GKillaz05 vs oreo
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

This is Round 3, Oreo won our last two battles...
...They were very close calls!!

Goodluck!!

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-26-06 at 09:53 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-06 09:27 PM.

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-06 09:30 PM.

'O'nly 'R'appin' 'E'verything 'O'ld like late X-Mas presents...
Your really borin' to observe like after midnight TV segments...
Oreo cookies are nothin'... I could easily eat around six...
While you wouldn't even get gold in raps specials oylmpics...
Its near the end of you gettin' skewled the way ya dismissed...
Punches miss me, like the first time you tried givin' a kiss...
Only time you spit a hot rhyme is if it was completly copied...
Your like fuckin' a loose cunt your styles really weak n sloppy...

aint did text in months..read our sigs and the message at the top..good luck g

im hard like brick walls, shit like bathroom stalls with no drawls
me standing next to you with a cell is the only close calls
its the 3rd round and without a sound ima take your crown
why even rap if gravity the only thing thats holdin you down
fuck some punches, my hands are grippin guns and disses
tired at an aquaruim be the only way u make me sleep wit the fishes
come on whats the piont of sonning you,i father you daughter
killin g'z?you aint papoose and this aint alphebetical slaughter

good drop homie, uppin for votes!!!

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: GKillaz05

both verses were lack luster and I know G can do better than this... however as is, it's like oreo just didn't take G as a challenge in this round... because he obviously didn't trying... he bragged on past glory a lil, and that was it... No real punches... and a weak play on G's name

Punches: G
Personals: G but not by much... that 1st line had oroe's name in it but it wasn't a hot punch... and pretty much just a wasted concept that shoulda been ill
creativity: G
Complexity: G
Wordplay: Nothing to speak of
Enjoyment: None

Vote: GKillaz

this man dont know what he talkin bout..we both knew i won this one..shit we talked bout it..we both barely tried

I never once said you are goin' to beat me first off, second off I still think this guy dont got a fuckin' clue... lol

{this where we rivals man...this our net beef lol}......................................

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Voted For: oreo

v/oreo

both were pretty weak to be honest, but oreo was atleast trying to punch whereas gkillaz was just making statements. flows and structure were good from both but oreo was slightly....slightly beta to me.

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Vote- GKillaz05

Decent shit from both, here's how I saw it...

Flow- Gkillaz05. I can tell you an audio cat, no stretched bars, good flow, etc...oreo had an alright flow, but I dug Gkillaz more.

Punches- Gkillaz. He threw harder punches that were more focused, and had less about himself in his drop. Oreo had some hard punches but they weren't as direct.

Personals- Tie. Weak personals from both, nothing too impressive.

Multis- Tie. Nothing amazing to make one cat rise above the other.

Wordplay- Nothing Worth shoutin' about. Tie.

Good shit from both, liked both drops. I thought Gkillaz shit was more together, and his punches were slightly better. This one was closer than the categories indicated. Much props.

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This was feedback posted for oreo
 

Oreo took this..............

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Gkillz...u Get my Vote...


I like ya opener

"'O'nly 'R'appin' 'E'verything 'O'ld like late X-Mas presents..."

that was nice wordplay... ya shyt was simple, yet it hit very well....ya verse, was way stronger than Oreo's verse by a long shyt...

Oreo:

U must be tired of battling, because if u one the first two, u shoulda murdered em in this one....althought u had multis, it was boring as hell to read, it was like reading a damn history book....More expression, woulda brought ya verse out...

Overall Vote :GKILLAZ05

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This was feedback posted for oreo
 

Opener-tie
Punches-oreo
Multis-none
Closer-oreo
Good Battle
Drop On My Battle Payn Vs. King

^^^multies none..hahaha u cant read....................

Voted For: oreo

yo son.... you kilt that shit,,, your multies was hella simple but your verse was hella better...... you where a lil more complex... you had soem wack lines but you still did the job.... a few of your lines where hella dope tho......

killaz---- you was aight.... kind just spit bars.... there was no flow to yoru verse.......but you had like no dope lines.....

kinda of easy to grade this battle becuase one person hella outshined the other

Voted For: oreo

Yo Diz Wuzza Nyce Azz Battle Itz Hard 2 Say Who Got Diz FaRilla

Oreoz Yo Verze Wuz Nyce Yo Personalz Culd Of Be Betta But Yo Mettaz Had Me Cracckin up

G Yo Verze Wuz Ok I Lyke Yo Vocab & Expression On Da Barrz But Yo Punchez Lacced Da Hard Hitting Edge 2 Reaally Hurt Yo Oppenet

Punchez=Oreo
Mettaz=Oreo
Prsonalz=Both Came Weak
Vocab=G
Creativity=Tied

Vote=Oreo

Voted For: GKillaz05

Here's my voting on diz battle, clearly GK took it. It seems as oreo wasn't interested in battlin again so he came soft in diz battle. But did have a good punchline in there about 'i'm hard like bricc walls, shit like bathroom stalls with no drawls'...othawise da rest of it was played
no hate

GK ur verse was betta out of tha 2, & clearly outdone oreo in diz 1. u had alot of good punches, & eva line was consistent & full of good punchlines in ya verses now that it's pointed out. But anyways nice verse just GK was dat much better

winner- GKillaz05

ight so rtf in diz battle here
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Voted For: oreo

oreo just took this with better pucnhes, wittier hits, more consistent flow and a amore creative flow. gkillaz, you should maybe had a few more metas in your verse, try to get some more creative punches as well.....overall descent battle......rtf in one of my battlea!

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Voted For: oreo

oreo takes this out.... no fuckin sweat... G..killaz.. u fuckin biter.. tht special olympix is mi line ..... wtf..

oreo ... had punches ... better flow.. n overall had a better structure..

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