

aha its whateva to me nan..lol