kumar vs marvolousjay
 

Battle Rules:

10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-28-06 at 12:20 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

kumar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 12:05 PM.

blah...

dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition

MaRVOLOUSJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 12:10 PM.

im on writer's but hey...

came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

MaRVOLOUSJay:
came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
6/10 - Niice Opener.
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
3/10 - Gay Lines Suck!
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
7/10 - Niice Punchline.
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
2/10 - Didnt get it?
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched
4/10 - ok closer.
22/50

I have seen you do better, but this was still iight, you had a ok flow, used some ok punches in there too.


kumar:
dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
4/10 - ok opener.
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
3/10 - Wasnt feelin it.
i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
4/10 - OK.
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
5/10 - ok punch.
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition
5/10 - ok closer.
21/50

You had an ok verse, it flowed pretty well, you had some decent punchlines in there, some ok rhymes.

OVERALL: This was a close battle right here, both EMCEE"S came with some pretty decent shit, nothin' jaw droppin but still good. Marv gets the vote becuz he had one real niice line in there, and the other guys nothin really was stickin out!!

Vote - MARV

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

return the fav in sig please, battles are gettin' slept on latly.

.................................................. ..........................

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

hmmm kumar didn't strat actually throwing punches and stop bragging till his 6th line... and even then the concepts were played out... there really weren't any good personals in this battle at all... but I thought that marv was more creative with his punches...

Punches: Marv
Personals: Marv by a hair
Creativity: Marv
Complexity: None to speak of
Structure: Nothing to speak of
Enjoyment: N/A

Vote: MaRVOLOUSJay

.................................................. .................................................. ............

Voted For: kumar

i voted fo kumar he had better punches and flow and nicer endoffs

marvjay ur ending lines were hard to understand but u can do better ok tructure though

no hate vote kumar

rtf to my battles

uppin dis man can we get some real votes

This was feedback posted for kumar
 

pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

.................................................. ..........................................

What do you mean Real Votes?.. what was wrong with mine?.. besides the fact Im goin' to get it removed if someone dont return the damn favour soon!!

Nevermind, you did return the fav, I will shut the fuck up now. :)

lmaooo^^^......................................... .................................................. ..

Voted For: kumar

came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
ok no diss
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
played concept weak
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
nah
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched

last 2 bars was aight but the rest wasnt even worth a mention




dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
had me laughin
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
decent
i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
aight multis, no punch
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
aight
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition
good ending

nice verse couple of hard punches nice ending i thought you won this one preety easy

RTF i got a couple of battles that need voting plez!!

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
^Ha...Sorta Deja Vu.....Good.

came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
^Nice.lol.

play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
^Str8.

vs.

this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
^lol.

i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
^Stretched.Good.

Overall/=Good Battle.....Kumar,Your Punches were Good..But Stretched and Forced at times..Marv Came Funny and Sum Good Personal On The name...

Marv Gets My Vote..

.................................................. .................................................. .............

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
^
that was kinda childish, but I liked it...nice, man.



for real, this was a weak ass battle right here, Marv I expected more of you, only quotable bar is the one above

marv took it with eaze tho, Kumar...step ya game up...no hate, but its all too plain and simple....need to elevate before you bark with the big dogs, nah mean...


Marv took it

1

Voted For: kumar

alright, had some decent drops from each side, had some pretty dope lines but heres the breakdown, kumar, ya 3rd line, it shouldnt be used early, because he just started readin ya first and nothin was startin to get good yet, but u had some nice wordplay and vocabulary, dope line was your line i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces

marvjay, u had some decent bars but i saw some played out ones and some wack ones. like the daffy lines ? wasn't really funny or dope, and givin head to guys.. never was dope. my faovrite bar was your last one.. it sorta stuck out to me but thats it..

my vote goes to kumar.. peace

^^^ur just dumb if u didnt get da daffy line

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp p

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
^^decent opener
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
^^^good
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
^^^good
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
^^^Decent
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched
^^^Good closer

dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
^^^no
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
^^^Decent
I have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
^^^No
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
^^^played
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition
^^^Good closer

V/marv....he got this one to me he came wit more punchs...an consistentency...in his verse it didtn have played lines...kumar work on ur punchs an try to shortin the structure...RTF>...Honestly on my battle wit Ace