Tech Skillz vs TaShay
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-27-06 at 02:17 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

TaShay has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-06 11:18 PM.

Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-06 12:18 AM.

For the Rules I mean 6-10 Barz.....




Ya pen must be Exhuasted, Cuz ya Stylez Dry~as~Hell..//
This is ya LaSt Battle So give ya Crew a word~ of~farewell..//

I 'Devour' ya eccentric Style so simply with complicity..//
my Lyrics easily 'ShoCk'' ya brain like 'boltz' of electricity..//

My Lryical venom attackz ya brain till ya mentality becomes Weak..//
by the time im done change ya headlinez" RV's NEW BITCH OF THE WEEK"..//


Ya Whole Styles wack, Beta yet Ya Crew is the WaCkest..//
How the hell u gonna be a leader you got the most losses under ya JaCket...//

ya ass aint elevated ya should be Restricted from That SeCtion..//
You aint Shyt now but the PaSt Memory, Cuz Im Da PreSent..//

You Ain't Number One, I'm Racin This Punch To Put You To Rest
So When We Say You Got The A Cup....
...We Only Mean The Ones On Your Chest!!
Girl, You Wack, I'm Keystylin my Way Through These Lyrics!!
When You Clap At Your Lips It Only Means Another Guy Hit It
The Fact I'll Pop You Off Faster Than A First Time In Bed
Cause You Get Down With Biting........
.....Sorta Like The First Time You Gave Head!!
Tashay You Ain't Shit Homegirl, Just A Bitch In A Black Book
I'm Pickin Up Rolls, About 22.....
......Just To Get A Chance To See How Your Ass Look!!
One More Bar And Your Outta The Park....I'm Rippin You Up
So When You Say You Ain't Givin A Fuck....
....Its Just You Tired From Giving It Up!!

you mean lines, cause you dropped 5 bars=10 lines.

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 

Easy win Tech...TaShay,it was just ok, nothing stood out at all but all you gotta do is elevate, you'll get better...No hate all love...word...1

Oh okay, i was counting them different........NiCe Drop.....yup!


Letz get thiz moving...

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 

both was good but tashay had some shit..............

Voted For: Tech Skillz

lmao that last line was pretty dope from Tech... but over-all this was probably one of the worst verses I've read from him... still he came better than Tashay... Shay you basically said what you could, or would do to Tech... there wasn't too many actual disses in ya verse... and forced multies... the words rhyme yes... but you could a added more or less rather than stress a weak multie at the end of the line...

Punches: Tech
Personals: TaShay
Creativity: Tech
Complexity: Tech
Wordplay: Nothing really
Enjoyment: Tech

Vote: Tech Skillz

uppin............................................. ....and your right, my worst verse to this day

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 

Yeah, I'll just check the polls because I can.

stfu and vote you hoe....................................

I mean, DAMN, CAN I GET THIS BATTLE OVER WITH PLZ....VOTE...

This was feedback posted for TaShay
 

not a bad battle im not gonna vote tho but TaShay u shuddnt put "//" afta ya lines it kinda fucks wit tha structure otha den dat u did ok g/l u two

oh okay, i just like doing that cuz it looks Neat, lol....but thankz.....

Voted For: TaShay

shit shay, that was some good punches. no offens tech but she riped u up, i liked

'Devour' ya eccentric Style so simply with complicity..//
my Lyrics easily 'ShoCk'' ya brain like 'boltz' of electricity..//

My Lryical venom attackz ya brain till ya mentality becomes Weak..//
by the time im done change ya headlinez" RV's NEW BITCH OF THE WEEK"..//

thanks man......can u give a lil more feed too please....thankx..

uppin for more votes...........................................

.............................................damnn nnnnnnnnnnnnn will this every close...damn..

uppin............................................. .....

Voted For: TaShay

Honestly imma give it to tashay cuz seriously if thats all you had to say against her then she deserves to win as i was reading i was thinking of about 25 disses that were missed ..tashay step up ya A-game tho that closer had yuo closer to losing and all that '/.,;'/.,;''/.,;'// shit is annoying but any ways v-dml(tashay)

Damn, why doesnt this site like the quotes, lol....at my otha site, i would loose for not having the quotes...but thankz for the critique....

More Feed and votes please..

This was feedback posted for Tech Skillz
 

...................leavin feedback i think u won this................

can we get more votes on this...............................

Voted For: Tech Skillz

v/tech

beta all round verse here

flow was beta punches were beta, creativity, everything basically, funny ass punches rite here, good job tech....no doubt

can y'all return the fav on this battle-
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...58&page=2&pp=15

thanks

pz

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Vote- Tech Skillz

Obviously a case of 2 textcees that are a 2 different levels.

Flow- Tech Skillz. More consistent, better structure. TaShay had some bars that seemed a bit stretched in places, flow wasn't as consistent.

Punches- Tech Skillz. More original punches, harder hitting, often times coming off of a personal, or leading to one. TaShay had some alright punches, but they were fairly generic.

Personals- Tech Skillz. He had them, TaShay didn't.

Multis- Tie. Nothing overly-impressive from either.

Wordplay- Tech Skillz. He had it, TaShay didn't.

Tech Skillz obviously is at a different point in his game, TaShay isn't as developed as a textcee. Tech, you should look into doing audio as well, just cuz of your flow structure.

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blah...up.....up up and away....get to voting people..

Voted For: Tech Skillz

too easy... tashay.... ya need help home gurl.... i can tell that you are fairly new to spittin ya rhymes... ya style is extremely premie and sounds more like nursery rhymes than an actual hardhitting battle verse.... no connecting punches... no complexity in ya lyrics... no originality....

tech's rhyme was and punches were definitely put together a lot better form the setup to the closing.... with that said, i still didn't see any lines that made me go "OHHHH!!" ... also, ya had quite a few stretched lines... but o verall a much better drop... find someone on ya own le vel to battle next time... this was too easy

i battle anyone who wants to battle.....i don't check out there stuff before we battle.....

Voted For: Tech Skillz



IP:

You Ain't Number One, I'm Racin This Punch To Put You To Rest
So When We Say You Got The A Cup....
...We Only Mean The Ones On Your Chest!!
Girl, You Wack, I'm Keystylin my Way Through These Lyrics!!
When You Clap At Your Lips It Only Means Another Guy Hit It
The Fact I'll Pop You Off Faster Than A First Time In Bed
Cause You Get Down With Biting........
.....Sorta Like The First Time You Gave Head!!
Tashay You Ain't Shit Homegirl, Just A Bitch In A Black Book
I'm Pickin Up Rolls, About 22.....
......Just To Get A Chance To See How Your Ass Look!!
One More Bar And Your Outta The Park....I'm Rippin You Up
So When You Say You Ain't Givin A Fuck....
....Its Just You Tired From Giving It Up!!

Vs.

Nothin

V/Tech Skillz