Tashay vs Buddy Boi
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate
No Other Bullshit


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-28-06 at 02:35 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

TaShay has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-06 11:36 PM.

Buddy Boi has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-06 11:37 PM.

Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it
because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it
Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted
i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it
cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut
i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but
Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts
bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut
leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut
time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw

*wait on Tashay to drop verse*

hurr rup shorty............

damn ma verse is weak.................
Tashay G/L

Thiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..//
the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..//


Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..//
Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..//

Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..//
I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..//

Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..//
Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..//

G/L shorty............................................ ...

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Voted For: TaShay

*shudders after reading this battle* this was the worst thing I've forced myself to read here in quite some time... 1st off Buddy just because you're battling a girl does not mean just call her a slut and say you'll fuck her... it's old, it's played, and it never truly worked... your entire verse was bullshit A tipical "OH shit I'm battling a girl" .... *SMH* with that being said... Tashay if you're gonna rumble with the big boys you really need to step up ya game... if Buddy had a attacked you like you wee another guy... he'd a handed you your ass... but as is

Punches: Tashay
Personals: None from either of you
Creativity: Nothing
Complexity: Nothing
Wordplay: None and no attempts at it either
Multies: None... and Tashay 1st 2 lines don't rhyme @ all
Enjoyment: No nothing

Vote: Tashay

PS: and don't even bother getting upset and trying to battle me... I'll smash dat ass... just take the crit and improve

thankz....im really workin at it...i know i suck lol.....but thankz 4 seein potential...

Up..

I Mean Damn, Can I Get A Vote Plz........up. Gosh....

...........................................same here

uppin da gottdamn post....lgeesh....thiz is exactly why people need to vote on battles...

agrreed...........................................

Voted For: TaShay

TaShay:
hiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..//
the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..//
3/10 - Weak Opener.
Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..//
Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..//
2/10 - Stupid.
Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..//
I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..//
5/10 - 2nd line was good, first didnt even rhyme with 2nd.
Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..//
Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..//
2/10 - Weak Closer.
12/40

You had a pretty weak verse, you lacked strong punches and good wordplay, your vocab was also weak.



Buddy Boi:
Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it
because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it
3/10 - Weak Opener.
Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted
i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it
2/10 - Weak.
cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut
i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but
2/10 - Lame.
Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts
bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut
2/10 - Stupid.
leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut
time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw
2/10- Whack.
11/50

You had a very weak verse, your punches were shitty as hell, your personals were fake, you need to work on your rhymes.


OVERALL - I give my vote to Shay becuz she had the better rhymes and her punches where hitten harder. She also used a better flow. Buddy you used stupid ass punches becuz she was a girl, and they were whack as fuck! You need to use more creative shit and up your vocab.


Vote - TaShay

Return the Fav is sig sometime please!

why thank you...for the critique.... Keep it Moving...

Voted For: Buddy Boi

ok some lines neav rymed fo both of ya but i voted fo bubby cus he had the punches and thats why u guys were even every wheres else elavate for both of u

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Voted For: Buddy Boi

i have to say he took this.................just had a better flow and harder punches.......ain't got time to break it down more

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all hell naw...votes dont count.....shyt aint explained......

Voted For: TaShay

This is was a horrible battle, buddy, you have no understanding of battling...you had horrible structure, very few, and weak metaphors...no personals what so ever, the punchlines were god awful....that was a disgrace of a verse...

TaShay, yours wasn't much better, but you alteast did show some understanding of battling....the first bar....showed some significance in the metaphor/punchline area....the 2nd bar was a little better, the third bar was better than the first two, and the closer was horrible....don't get me wrong, none of this was good....but you def outshined buddy....

lmao....i now see that my closer, was the wackest thing i coulda ever keyed...haha....but thankz though for the critique...much appreciated...


damn, this shoulda been a 3-0 KO.... but newayz..uP!

hugh...............................up up and away..

Voted For: TaShay

Thiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..//
the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..//
^
Nah, it didnt even rhyme boo....

Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..//
Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..//
^
Thats a little bit better...you gettin warmed up..

Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..//
I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..//
^
Sort of played, but it made me laugh soe....pretty decent yo.

Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..//
Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..//
^
Nah, I wasnt feelin that...


Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it
because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it
^
No lol


Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted
i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it
^
Nope, Didnt even make sense to me lol


cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut
i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but
^
You sound like Bizzarre from d12 or somthin.


Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts
bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut
^
Thats not even rhymin...your basically just cussing at her, thats lame, yo.

leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut
time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw
^
that didnt rhyme, and it was weak anyway.

Not the strongest battle right here....
Tay...girl, your structure game is messed up shorty, Dont seperate bars like that....ya some dope ideas in your rhymes tho, Just need to work on hittin your oppenent harder with some killa punchlines.

Buddy, To me your verse was just like a joke or somthin'...Didnt have no punches, no flow, no personals...I didnt like anythin atall in your verse

Tay got this by landslide..
good lookin homegirl, stay up.

o well i lost......................
i hate text...........

Come on and finish this shyt....ill return favorz....plz...thankkz..

Voted For: TaShay

This was a terrible battle. I give TaShay my vote, and probably tha win because she had the most and better disses in there.

TaShay-I think you had better disses in your verse that your oponent, thats why I gave you my vote but I think you should work on better wordplay and more creativitie and actually making since in your verses. I seen you repeatin tha same thing. Only time it would be ight is if your verse was actually nice and your bars were making since. I saw way too many sexual lines in there that werent hard hitting at all. Any below average person on this site would've won this battle.

Buddy-First off, you had a major chance to take this battle and run with it, but you didnt. I read TaShay's verse first and wasn't feeling it so that gives you wayy more credibility because I want you to come at least a lil bit harder so I can give you my vote, but you didnt do that. I think you should just come up with good disses. That's tha only thing battling is, is dissing your oponent. Fuck what these people on this site say, I been on this site since 2003, (different name), and I been in over 50 battles and won 75% of those because I thought of some creative disses. Your opening line should always catch your voters attention, if your first couple bars are wack, thats guna say a lot...and alway spread out ur verses, because it makes it look like thats hella reading to be doing, and no one wants to be reading. Just come up with disses and make embarass your oponent as good as you can, and I garuntee you will always come out on top.


Overall-This was a weak battle in my opinion to say tha least. I think you both should work on disses and creative wordplay.